01 Matching Contest - Healthy Mind- Global Haiku • Millikin University • January 2023
beach waves Charly Warlow |
it was one of those Larissa Olympe Senga |
white orchids Larissa Olympe Senga |
drinks & laughs Isabel Vincent |
beach waves |
drinks & laughs |
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drinks & laughs top quarter champion |
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TOP half Chamption drinks & laughs
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bottom quarter champion coffee brewing |
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eyes closed |
coffee brewing |
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sitting on the mat Charly Warlow |
eyes closed Lauren Adcock |
I close my eyes Brad Spradlin |
coffee brewing Lauren Adcock |
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TOP half champion drinks & laughs
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CHAMPION running low
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running low BOTTOM half champion |
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dryer clunking Conor Reynolds |
the furnace Madison Foreman |
putting my phone down Lanie Bacon |
running low Trevor Voss |
the furnace |
running low |
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running low top quarter champion |
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BOTTOM half champion running low
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bottom quarter champion *deep inhale* |
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criss cross applesauce |
*deep inhale* |
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criss cross applesauce Salat Al-Nurridin |
legs crossed and eyes closed Lanie Bacon |
deep breath in Addi Sargent |
*deep inhale* Salat Al-Nurridin |
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02 Matching Contest - Healthy Body - Global Haiku • Millikin University • January 2023
stretching for the set Lanie Bacon |
dropping the weight Brad Spradlin |
out of breath Conor Reynolds |
dripping sweat Trevor Voss |
stretching for the set |
dripping sweat |
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dripping sweat top quarter champion |
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TOP half Chamption dripping sweat
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bottom quarter champion The Gym: |
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The Gym: |
grocery store |
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The Gym: Isabel Vincent |
at the gym Charly Warlow |
first workout Isabel Vincent |
grocery store Lauren Adcock |
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TOP half champion dripping sweat
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CHAMPION dripping sweat
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haiku olympics BOTTOM half champion |
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a quiet old man Brad Spradlin |
a man sits Brad Spradlin |
pitch black Trevor Voss |
moonlit yard Salat Al-Nurridin |
a quiet old man |
pitch black |
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' a quiet old man top quarter champion |
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BOTTOM half champion haiku olympics
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bottom quarter champion haiku olympics |
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sweat in my eyes |
haiku olympics |
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sweat in my eyes Madison Foreman |
7, 8, 9 . . . 10 Salat Al-Nurridin |
chin ups . . . Salat Al-Nurridin |
haiku olympics Larissa Olympe Senga |
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Responses 01 Matching Contest - Healthy Mind
beach waves Charly Warlow |
it was one of those Larissa Olympe Senga |
white orchids Larissa Olympe Senga |
drinks & laughs Isabel Vincent |
I really enjoyed the pairing of beach waves, and the summer breeze. I think they complement each other quite nicely, and give me very similar vibes. Only one is about sitting alone, and one is about enjoying the company of another person. The second pairing I chose was the one about the dryer clunking and the furnace buzzing. I primarily like the use of sound in them, and how these specific home appliances cut through the silence. What made me choose these two pairings is that I feel like they could be put right after one another and make sense, and I get the same vibe from them. Coleman Klimek, January 2023 |
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This is one of my favorite matches from the matching contest since it shows both sides of the story. Isabel’s is the good memories of a relationship, romantic or familial, and remembering those times. While Larissa shows the sadness of reminiscing on memories when a loved one leaves or passes. White orchids represent innocence and also are used to nonverbally say “I miss you” in a relationship. The petals flipping can be seen as a symbol of losing innocence after losing a loved one. Madison Foreman, January 2023 My favorite one was drinks and laughs, I will replay tonight, a thousand times. I like this one because I find myself reminiscing nights out with my friends quite often and looking back at good old times. Trevor Voss, January 2023 |
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sitting on the mat Charly Warlow |
eyes closed Lauren Adcock |
I close my eyes Brad Spradlin |
coffee brewing Lauren Adcock |
Both of these haiku make me think of peace and calmness. I can relate more to the first one because of how I feel when I go to the gym. It is a feeling of relief when I walk upstairs and sit down to stretch. Going to the gym is my time away from everyone and gives me a break from my crazy life. The second haiku in this match allows me to easily picture what is going on and imagine it myself. Isabel Vincent, January 2023 |
