Global Haiku Tradition • Kasen-Renga • Fall 2010
Two Tiny Hours Out of a Life November 21, 2010 by Katie Colletta, Kale Ewing, Brittany Falardeau, Jessica Golden |
Two Tiny Hours Out of a Life wet leaves cover the ground beneath twisted vines home from college in my mind the moonlight reflects gray bank of clouds • underneath grandma's stitches warm butterflies float summer breeze from my favorite swing the sound of chain link a single rose • ticket to the moon like far flung stars his number still in my phone book once, twice, three times you loved i lean back in my chair sleeping farmer • memory of her pear blossom heart gentle carpet giggles tv shuts off missed opportunity her "i love you" glancing through the albums • holding me a piece of confetti eleven lonely candles car doors slam not picked today a water drop • so still from old jeans and shirts like the triangle flag a single leaf fallen bow—as i stand fog seeps through • • •
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About our Kasen-Renga... We all decided to be on facebook at 10:00 on the first Sunday of break. It took us two full hours to do the project, and doing it online was an interesting idea. People revised haiku on their own before sending a new message (most of the time), so it removed some of the pressure of someone sitting next to you and watching you think through your options. In that way, I think it afforded us some more freedom. Like I said in class, I enjoyed seeing the different directions people took the flow of the kasen-renga based on the differences in our surroundings. We are constantly influenced by where we are, and being physically separated and simultaneously working on the same project gave the haiku a different feel and drive than they would have if we had been in the same room. Katie C. |
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