Haiku to Edit 1
Global Haiku • Millikin University • July 2016
Four edit actions: cut unneccesary words, add context (setting, time), replace for better images, & rearrance the furniture.
freshly painted toes
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my kayak gliding on water |
Fireworks |
As we sit on the porch
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lighten lanterns call in |
carousel
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still of the night
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turtles in the mud |
ice creams |
hanging by a thread |
Christmas day
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family
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yellow rain ponchos
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flooding river banks
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early morning
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