This haiku gives me a tired and relaxed feeling. I see myself on a rainy day waking up on the weekend and slowly drifting back to sleep. For some reason I feel like I am wearing a hoodie and am very cold. My room is comfortable and dark which makes it easy for me to fall asleep. Lanie Bacon, January 2023 |
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dryer clunking Conor Reynolds |
the furnace Madison Foreman |
putting my phone down Lanie Bacon |
running low Trevor Voss |
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I enjoyed these two haiku, as I felt that they greatly complimented each other. They both emphasize the importance of reconnecting with oneself. When we compare and contrast both their first lines, “putting my phone down” and “running low,” those two lines complement each other, as they both emphasize having low energy and taking a break from social devices. The transition from the second to the third line of both haikus re-emphasizes and suggests disconnecting with technological gadgets and re-connecting with oneself. I enjoyed the word play in the second haiku: “running low on battery” can also be someone running out of energy and not necessarily a phone about to die. These two haiku are a representation of how two differently worded haiku can be used to still mean the same things. Larissa Olympe Senga, January 2023 I loved the match of these two haiku. I think taking time to disconnect and unplug from our phones is so important. Electronics have consumed our everyday world and sometimes we get so caught up in our phones that we forget to take a look at things happening around us. These haiku are a perfect example of taking a break and enjoying time alone to take a break and be present in the moment alone. Charly Warlow, January 2023 |
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criss cross applesauce Salat Al-Nurridin |
legs crossed and eyes closed Lanie Bacon |
deep breath in Addi Sargent |
*deep inhale* Salat Al-Nurridin |
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After reading this haiku, I took the steps stated. In lines one and two it reads “deep breath in” and “deep breath out”. I often do this when I need a “mental reset” as mentioned in line three. This tactic reminds me of calming down when I have feelings of irritation, anxiety, or anger. Overall this haiku gave me feelings of relaxation and peace that everything will be okay. Lanie Bacon, January 2023 |
I think this was a good match in terms of them both relating to meditation. Taking slow, deep breaths helps calm me down when things become overwhelming. It is crazy how a few minutes of slow breathing can make such a difference. I also really enjoy the second haiku because of the humor in it. The punctuation and the line breaks are funny and I think many people can relate to it because we all have been in this type of situation and had this thought. Isabel Vincent, January 2023 |
Responses 02 Matching Contest - Healthy Body
stretching for the set Lanie Bacon |
dropping the weight Brad Spradlin |
out of breath Conor Reynolds |
dripping sweat Trevor Voss |
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This was another one of my favorite matches from the matching contest since I am just now getting back into the gym after a knee injury last Spring. I am pushing myself and this pairing of haiku represents my story right now perfectly. Trevor’s haiku shows how cardio days go, while Conor’s explains how lifting days in my split feel like. When doing weights, upper or lower body, I push myself and it is very tiring. Being able to get that second wind of energy to finish out a set makes you feel so good and helps you keep the mentality of “keep pushing” like in Trevor’s haiku. Madison Foreman, January 2023 |
The Gym: Isabel Vincent |
at the gym Charly Warlow |
first workout Isabel Vincent |
grocery store Lauren Adcock |
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I think that this pair of haiku was my favorite because I liked how similar they were. Both have to do with an individual knowing that the right decision is to do the healthier thing, but having that temptation to grab or do the non-healthy thing. This relates to me because I struggle with avoiding sweets and going for healthier options. I have a really big sweet tooth, so reading these lets me know there are other people in the same boat as me. Lauren Adcock, January 2023 I thought this match was funny but also such a reality and very fitting for the time of year. The new year brings new resolutions, and many people say they want to work out or eat healthy. The first haiku depicts the struggles of completing that first workout only to go home and each a handful of cookie dough. The second haiku make you think of someone shopping for the healthy food but wanting so badly to grab the cupcakes instead of the avocados. I really enjoy both of these haikus and think that they do a great job encapsulating most people’s new year’s resolutions. Charly Warlow, January 2023 Both haikus mention bad food choices that comes with healthier living. When working out and making better health choices it is very hard to stay away from those tempting foods. I personally laughed at the first haiku because it is something that my teammates do, we always have cookie dough in the fridge and enjoy some after a hard day at the field. Addi Sargent, January 2023 |
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a quiet old man Brad Spradlin |
a man sits Brad Spradlin |
pitch black Trevor Voss |
moonlit yard Salat Al-Nurridin |
The other one I liked is a quiet old man, wearing jeans in the gym, turning back time. The reason why I like this one because It makes me think about an older man trying to get back into shape and he is just trying to better his life. Trevor Voss, January 2023 |
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sweat in my eyes Madison Foreman |
7, 8, 9 . . . 10 Salat Al-Nurridin |
chin ups . . . Salat Al-Nurridin |
haiku olympics Larissa Olympe Senga |
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© 2023, Randy Brooks Millikin University. All rights returned to authors upon publication.