06 Matching Contest - Karumi - January 2021 • Millikin University
you smile Allie Bonk |
to live simply Harrison Atkins |
car windows down Allie Bonk |
our toes in the sand Caitlin Marshall |
you smile |
car windows down |
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you smile top quarter champion |
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TOP half Chamption a tadpole amongst the frogs |
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bottom quarter champion a tadpole amongst the frogs |
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truck shaking off the morning |
a tadpole amongst the frogs |
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fresh brewed Ashley Galloway |
truck shaking off the morning Eli Hartsfield |
a tadpole amongst the frogs Mira Burens |
youngest of three Sarah Obert |
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TOP half champion a tadpole amongst the frogs |
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CHAMPION a tadpole amongst the frogs |
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my father BOTTOM half champion |
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packed ice rink Sam Thornburg |
monkey mind Parag Sachdeva |
home from college Jenny Tullis |
my father Mira Burens |
packed ice rink |
my father |
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my father top quarter champion |
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BOTTOM half champion my father |
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bottom quarter champion I queue |
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beams of light |
I queue |
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beams of light Ron Bond |
squinted eyes peer Caitlin Marshall |
I watch in awe Sarah Obert |
I queue Jenny Tullis |
© 2021, Randy Brooks Millikin University. All rights returned to authors upon publication.
Reader Responses:
you smile Allie Bonk |
to live simply Harrison Atkins |
car windows down Allie Bonk |
our toes in the sand Caitlin Marshall |
I liked this pair, and it was the hardest haiku for me to pick between in this collection of haiku. The delicate nature of the both of them was what drew my eyes to both of them. They both also have very distinct seasons that they embody, winter and spring. I especially liked the way the second was written. I can visibly see the tulip with water droplets over it. Both of these haiku give me cool colors, like variations of purples and blues. Caitlin Marshall, January 2021 |
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fresh brewed Ashley Galloway |
truck shaking off the morning Eli Hartsfield |
a tadpole amongst the frogs Mira Burens |
youngest of three Sarah Obert |
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I liked this haiku because it brought back a lot of memories from my childhood. My family is very animal-friendly, and we would take care of a lot of animals that needed help. So this haiku reminds me of all the animals we took in. |
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packed ice rink Sam Thornburg |
monkey mind Parag Sachdeva |
home from college Jenny Tullis |
my father Mira Burens |
Again, this haiku brought memories from my childhood. When I was little, my dad and I would go skating a lot. This haiku reminds me of a specific moment when I was on the ice. My brother and dad were skating around, and I was gliding into the middle of the rink when I fell and landed on my knees. My younger brother’s friend (who was much older- maybe around 20?) came and asked if I was alright and he held his hand towards me to help me stand back up. My little brother also plays hockey, so this also reminds me of whenever he would fall down (or get pushed down) while he was playing a game. Allie Bonk, January 2021 |
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I absolutely love the way these two Haiku represent this coming-of-age type of affection. Both are sentimental to me, but in very different ways. One shows the transition from youth to adulthood, through the way one’s elders begin to treat them differently. I remember when I first started to drink comfortably in front of my parents, and it was the oddest experience ever. I also love the way both of these Haiku represent a fatherly- figure, or a paternal type figure. The second Haiku is particularly sentimental to me, because I saw my own father with my late dog. The way my dad treated my dog, especially towards the end of her life, is something of wonder to me. I remember overhearing him speak to her, and when I went to travel abroad my Junior year, he would send me videos of the two of them on walks. Both Haiku represent a way older men are capable of connecting with animals and youth. Sarah Obert, January 2021 |
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This haiku reminds me of my dad and his close relationship with our four cats. We have a black cat named Charlie (he is the sweetest cat ever, a dream cat), and he and my dad are buddies. My dad wakes up at 5 am every day to feed the cats and give charlie treats. |
beams of light Ron Bond |
squinted eyes peer Caitlin Marshall |
I watch in awe Sarah Obert |
I queue Jenny Tullis |
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I loved this haiku. It is beautifully written. It paints in my mind the image of a grandparent playing the piano and the grandchild, all grown now, watching. It’s that sense of comfort you get. It’s the realization that those are the same hands that held your tiny body. It’s amazing. Ashley Galloway, January 2021 |
I enjoyed this haiku. I have never liked the same music as my family. I’m always the one that says, “Oh, I love this song” and they all look at me like something is wrong with me. I never win by the way. Ashley Galloway, January 2021 |
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