11 Matching Contest - Seasons Favorites
Fall 2015 • Millikin University
rain drops keep falling Courtney Ginigeme |
springtime rain Jeffrey Davis |
crystal blue eyes Aundrea Marsh |
the little fingers Lauren Bartel |
rain drops keep falling |
crystal blue eyes |
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crystal blue eyes top quarter champion |
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TOP half Chamption crystal blue eyes
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bottom quarter champion the dream of flying |
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the dream of flying |
under the stars |
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moonrise Jeffrey Davis |
the dream of flying Randy Brooks |
honeysuckle Courtney Ginigeme |
under the stars Aundrea Marsh |
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TOP half champion crystal blue eyes
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CHAMPION crystal blue eyes
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summer night BOTTOM half champion |
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a shiver down my spine Garrett Mayberry |
packing away Aundrea Marsh |
dragonfly settles Randy Brooks |
summer night Nicholas Scarpinato |
packing away |
summer night |
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summer night top quarter champion |
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BOTTOM half champion summer night
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bottom quarter champion dad reaches back |
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the rain falls |
dad reaches back |
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downpour Courtney Ginigeme |
the rain falls Lauren Bartel |
dad reaches back Nicholas Scarpinato |
the grand oak Garrett Mayberry |
© 2015, Randy Brooks Millikin University. All rights returned to authors upon publication.
Reader Responses
rain drops keep falling Courtney Ginigeme |
springtime rain Jeffrey Davis |
crystal blue eyes Aundrea Marsh |
the little fingers Lauren Bartel |
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Being a guy who's dating a girl with blue eyes, I can personally relate to this haiku. I wish I had written this, but I've written about blue eyes before, so it's not that big of a deal, haha. The way that the eyes are described combined with the reaction to the eyes is a major factor as to why I love this haiku so much. "Crystal blue" just says piercing to me, as though her gaze slices through anything that comes into their line of fire. And then the speaker says that they "forget what (they were) saying", which supports the utter power of the effect that these eyes have. Nick This was a very relatable haiku. The imagery of the crystal blue eyes that were breathtaking was excellent. I can imagine myself looking up from something and not even having any words to say because their eyes are so beautiful. Sierra |
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moonrise Jeffrey Davis |
the dream of flying Randy Brooks |
honeysuckle Courtney Ginigeme |
under the stars Aundrea Marsh |
a shiver down my spine Garrett Mayberry |
packing away Aundrea Marsh |
dragonfly settles Randy Brooks |
summer night Nicholas Scarpinato |
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The feeling of heat is so vivid in this one. I feel the heat of summer but then I feel the heat between two people. Sierra |
downpour Courtney Ginigeme |
the rain falls Lauren Bartel |
dad reaches back Nicholas Scarpinato |
the grand oak Garrett Mayberry |