Haiku Kukai 2 Favorites
Global Haiku • Millikin University • Fall 2016
bookshelves line the walls |
snare drum cracks |
oboe plays A |
books askew |
rap bass pounds |
food I'm greedy with Alyssa Becker (10) |
running to class Ryan Sikora (3) My favorite haiku from Kukai 2 was the one about the train and being late for class. Although I have never been late for class because of the train, I can definitely attest to the fact that the train is annoying, especially having to wait for it. For instance, about a week ago, I was just getting done with having class from 11-3:15 and all I was looking forward to was finally getting to rest for a little bit, but instead I got stuck waiting on a train that took about 10 minutes to finish. Another time that the train is a pain is when you're trying to sleep. I don't know if there has been a night since I have gone to this school that I haven't been woken up in the middle of the night by a train and it is extremely annoying. Morgan |
a loving mother |
twin beds pushed Anna Harmon (3) |
her braid catches Shannon Netemeyer (5) |
bride and bride Savannah Riestenberg (4) |
rings of water Shannon Netemeyer (10) This haiku stuck out to me as my favorite because it really reminded me of personal experiences that I have had. The rings of water seem to me that there was a long conversation or that they spent a great deal of time together. I also like this haiku because I can see it as being sad that someone has left and missing the time that you spent with the. However, I can also see this haiku as being bitter that someone has intentionally left you and all you have left of them is the rings on the table, which could damage a wooden table. Anna I read this piece as having two different meanings. First, I see a table on a porch under a dim light in the summer. A car drives by on the road in front of the porch, and I am sitting at the table. There are literal rings of water on the table, presumably from cups with drinks that were there. In a deeper |
hot dogs and brats |
the yellow grass |
the puppy wags his tail Alexsenia Ralat (10) |
shifting shadows Anna Harmon (6) |
twin sized bed |
holding up a frame Shannon Netemeyer (5) I like this haiku because I can relate to it. Until this past month, my grandparents lived on an old dairy farm just outside of my hometown. Though the dairy had closed years ago, they still had a large white barn on the property. I had lots of fun times at that house, whether that was helping my grandmother in her garden or playing hide-and-go-seek with my brother across the sprawling, wooded property. When I read this haiku, I picture myself looking at the house the day they moved out. When I looked at the empty house, I remembered all the happy times my family had there. I will definitely miss that house. Owen |
girls night out— Alyssa Becker (5) |
the text messages I don't delete Anna Harmon (7) |
plastic bag |
the red blanket |
head pounding Alyssa Becker (7) This haiku makes me think of how rude I've been to people when I've been suffering from migraines. Its just a blinding pain that makes you think that there's nothing else. It makes speaking unbearable and listening impossible, in some people it makes opening their eyes a nightmare. That's pretty much what I can see and relate to in this haiku. It just makes me think of how painful it is to be a migraine sufferer. Doug In the muggy flatlands of the Midwest, storms build for days before you see a single cloud. The barometer climbs as people sag, vivacity drained out of them drop by drop via perspiration. The weight of the weather flattens, destroys any ambitions. The arrival of the storm itself, wind kicking up and clouds bursting, is bittersweet relief. To stand outside during it is sublime pleasure, gleeful in the inherent cheekiness springing from defiance of years of admonitions to stay dry. Even then, the storm is confusing, gales sweeping feet in all directions, rain blinding all sight. In the middle of it all, lightning strikes, thunder making bones quake. The lightning is terrifying, but its illumination is thrilling. Suddenly, the loneliness of the storm dissipates. Kaia This haiku really gets to me because it reminds me of whenever I would argue with my ex-girlfriend. No matter what I had to say on my side of the argument, she would find a counter to make my argument so insignificant. It always frustrated how small she made me feel, especially because not many people were able to beat me in arguments. Her voice struck me like the worst kind of lightning at the time, but most of the time it was for the best and I learned from certain mistakes and it made me a better person. I am just an unusually stubborn person so having to change my mind on a topic has always been hard for me. Ryan |
the hallway is quiet Anna Harmon What I think of when I read this poem is the fact that I love absolute silence. When it's quiet I feel more relaxed and at ease with myself. I don't really like large crowds or loud noises in general so I related to this a lot. Whenever no one is around, I can breathe. Alexsenia |
trying to hide Anna Harmon (7) |
