Global Haiku Tradition • Kasen-Renga • Fall 2014
Black Canvas November 21 and 23, 2014 by Natalie Zelman
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Black Canvas
slowing to 45 a chill spirals of frost the ballet opens the galaxy's a stage falling star's brushstroke • night sky a little girl a quarter inside my story I decide middle school terrified • everyone wants the same thing the homeless man remembering the days dinner left uneaten popularity she wears her armor • 28th birthday growing older and still solitude in a crowd her far-off gaze a playful tug the sea monster • another meal misty wind gusts through the fog thinning air the final frontier soaring in the air • terminal velocity ground fast-approaching instant contact dreaming awake the day is not over a song bursting forth • • •
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The writing of this Kasen-Renga was an adventure. Beginning on November 21st, we wrote the first twenty-five links during an extremely long car ride using sketchbook paper and phones, and it was completed with paper and pencil on November 23rd. We took some liberties with the traditional Kasen-Renga rules. Traditionally, in the fifth, thirteenth, and twenty-ninth links, the moon will make an appearance and in the seventeenth and thirty-fifth links, there will be an allusion to blossoms. Deciding that we wanted to make our own rules, we incorporated references to Star Trek in place of the moon and eighties movies references instead of blossoms. We hope that it is as enjoyable to read as it was for us to write.
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November 26, 2014
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