Mido Versus Kuro Matching Contest - 5 - Fall 2016 • Millikin University
beady black eyes Caroline Lodovisi |
open heart surgery Alyssa Becker |
lifeguard instinct Alyssa Becker |
typical Caroline Lodovisi |
open heart surgery |
lifeguard instinct |
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lifeguard instinct top quarter champion |
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TOP half Chamption lowering him into the ground
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battery dead |
lowering him into the ground |
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battery dead Savannah Riestenberg |
fuel light on Anna Harmon |
mowing the grass above my dog's grave Shannon Netemeyer |
lowering him into the ground Shannon Netemeyer |
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TOP half champion lowering him into the ground
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CHAMPION the sun may orbit again
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the sun may orbit again BOTTOM half champion |
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dark tombstones Alexsenia Ralat |
she loves me not? Ryan Sikora |
the fish Morgan Vogels |
unwanted and forgotten Matthew Vangunten |
she loves me not? |
unwanted and forgotten |
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unwanted and forgotten top quarter champion |
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BOTTOM half champion the sun may orbit again
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bottom quarter champion the sun may orbit again |
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passengers on a train |
the sun may orbit again |
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passengers on a train Jordan Comish |
I nurse my beer Owen Pulver |
elixirs of all kinds Alexander Erickson |
the sun may orbit again Alexander Erickson |
© 2016, Randy Brooks Millikin University. All rights returned to authors upon publication.
lighting up the night Shannon Netemeyer |
painting a night sky Alexsenia Ralat |
light reflects Savannah Riestenberg |
the dance floor Ryan Sikora |
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the water boy Alyssa Becker |
big shoes Caroline Lodovisi |
Cheshire grin Alexsenia Ralat |
windblown hair Morgan Vogels |
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my favorite blanket Alexsenia Ralat |
midnight Owen Pulver |
bright eyes Alexander Erickson |
on dad's shoulders Ryan Sikora |
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old socks Alexsenia Ralat |
skating on ice Randy Brooks • |
no welcome party Jordan Comish |
bags and clothes Matthew Vangunten |
© 2016, Randy Brooks Millikin University. All rights returned to authors upon publication.
Reader Responses
beady black eyes Caroline Lodovisi |
open heart surgery Alyssa Becker |
lifeguard instinct Alyssa Becker |
typical Caroline Lodovisi |
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I love this one. I guess that I'm just a sucker for this kind of poetry. The kind that's super metaphorical and has a little bit of heartbreak. I love poems about heartbreak. Not the obvious kind, though. I love the kind that is filled with underlying emotion and depth. The kind that kind of hit you in the gut with sadness. I also love the happy heartbreak poems just to let you know. I don't just like sadness. Alexsenia |
I really relate to this haiku, not as much from the view of a lifeguard, but as someone planning to go into a field devoted to lifesaving. I must be able to accept that I can't save everyone, I will lose patients, and I will have to be able to help people get through that. I will also have to be able to deal with those situations within my own psyche. Doug |
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battery dead Savannah Riestenberg |
fuel light on Anna Harmon |
mowing the grass above my dog's grave Shannon Netemeyer |
lowering him into the ground Shannon Netemeyer |
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I'm pretty sure that anyone who has experienced loss can relate to this. on some level, when you lose someone or something close to you, a piece of you will go with them. it's this feeling of loss, the hollow, aching pain that really connects you to them. if you truly ache as though part of you has been removed, then they really did, and still do, have meaning to you. Doug |
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dark tombstones Alexsenia Ralat |
she loves me not? Ryan Sikora |
the fish Morgan Vogels |
unwanted and forgotten Matthew Vangunten |
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This haiku makes me so sad, which is very impressive for just 9 words. I love my cats so much and it is just heart breaking to think about all of the animals that do not have the same life as my pets. I wish there was a way to end the suffering that the mass population of dogs and cats face in shelters, but nothing that has been tried works. I also like this haiku because until the last line you could be talking about a person who feels unwanted by their family. Savannah As someone who worked in a dog shelter for a long time, I can understand this. the sheer sadness and contempt of that place, can make you feel so depressed. When there's so much pain and sadness in one place, it's easy to see that that's really what the poor creatures in there are feeling. Unwanted and forgotten, and sadly, too many people can end up feeling like this too, as they leave their homes and move out into the big scary world, it's easy to end up feeling insignificant. Doug |
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passengers on a train Jordan Comish |
I nurse my beer Owen Pulver |
elixirs of all kinds Alexander Erickson |
the sun may orbit again Alexander Erickson |
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I have no idea what this haiku is about, but something about it is very beautiful. I think the word choice of “orbit” and “rising” makes a big difference in the overall flow of the haiku. I think the meaning is related to the fact that we will keep living life, but nothing new or exciting will happen. It almost sounds like the person is stuck in a rut and everyday is exactly the same. The ambiguity of this haiku is I think what I like most about it. Savannah This haiku reminds me of my stars and galaxies class. When I look at the sky I am reminded that I ma nothing but a little speck on a speck of a planet in one tiny part of the solar system. Most people would let that discourage them from trying to make an impact on the world. For me, it just puts things into perspective: there is so much about the universe that I do not know about. I am humbled by the fact that I am only a minute part of this gigantic wonder. One of the weirdest things to think about is that we are so far away from the sun and other stars that it truly could have stopped shining but the light has not yet stopped reaching us. That's kind of creepy to think about. Alyssa |
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lighting up the night Shannon Netemeyer |
painting a night sky Alexsenia Ralat |
light reflects Savannah Riestenberg |
the dance floor Ryan Sikora |
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the water boy Alyssa Becker |
big shoes Caroline Lodovisi |
Cheshire grin Alexsenia Ralat |
windblown hair Morgan Vogels |
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my favorite blanket Alexsenia Ralat |
midnight Owen Pulver |
bright eyes Alexander Erickson |
on dad's shoulders Ryan Sikora |
I like this haiku because I feel like it is very comforting. It reminds me of nights in with my friends. The sober, weekend nights where you simply make popcorn, watch movies, and squeeze as many people as possible on the couch. This haiku is relaxing, and I feel like it puts the readers at ease. Renee |
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old socks Alexsenia Ralat • |
skating on ice Randy Brooks • |
no welcome party Jordan Comish |
bags and clothes Matthew Vangunten |
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I like this haiku because I feel like it captures the nervousness but excitement of the new father. “Skating on ice” could represent the father dancing in excitement. It could also represent the father falling all over the place, trying to carry all of the new accessories that come with having a baby. Renee |
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This haiku gives me the feeling of disorganization but then comfort. There is something bittersweet about move in day. You are saying goodbye to the people you love from home but are too excited to be sad. These are the days that you are reunited with friends and bombarded by hugs from them. While the day is hectic, it is a great day. Renee |
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