the laughter down the hall Anna Harmon (7) |
grandma's house |
Little Eddie Alyssa Becker (4) |
at the mall for more clothes Alyssa Becker (2) |
empty seat at the |
glasses stacked |
spring— |
beside one Another |
and what can Kaia Ball I really like this haiku because it is so open for interpretation. I find it very tragic. It speaks of a tool, whose only job is to fix things, who is broken and therefore cannot do its only job. It is rendered useless. This is the literal interpretation, but if you take it more metaphorically, it brings an even more tragic tone. I relate to this by thinking about the one thing that I feel I do well and gives others joy, then imagining losing that trait. I would be so lost. This is why I love this haiku, because it evoked a deep emotion in me. Shannon |
rippling brook |
the cliff, steep |
number two pencil Caroline Lodovisi (6) When reading this haiku, I find it very relatable. It reminds me of the first week of school. You go into all your classes for the first time, feeling very prepared and motivated. You have your school supplies and books, and you have a great feeling about the new year. By the end of the first week, you feel overloaded, stressed, and hopeless. This is the sense I get from this haiku. The student goes into take his test, prepared, with his sharpened number two pencil. However, his feelings get thrown for a loop when he finds out that you can only use pens on the exam. I like this haiku because it simply describes the common feelings of a college student. Renee |
sitting under the Jordan Comish (9) This haiku presented clear and beautiful imagery to me. I imagined a couple sitting under a clear sky gazing at the stars. However, one of the two is more invested in the other's eyes than the night sky. It shows how much beauty can not only lie in what is all around us, but also in what is right in front of us. As a romantic, I found this haiku very appealing and beautiful. Caroline |
no school |
laughing when we Jordan Comish (2) |
out of Inky black Douglas Sherrill (2) |
boating with friends |
on the horizon |
sunny day |
unsteady feet Kaia Ball (3) I really enjoy this one because I makes me think about a very close friend of mine and the adventures we would go on back home. She is small and fragile, but she would never turn down a challenge. She always claimed trees and blazed trails and plunged into new exciting experiences. Although her feet were unsteady, she still climbed. Alex |
tucked into blankets Anna Harmon (6) |
sober as always Alexander Erickson (4) |
lonely apartment Owen Pulver (5) This haiku reminded me a lot of my sophomore year living in the Woods. I often found myself alone in the apartment making dinner. It was always a kind of sad and empty feeling for me. The food was just a sort of routine and a way to feel less unwanted. This haiku was probably not meant to feel quite so sad, but in my experience this was always a sad time. Without the laughter of my roommates my apartment felt hollow with just the bubbling of my sad dinner to keep me company. I find myself tasting the saltiness of the noodles, feeling the texture in my mouth and the steam on my face, hearing the slurping and bubbling water, smelling the cooked noodles, and seeing the dark kitchen. I really like how this manages to appeal to all of the senses while still telling a story. Savannah |
four boys Ryan Sikora (6) |
microwave pizza |
early bird Savannah Riestenberg (6) |
I dance with Ryan Sikora (8) This haiku practically threw me back in time, to classic dancing and ballrooms full of fancy parties of people. I especially enjoy that the author used the word belle, as it makes me think of a beautiful lady dressed up in her ballooned ball gown, perhaps in a southern state. These old-time dances of waltz used to be a popular high class social event, reminding me of the scene in The Sound of Music when the children sing goodbye to all of their party guests. I wish I could go back and live in that time! Alyssa |
empty cans on the floor |
hellos |
lights out gossip |
a drunk stumbles in Ryan Sikora (11) |
empty bottle on the table |
I wake to urban sunrises Kaia Ball (9) |
the paper bag hangs Alexsenia Ralat (2) |
building a wall |
weed stench Alexander Erickson (5) |
crumbling bricks Owen Pulver (2) |
making my bed Morgan Vogels (4) |
goldfish swim Owen Pulver (10) I liked the haiku because it reminds me of when I was little and my brothers and I wanted a dog. At first my parents did not allow us to have a dog so they took us to a pet store to look at the fish. We each got to |
just one more Matthew Vangunten (4) |
forgot a towel |
covey of quail |
blown kiss Alexander Erickson (7) |
finger pricks Shannon Netemeyer (5) |
one last good weekend |
he senses Caroline Lodovisi (7) |
long days |
a rose Caroline Lodovisi (3) |
dirt and rocks |
windows open Savannah Riestenberg (4) |
dark blue sky Alexander Erickson (5) I enjoy this poem because it takes me to a lake sunset with my mom, she always loves going down there to take pictures of the blue sky. It makes me feel relaxed. Jacob |
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