Haiku to Edit 1
Global Haiku • Millikin University • Fall 2016
Cut / Add / Replace / Rearrange
Four edit actions: cut unneccesary words, add context (setting, time), replace for better images, & rearrance the furniture.
finding myself would be
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no one wants help
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goody two shoes
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freshly sharpened pencils
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nametag on
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adolescence
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the red blanket
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beside one Another
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she trades
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Easily distracted?
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wind and sand
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vacant pool
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long days
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weathered teddy bear
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eye contact
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lights out gossip
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forgot a towel
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empty seat at the
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