Haiku Attempts 6
Global Haiku • Millikin University • Fall 2017
Christmas Kukai |
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binging Christmas movies |
illuminated church |
snow bells ring Mackenzie Martin (8) |
father hangs the ornament Mia Klek (3) |
hands grasped around my waist Trey DeLuna (5) |
12:00 |
matching pajamas Maya Dougherty (6) |
christmas morning |
the ugly ornaments Maya Dougherty (13) |
unwrapping the care |
the children race downstairs |
snow falls outside Lucas Chatterton (2) |
before the sun, |
shiny red wrapping paper |
snow glistens |
choir concert Lane Casper (5) |
the kids try their best Lane Casper (7) |
helping mom decorate |
Christmas shopping |
twinkling lights Kalli Farmer (3) |
no presents under the tree |
middle of the night Benjamin Maynard (5) |
home from school Benjamin Maynard (5) |
Mom's mashed potatoes Benjamin Maynard (3) |
family Christmas carols Austin Taylor (5) |
12 foot Christmas tree |
standing under the mistletoe Austin Taylor (8) |
I open the door |
kitten's first winter |
snow falls slowly |
seasons change |
snowball fight Alex Herrera (3) |
Halloween looms |
an ornament shatters on the hardwood Lane Casper (4)
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Fall Break Haiku |
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fall break |
broken cooler |
their song echos through the house |
can't help Benjamin Maynard (4) |
43 years of marriage Alex Herrera (9) |
thinking I can sleep in |
roommates fooling around |
prickly beard Austin Taylor (7) This haiku grew on me the more I read it, and slowly became one of my favorites. I like how funny it is, and the unique personification of the pillow against his face. It is relatable, because nearly everyone goes to a sort of silly place at times, directly before they fall asleep. It's like the narrator is so exhausted that he is having this humorous dialogue between himself and the pillowcase going inside his head. Mackenzie
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pouring rain Trey DeLuna I'm not quite sure who the author of this poem is, but I love it because of the image of the warm coffee shop in contrast with the cold rain outside. I immediately am overwhelmed with the smells of coffee, and I can almost hear the clinking of mugs and chatter inside. Mackenzie
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waking up Maya Dougherty (7) I really like this haiku first because I am ready for Thanksgiving break and Winter break to be home and off of classes for a little while. I also like not having to set an alarm before you go to bed and you wake up to mom cooking breakfast for you. There is no better feeling and this haiku brings that warm, homey feeling. Austin |
sisters whispering Maya Dougherty (7) This haiku was beautiful in its simplicity, and reminded me entirely too much of my childhood with my sister. I hear loud laughs, fighting, and inside jokes when I read this haiku. Mackenzie |
warm feet |
annual ping pong tournament Mia Klek (3) |
all six of us |
flapper dress twirls Mackenzie Martin (2) |
walking through campus |
back to the future Mackenzie Martin (5) |
quick conversation |
apples from August rotted Kalli Farmer (3) |
little flame |
holding her breath |
come home to an empty house |
winding country road Georgia Martindale (5) This was a happy, easygoing haiku. I imagined a truck that is puttsing down the road without a care in the world. The driver is not in any rush and is just enjoying himself with the windows down in his truck. This haiku makes me think of my favorite place in the world, which is a little town called Elgin, Iowa. We have a farm out in the country with winding roads and it is always a relaxing time when we visit the farm. Austin |
rain pouring Georgia Martindale (4) |
bonfire night Kalli Farmer (4) |
singing in the choir Georgia Martindale (4) |
red lights |
soft supple leather |
children splash each other Georgia Martindale (3) |
night in Chicago Kalli Farmer (3) |
under the moon Madeline Delano (4) |
warm kitchen Lane Casper (3) |
we discuss Madeline Delano (7) |
excited seven-year-old |
crooked grin |
hole in my shoe Lucas Chatterton (2) |
mom's tight embrace Lane Casper (6) I really like the warmth that I feel when I read this haiku. I love being home for dinner especially when my mom is cooking. She makes the best food no matter what it is. I can also hear my mom calling me to dinner from being downstairs playing videogames with my brother. I just like the good feelings this haiku conveys. Austin |
three remotes Lucas Chatterton (7) |
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