Kukai 9 - Open Topic Favorites
Global Haiku • Millikin University • Fall 2010
searching for fate Brittany Falardeau (2) |
in the black-light Beth Ann Melnick (3) |
stomach |
the calm Ally Staudenmaier (3) |
alone in my apartment Beth Ann Melnick (2) |
riding a motorcycle Bret Henderson (3) |
first frost Jessica Golden (4) |
pull it out by Ally Staudenmaier (2) |
falling asleep Eddie Pluhar (8) |
winter park Laura Scoville (5) |
single Stephanie Helfgott (8) |
bundled up Samantha Miles |
midnight espresso |
black spider |
sharing Madeline Knott (6) |
baring it all |
sailing the seas Ally Staudenmaier (4) |
beneath the stars Kelsy Whitney (5) |
blindfolded Eddie Pluhar (6) |
pondering |
my one and only Kale Ewing (4) |
around the table Beth Ann Melnick (5) |
wishing upon stars |
safe in his sweatshirt Beth Ann Melnick (4) |
disney cup Brittany Falardeau (5) |
inky branches |
beneath the watcher’s eyes, |
clothes strewn Madeline Knott (5) I love this poem because this is exactly how most first dates are. You want so badly to impress the boy, so you try on a million outfits so you’ll look just right and you don’t have time to hang your clothes back up. You’re rushing around trying to get ready, so you barely make it out of the door on time, and after the date you have a beautiful pile of clothes waiting for you to hang back up when you get home! Kelsy |
inspiration
When I read this poem, I was immediately brought back to a situation in high school in which one of my friends was cutting herself. I didn’t know about it for almost three years (we were only friends the last few months... very complicated and not particularly relevant, so I’ll spare you), but it had progressed to the point where she had stopped cutting her wrists because they were so scarred and had moved on to her legs. She cut to stop the other pain, and as a cry for help. I don’t know if you have heard of the website To Write Love On Her Arms or not, but it is a website that is supposed to help people cope with the pain and stop cutting. Bre didn’t use it for that... she used it as a support system to keep cutting - she got inspiration from it. I’m pretty sure this is not how the poem was intended, but the memory it brought to mind was very specific to me. Katie |
walking home Kelsy Whitney (5) |
underwater seaweed Katie Coletta (2) |
pondering |
walking in Eddie Pluhar |
late night, at the door Kale Ewing (4) This reminds me so much of my relationship with my high school sweetheart. The night that we became official he wouldn’t even hold my hand let alone consider kissing me. The time seemed to drag by so slow until I finally got that first kiss, which is what this haiku reminds me of. It was over Christmas break and we had been dating for three months and he still hadn’t kissed me. We were at his basketball tournament and they had just won the tournament. After the team gathered for the winning picture and he gather all of his gear, he walked over to me and he grabbed my hand. We slowly walked out to the car and I had this feeling that something was different tonight. It was almost as if he was nervous about something and I knew that it was something more than just having finished a huge holiday basketball tournament, I just didn’t know what exactly it was. We were going back to his house for dinner and it was the quietest car drive imaginable. By this point I was positive something was wrong and I started assuming the worse and I was so nervous as we pulled into his driveway. He turned off the engine and we both sat there for a few seconds but it seemed like forever. We finally got out and headed to the door and soon as I got there he reached out and grabbed my hand. He slowly and gently turned me around and he leaned in and lightly kissed me on the cheek. All of the nervousness quickly flooded from my body and I relaxed and just smiled. Something as simple as a small kiss on the cheek can mean so much. I liked how this haiku is so simple and can so easily display the innocence and simplicity of the first kiss or kiss on the cheek. Sam Miles |
bells ring Eddie Pluhar (5) |
tipping |
dancing in the rain Kelsy Whitney (7) |
late night snack Laura Scoville (5) |
dancing |
tiny shoes Katie Coletta (6) |
check the clock… Beth Ann Melnick (2) |
three ghosts at the door Brittany Falardeau (9) |
grocery store |
got lost |
Trick or Treat |
whistling |
little girl Samantha Parks (4) |
house party Stephanie Helfgott (2) |
poking |
sexy nurse |
falling |
attempted break dance Brittany Falardeau |
zombies aren’t real! |
we come to a stop |
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