Haiku Attempts 3
Global Haiku • Millikin University • Fall 2016
the smell of cinnamon as I Jordan Comish (4) |
Oldest of fi- no, si- Kaia Ball (5) |
on the highway Douglas Sherrill (4) |
dark night |
under the caress of Jordan Comish (5) |
chicken on a raft Jordan Comish (2) |
thick sauce Savannah Riestenberg (3) |
tye dyed tees Shannon Netemeyer (4) |
scuffed leather Owen Pulver (5) |
a blue lanyard |
sun already set Matthew Vangunten (4) |
beer pong table |
music plays from |
meal with my Jordan Comish (5) |
empty mug sits |
Pink Floyd Douglas Sherrill (4) |
trying to finish |
butterflies in my stomach |
dress up: Anna Harmon (5) |
college: |
blood red paint |
Saturday night |
tickle in my throat |
rustling in a bush |
in a perfect world Morgan Vogels (10) This haiku automatically soothes me. I can imagine myself sitting on my aunt's dock out on her small lake just looking around me at the simple beauty of nature. As my legs sewing off of the dock, I feel like a child again. I look below me to try and catch a fish in the act of swimming with his friends. Overall, I am just happy. The air around me is warm and I turn and smile to my mom who tells me it's my turn to try and test my luck on the fishing pole. Alyssa |
sunlight |
stroll outside Alyssa Becker (5) |
driving home Matthew Vangunten (8) |
the puppy Matthew Vangunten (8) I like this haiku because it reminds me to take a step back and appreciate what is around you. The puppy in this haiku reminds me of going somewhere with my little siblings (5 year old twins and a 3 year old). Everything is interesting to them and it can be hard to reign them all in to get stuff done. This haiku reminds me of that interest and curiosity about everything around them. Anna |
past midnight Tuesday morning Kaia Ball (10) I like this haiku because it creates a very strong sense of peace for me. This haiku really makes me think of those times where your relish in you alone time and have some room to breathe. I think a reason that this haiku had so many votes in our kukai is because it is a feeling that everyone can relate to, and because it can have so many different meanings behind it. I think that this is one of those haiku where a lot of the meaning comes from the individual memories and experiences that the reader has. Anna |
ceramic curves xxxxx This haiku creates such a vivid image for me without directly saying what's happening. The reader is able to create their own image in their mind, and eventually use the senses described in the haiku to picture washing dishes. We all wash dishes but I wonder how the mental images change from person to person! Anna |
fall storm Douglas Sherrill (4) |
petals falling one by one Douglas Sherrill (3) |
homeless man Owen Pulver (5) |
car to car |
first impressions |
a foreign language Ryan Sikora (8) |
patterns on my hand Shannon Netemeyer (3) |
earthworms |
hairspray |
rain falls and she stares |
finding your old sweatshirt Anna Harmon (6) |
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