Matching Contest - Love & Relationships - Janaury 2017 • Millikin University
meet me there Sarah Hoadley |
she whispered closely Nathan Heppermann |
twirling around Sydney Brangenberg |
a crowded room I see the one Bayleigh Tabor |
she whispered closely |
twirling around |
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twirling around top quarter champion |
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TOP half Chamption constant bickering—
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bottom quarter champion constant bickering— |
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flowing hair |
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eyes meet Quentin Key |
flowing hair Quentin Key |
constant bickering— Sydney Brangenberg |
bad first judgment Sydney Brangenberg |
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TOP half champion constant bickering—
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CHAMPION & Grand Champion constant bickering—
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in the sky BOTTOM half champion |
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after years Rachel Asifiwe |
no! Bayleigh Tabor |
losing her Nathan Heppermann |
window closing Quentin Key |
no! |
window closing |
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window closing top quarter champion |
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BOTTOM half champion in the sky
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bottom quarter champion in the sky |
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the presence of you |
in the sky |
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the presence of you Sydney Brangenberg |
backseat kiss Nathan Heppermann |
your name on my heart Nathan Heppermann |
in the sky Rachel Asifiwe |
© 2017, Randy Brooks Millikin University. All rights returned to authors upon publication.
Second Round
never seen . . . Rachel Asifiwe |
that special someone Nathan Heppermann |
on the bed Rachel Asifiwe |
valentine’s day Bayleigh Tabor |
never seen . . . |
on the bed |
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never seen . . . third quarter champion |
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2nd Round Champion same old routine
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fourth quarter champion same old routine |
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rose petals |
same old routine |
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like the wind Sarah Hoadley |
rose petals Bayleigh Tabor |
50 years ago today Sarah Hoadley |
same old routine Sydney Brangenberg |
Reader Responses
meet me there Sarah Hoadley |
she whispered closely Nathan Heppermann |
twirling around Sydney Brangenberg |
a crowded room I see the one Bayleigh Tabor |
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Both of these haikus have a fairytale like feeling. They are both simple in their words, yet paint a picture of two people in a crowded room who meet, the one. Sarah |
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eyes meet Quentin Key |
flowing hair Quentin Key |
constant bickering— Sydney Brangenberg |
bad first judgment Sydney Brangenberg |
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These are my favorite matching haikus from the matching contest 2. The two haiku matches perfectly and have the same idea in my point of view. In the first haiku, I imagine that it is about a couple that has been together and finally they reach to the goal (marriage, old age or death). No matter their problem or argument, they are together. I also imagine myself in the situation that I am dating my friend with whom we use to fight before. In the second haiku, I imagine two persons who meet and one of them have a bad judgment for the other. As time goes on, he or she started falling in live with the other person. We never know where love comes from and where it can come from. Rachel |
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after years Rachel Asifiwe |
no! Bayleigh Tabor |
losing her Nathan Heppermann |
window closing Quentin Key |
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window closing Quentin Key |
in the sky Rachel Asifiwe |
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Im not keen on crying because it doesn’t really solve anything in the end. So it’s hard for me to support this one but it may touch other differently. And I’m not sure if I like the top one more so because of me being the author or the fact that it is more relatable to me. I also don’t really like being told how to feel about something I’d rather my emotions be of my own choosing. Quentin |
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the presence of you Sydney Brangenberg |
backseat kiss Nathan Heppermann |
your name on my heart Nathan Heppermann |
in the sky Rachel Asifiwe |
These pair nicely, since they both show that someone is missing the other. In the first one, it is as if he can still feel her presence because she has just left. But there is a promise that he will see her again, and that is reassuring. In the second haiku, it seems as though this person is thinking back to a happy memory that was shared with someone that is no longer there. This other person may not even be in the person’s life anymore. Sarah |
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in the sky Rachel Asifiwe |
the presence of you Sydney Brangenberg |
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This matchup occurred in the second round of the matching contest. I thought that these haiku paired better with each other than their respective first round matchups. I also thought that both of these dealt with the same concept. A little bit of sabi can be recognized in the two of these poems. They both deal with a sense of loneliness and the loss of someone through the ending of a relationship or dramatic event. Either way, they both deal with the presence of the lost one lingering and out of reach from the person in pain. The second haiku focuses on being more explicit with what is being described. This is done so by using descriptive words such as “presence” and “lingers.” Both of these words relate to the first haiku by the picture that the author paints. You can see all the colors of the sunset, or the colorless darkness of the sky at night…both pictures could present an image of a beautiful lost loved one, or the darkness that is there without them present. Either way, in this picture, the reader can see the loved one’s presence as it lingers in the sky. The first haiku does not give a sense of hope, rather just mourning and sadness that is present in the third line. The second haiku contrasts the first, as it is more hopeful in seeing the lost loved one again, and at that, soon. Nathan What I really liked about this match was how well they went together and gave a similar message. I like the directs words they chose to describe the person such as using you and her. These are strong pronouns and where they were placed bring a connection to the reader. The feeling of losing a special person in your life in both of the haiku’s was amazing to see how well they connected without even really trying to connect to anything. Also the person who is doing the action of either missing the person or crying. They just go so well together which is crazy how it happened. These two are my absolute favorite of the whole matching simply because they were both elegantly written and were simple not over complicated. Bayleigh |
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Second Round
never seen . . . Rachel Asifiwe |
that special someone Nathan Heppermann |
on the bed Rachel Asifiwe |
valentine’s day Bayleigh Tabor |
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like the wind Sarah Hoadley |
rose petals Bayleigh Tabor |
50 years ago today Sarah Hoadley |
same old routine Sydney Brangenberg |
It was really hard to pick which of the pairs were my favorite because they were all so well matched! In the end I picked these two. They both give you a really nice, clear image of the loss of this love. They could both sort of be taken as their love dying and leaving them forever. On the other hand, they could also both be about this love that come about but then fell apart, a sort of short-lived romance. The first one I sort of see more as a whirlwind romance with the second being about the death of a loved one, but the are both ultimately about loss of some sort so I thought that they were very good matches. Sydney |
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