8 Matching Contest - Dream Haiku
Fall 2015 • Millikin University
reliving our love Courtney Ginigeme |
asleep yet awake Alex Zalar |
“five more minutes” Nicholas Scarpinato |
day after Christmas Randy Brooks |
reliving our love |
“five more minutes” |
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“five more minutes” top quarter champion |
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TOP half Chamption lost in wonderland
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bottom quarter champion lost in wonderland |
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soaring over clouds |
lost in wonderland |
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my pillow damp Sierra Birdsell |
soaring over clouds Garrett Mayberry |
when I wake Lauren Bartel |
lost in wonderland Jeffrey Davis |
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TOP half champion lost in wonderland
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CHAMPION lost in wonderland
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he says BOTTOM half champion |
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I lay in bed and Courtney Ginigeme |
mother always said Randy Brooks |
jolting awake Lauren Bartel |
jolting Aundrea Marsh |
I lay in bed and |
jolting awake |
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I lay in bed and top quarter champion |
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BOTTOM half champion he says
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bottom quarter champion he says |
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he says |
a face I can’t remember |
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body sleeping Jeffrey Davis |
he says Aundrea Marsh |
a face I can’t remember Nicholas Scarpinato |
one million firefly kisses Nicholas Scarpinato |
© 2015, Randy Brooks Millikin University. All rights returned to authors upon publication.
Reader Responses
reliving our love Courtney Ginigeme |
asleep yet awake Alex Zalar |
“five more minutes” Nicholas Scarpinato |
day after Christmas Randy Brooks |
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This is too true for the typical college student. We have all probably experienced this feeling at some point in our collegiate career so far when we have to wake up early in the morning for class and as our alarm goes off early in the morning, we hit the snooze for five more minutes of sleep. Then, for some ungodly reason, sometimes we wake up and there has been an alarm going off for the past couple hours. That feeling in the pit of your stomach is the absolute worst. Garrett |
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my pillow damp Sierra Birdsell |
soaring over clouds Garrett Mayberry |
when I wake Lauren Bartel |
lost in wonderland Jeffrey Davis |
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I really like this haiku because of the play on words. The reference to the movie Alice in Wonderland is also very clever since that movie is based on a little girl's dream. This haiku really captured the essence of a dream and makes me want to hear more about it. I think it also leaves every reader with the question of which Alice this person found. Courtney |
I lay in bed and Courtney Ginigeme |
mother always said Randy Brooks |
jolting awake Lauren Bartel |
jolting Aundrea Marsh |
body sleeping Jeffrey Davis |
he says Aundrea Marsh |
a face I can’t remember Nicholas Scarpinato |
one million firefly kisses Nicholas Scarpinato |