Christmas Haiku Kukai 7 Favorites
Global Haiku • Millikin University • Fall 2016
I'll be home soon Alexander Erickson (4) |
ringing bells Charlie Gillaspie (4) |
surrounded by darkness Savannah Riestenberg (11) This haiku really reminds me of peacefulness and hope. Specifically, it makes me think of Vespers here at Millikin, and the themes and ideas its shares with all who come to see. The spectacle of light . . . it's just so heavenly and warm. Jordan I love this haiku because it puts me directly back to Vespers, the christmas musical celebration here at Millikin. The scene of the opening of Vespers is one I will not forget, and this haiku captures that well. Alex |
skinny mall Santa Owen Pulver (4) I like this haiku because it reminds me of the movie Elf. It reminds me of the scene where Will Ferrell is extremely excited for Santa to come to the department store he is working at. He stays up all night preparing the store for Santa, and then when Santa comes, it isn't who he wanted to see. He calls Santa a liar and says, “you smell like beef and cheese, you don't smell like Santa!” There's another scene where Santa is African American. It made me laugh because we have a perception of the Santa figure as being a heftier white male so it's sort of comical when one of the ones in the malls break the stereotype. Morgan |
Christmas morning Shirley Brooks (4) |
open attic door Alyssa Becker |
decking the big blue halls Caroline Lodovisi (5) |
break of dawn Jordan Comish (9) I really liked this haiku because this explains one of my favorite moments in the winter. I love to wake up in the morning to see an untouched blanket of snow. Over time people will step in it and mess it up until it becomes slush. When the sun shines on the blanket of snow the snow has a sparkle to it that is really cool as well. Overall, this haiku is very calming and something that is not able to been seen whenever you want. Matthew |
cookie party Randy Brooks |
three cookies on a plate Morgan Vogels (4)
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behind another door Matthew Vangunten (5) |
Christmas morning Morgan Vogels (8) |
listening for the reindeer, Alyssa Becker (7) |
night so silent Shannon Netemeyer (12) I think this haiku does a really good job of putting the reader in the setting of a new snowfall. I always find evening snow to create a kind of loud silence. Although snow does not actually make much sound, its presence somehow cancels out all other sounds, which is a feeling I love. This especially seems to happen when it is dark out. Watching snow beginning to fall just before bed always makes me so excited to see how much there will be when I wake up. This haiku gives me that peaceful excitement of watching the snow just before sleep. Savannah This haiku captures the peacefulness of Christmas time. When the world is silent and the animals are hibernating inside just like my family. As I sit on the couch and look out at the peaceful white snowflakes fluttering down under the streetlights, I hear nothing. The silence is beautiful and suddenly I think of the song “Peace on Earth.” I wish that the world could be this peaceful all the time. Alyssa
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around the tree Matthew Vangunten (13) I like this haiku because it reminds me of my experience in my household. Decorating the Christmas tree is something that my family does together. Over the year, my mom has purchased ornaments for my dad, brother, and I as Christmas gifts. In this way, our Christmas tree is full of new and old ornaments alike that represent our family's different hobbies and obsessions over the years. I like that this haiku reflects the faces of nostalgia of every family member as the tree is plugged in for the first time of the year. Renee I chose this as my favorite haiku from kukai because I think that it captures the anticipation of Christmas. I think that this is such a big part of Christmas for a lot of people. The excitement of Christmas is one of the elements that make the holiday season such a special time of the year. I also really like this haiku because you can really see people coming together and gathering around the Christmas tree. The holiday season really brings people together, and I think that this haiku does a wonderful job of capturing that. Anna |
wiping snow off boots Doug Sherrill (4) I like this haiku because it reminds me of my own grandmother. Whenever there was a heavy snow, my brother and I would put on our boots and winter coats and head over to our grandparents' house to shovel off their driveway. When we got done, we would go inside and our grandma would have make us a big mug of hot chocolate with cookies just out of the oven. This haiku makes me think of all of those winter days. Owen |
my cat knocks Alexsenia Ralat (4) |
Christmas eve Shannon Netemeyer (4) |
twinkling bells Caroline Lodovisi (7)
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opening her mouth Morgan Vogels |
making the bed Randy Brooks |
tiny dorm room Owen Pulver (4) |
the season of giving: Anna Harmon |
snowfall Owen Pulver (5) This haiku makes me see my growth, and lack thereof, as I've gotten older. I remember standing at the end of my driveway with my brothers freezing our butts off for twenty minutes waiting on the bus, but when the snow fell, oh god did we get covered in it just playing and laughing. flash forward to last year, and I would bug my friends by starting snowball fights to and from meals and class, and I'm going to bet I will this year too honestly. It just brings back a beautiful nostalgia alongside a realization of how childish I still honestly am. Doug |
too cold to leave the house Alexander Erickson |
Merry Christmas Alexander Erickson |
sleigh bells ringing Renee Sample (4) |
perfect glass ornament Anna Harmon (4) |
Winter green pine Charlie Gillaspie (10) I think this haiku really captured the essence of Christmas, at least how my family celebrates Christmas. This was my double vote favorite for kukai 7. First, I loved the simplicity of the haiku. The image I saw was a large pine covered in fresh snow in a clearing of some kind; this was a simple and serene image in itself. I also loved the smell and color that comes with this haiku. I could instantly smell the pine tree and see the forest green and white together. All the images created in this haiku are summed up in the last line, making it feel complete and content. Caroline |
bar at Christmas Caroline Lodovisi (5) |
distant sound of cars Jordan Comish (6) |
dark and quiet Shannon Netemeyer |
hanging ornaments Matthew Vangunten (3) |
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