Haiku Kukai 4
Global Haiku • Millikin University • Fall 2016
hole in one Savannah Riestenberg (3) |
dad offers me pizza Alexsenia Ralat (10) In class, people were interpreting this poem as a college student coming home and catching up on recent events that they have not experienced together. However, I interpret it differently. I imagine that the dad orders pizza to catch up with his daughter, and then the daughter confesses a surprising update. After this confession, I can imagine the two conversing awkwardly over the pizza, with the pizza standing by as a witness to this changing relationship. Alyssa |
shopping with mom |
fingers gracefully Alexsenia Ralat (11) The situation I imagine in the haiku happens all too often to me. I make some clumsy mistake which causes something horribly wrong to happen. Out of embarrassment, I always place my hand behind my neck nervously, and try and say the sincerest apology I can. I always feel bad about these situations because something that I either was ignorant/clumsy about or too lazy to double check always ends up hurting someone else. Although I learn from my mistake for that situation, I always end up being clumsy in some other way. Even though I say college is about making mistake, I would rather refrain from being clumsy all the time. Ryan |
gorgeous fall day Alyssa Becker (13) I really like this one. Just reading it makes me feel so relaxed. I can just picture a beautiful spring day with a soft breeze rolling through the trees, the smell of flowers filling my nostrils. It's just so calming. Jordan |
last warm day |
white t-shirt Renee Sample I don't interpret this poem as being very literal in meaning. I think the white t-shirt represents a persona or front that the writer puts up, and to say that it was the same one worn yesterday indicates that the person regularly wears a sort of social mask. This is probably to keep people out, because they were hurt in the past. Jordan |
walking down Caroline Lodovisi (3) |
"Kids!" Kaia Ball (9) |
a pill vial Alexsenia Ralat (9) |
cracking skin |
first date |
I bounce the baby Kaia Ball (2) |
something needs to change Alyssa Becker (8) |
plastic pumpkins |
math major Kaia Ball (8) This haiku is also just humorous to me. As a math major, many people call me crazy for being good at, or even enjoying math. When I read “can't make things/add up”, I see the other people's confusion on their faces and in their voice. They tilt their head to the side as if they are observing a new specimen, the mathematician. Their voices have doubt in them, as if they don't believe what I tell them when I tell them how much I enjoy math. I see this haiku as a broken question that's asking, “You're a math major? That just doesn't make sense! Why would anyone want to pursue that?” Ryan |
October wind |
bowl on the stoop |
pulling on my jeans Alyssa Becker (12) |
monkey paw Jordan Comish (7) |
fall breeze through Jordan Comish (7) |
time; so much to kill Jordan Comish (6) |
the fairy gasped Savannah Riestenberg (4) |
late night pizza Morgan Vogels (6) This haiku really makes me laugh. I can just imagine a group of friends circled around a pizza box, or many of them, on the floor talking about absolutely nothing important. The last line makes me think the conversation is about nothing because it is not important to talk about pepperoni. To me, these kinds of night are the best because you never think about anything that is going on outside of your circle of friends, so you truly are at peace and as relaxed as possible. Ryan |
new parents— Anna Harmon (7) |
dark funnel clouds Caroline Lodovisi (4) |
my only friend Alyssa Becker (7) |
digging into Shannon Netemeyer (7) |
night rain |
moon pulled Anna Harmon (11) This piece reminds me of It's A Wonderful Life, so that's part of the reason it's a favorite. It also just gives an overall romantic feeling that anyone can resonate with, if they've been in love. Jordan |
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