Haiku Attempts 10 Toxic - Favorites
Global Haiku • Millikin University • Fall 2021
1 toxic waste |
2 creeping, crawling India Guerrero (6) I really like this haiku because of its simplicity and effortlessness. Boys will be bugs is such a cool and creative line that I can only wish to think up of. Nico Velazquez, Fall 2021 |
3 tearing open wounds Shay Buchanan (5) |
4 treating everything Shay Buchanan (5) |
5 lock the door so Shay Buchanan (7) |
6 rotting shell of a human India Guerrero (8) |
7 self worth destroyed |
8 “I’m not telling anyone that” |
9 apathetic eyes Trinity Pesko (12) |
10 we are what |
11 train whistle Trinity Pesko (9) |
12 acid |
13 he returns to his house Nico Velazquez (6) |
14 what else is there? Nathan Gallop (8) |
15 burn book Reece Brown (7) |
16 only ever wanted |
17 saying what Priscilla Sabourin (6) |
18 they say they're taken |
19 she ignored the |
20 he manipulated Emily Nicholas (12) I thought this piece was cool. You can interpret it literally however you want. My understanding of it is that “he” manipulated “you” into manipulating “me.” So “his” goal was always to manipulate “me,” and he used “you” in order to do it. That’s about as well as I can explain that… whoever “he” is, he’s an ass. Nathan Gallop, Fall 2021 |
21 no words Shay Buchanan This one spoke to me. I think flipping someone off has generally lost its effect in our society; friends flip each other off as a joke, to be funny. It’s not something you generally see someone actually do when they’re mad. But on the rare occasion the gesture is used for real, it is QUITE effective. It’s just in those moments when you’re so angry that you literally cannot make the words in your head come out in a way that makes sense, so you just put them all into your finger and that’s all there is. Not a great way to resolve an issue, but effective in getting your feeling across. Nathan Gallop, Fall 2021 |
22 month six |
23 scabs on my fingers Maya Gomez (7) |
24 learning my business Nathan Gallop (12) |
25 keeping my distance |
26 car air freshener |
27 couples massage Bailey Banks (13) This is a perfect analogy of what it is like to be in a relationship with someone you love that is still toxic. Also, the use of the word “bent” around your finger instead of being “wrapped” around your finger makes the haiku seem more toxic and more forceful. You get the sense that the narrator was forced to do a lot of things they didn’t want to do. Maybe they were manipulated in their relationship. Trinity Pesko, Fall 2021 |
28 I Emily Nicholas (9) |
29 respect Alison Durham (10) |
30 (un)beautiful Alison Durham (5) |
31 they’re not people India Guerrero (9) |
32 birthday party India Guerrero (6) |
33 an angel’s wings |
34 two years later |
35 white mouse |
36 bitter winter morning India Guerrero (15) WOW. The misdirection in the first two lines is amazing. If it weren’t in the “toxic” kukai collection, then I would never have seen the last line coming. I also really liked the use of the word “bitter.” Is it the winter that’s bitter? Or the person who’s being given their own medicine? Both, probably. Nathan Gallop, Fall 2021 |
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