Haiku Kukai 1 Favorites

Global Haiku • Millikin University • July 2018

the twilight hour
creeps upon us . . .
we share a forbidden kiss

Vineece Thompson

her irregular breathing
           everyone waits
     death

trails
like tiny models of rivers
the Earth’s veins

Alex Blome

This poem reminds me of my back yard. As often as I can, I try to take my dog on a walk through the woods and we always end up on a game trail of some sort. It always amazed me how much wear and tear animals can create by just walking over the same spot time and time again. I always wondered why did they pick this particular spot? Why didn’t they take the spot that seems easier 20 yards this way? The dog loves them, and his nose goes 100 mph as he pegs back and forth across the trail. It is always so peaceful walking along a trail in the woods, especially when you can find wildlife while you are there. Corey

This Haiku made me think of looking out of an airplane window and seeing the beautiful creation that God has made. To vision this is breathtaking. The higher up you go the smaller the trails look, it begins to look surreal. Looking at the trails and rivers in high altitude looks like tiny veins on the earth’s surface. It’s beautiful sight to see. I often wonder, how was those roads and rivers made. Who knew what roads go where or was they already there when man first came. The earths maze. Angela

the swing creeks
under the shade tree
grandpa cries

moonlight crickets
fireflies lighting up
a glass jar

yarn spirals
out of control
cat paws

Britney Allen

my hair
        identical to my thighs
                   thicc

Angela Dean

bird hiding
quietly
dog’s on point

Mama's backyard
the red tulips
keep growing back

Vineece Thompson

family gathering
always one in the bunch
so loud and obnoxious

Shureda Casterberry

my family gathers
stories being passed around
dove hunt starts now

in the woods
the grey ghost
strikes again

on the bookshelf
my getaway
a different world

Angela Dean

I really like how this one takes me to other dimensions. The bookshelf is a holder of many books, each having their own stories. There are different stories and genres that—once read—can take you on a fantasy trip to its world. Those who are heavily into reading can relate to wanting to escape from their reality by burying their faces in a good book. Vineece

This haiku makes me imagine reading a new book and the different world it can take you too. The bookshelf is filled with all kinds of books that can take you many different places. I imagine being in a book store and reading the back of the book and imagining where it could take me. This haiku makes me imagine the different world each book can take you too. Britney

children playing
at a birthday party
lightning strikes

first day of school
anxious to wear
new . . . ?

Angela Dean

Everyone can remember that feeling the morning school is back in session. The smell of the new clothes your parents purchased the weekend before, that you’ve been waiting to wear all week. It’s really the only time I ever got new clothes as a kid and I had 10 of everything. Deciding what to wear was difficult though because it was all cool. K-Mart had all the coolest and latest fashionables back then. Michael

a picture says
every word
except her name

soldiers’ footsteps
a thankful wife
with an unborn son

Michael Means

I really like this Haiku because I have an undying love and utmost respect for our nation’s Military and families. They make the ultimate sacrifice for the safety of millions whom don’t even appreciate their sacrifices. Joshua

no invitation needed
just video clips
to Mark the moment

Pamela Kennedy

sweet serenade
sung to the evening wind—
no answer

Vineece Thompson

line after line
painting alone
so calm

sunny side
over the horizon
I paint a picture

the flat rock skips
across the still pond,
humming between hops

Michael Means
 
This is such a serene image that I am left with, I feel as though I am back on the pond with my grandparents just walking around looking at the ducks and throwing rocks. Memories that are only that and I wish I could have them back. Joshua

lawn clippings
in the rain
the dog’s house

boxes all around
saying goodbye
to our home

crowded classroom
fan blowing hot air
on the students

lights out
in a hot classroom
the movie plays

Britney Allen

I like the nice arrangement of this poem. It’s understandable, has a definite setting and imagery, and it’s short, sweet, and to the point. I can picture myself in one of the rooms in Shilling being sometimes too hot. It reminds me of the time when I was in class in a room in Shilling, where we were watching a theatrical documentary. The lights were out—leaving only light at the back due to the open windows—and the body temperatures of the classmates created some humidity. Vineece

DIY floors
make me smile
my black thumbnail

J.R. Baird

I love doing DIY projects (when I have the time) and just recently took on putting on a new roof. I appreciate the effort it takes to take on a project at home. To me, when you take on a project by yourself you will have more pride in the project and the outcome that comes. You will always be the only one that sees every little mistake, but the beauty of it is that you will be the only one! I am so thankful for all of my friends and family that are willing to help me through these major projects—almost makes it a family event. Will make me appreciate my home that much more, and make it that much more difficult to ever move away from it! It will make it easier knowing the next family will appreciate it just as much as I did (until they change everything I did!!!!) Corey

I love doing little do it yourself projects. Although working in construction I feel the pain with the black thumb. Putting up cedar lap siding with split-less nails I have hit my thumb several times. It makes you want to shout a lot of bad words and when you do it after the third time you just want to drop everything to give up. Alex

boom
blindsided
250 lbs

Joshua Mysliwiec

tear drops
you
aint worth them

pain already,
before you hit the ground
what a hit

impromptu tantrum
the little boy stares
at fireflies

her only friend
worn and torn
she whispers in an ear

Shureda Casterberry

I imagine a young girl who feels alone and rejected or abused. However, she finds comfort, trust and love in the only friend she's ever known and had; her worn and torn doll or bear. Shureda

her weeping willow
in the rearview mirror
no regrets

flip . . . flop
warm sand nestles between my toes
                                    flip . . . flop

Michael Means

This haiku immediately takes me back to the beach on a hot summer day. I imagine walking down the beach in the hot summer sun wearing my flip flops. I can hear the sound of the ocean and the waves rushing up on the shore and picture the clear blue water for as far as I can see. There is a smell of the fresh salt water and clear air. I can feel the beautiful white sand nestle between my toes as I walk down the beach. This haiku is very peaceful and calming to me. Britney

12 hours a day
payday on
Friday

Joshua Mysliwiec

This haiku was simpler but also an attention grabber for me and I could relate to it. Picturing myself in the haiku. I know the struggle of working long days/nights and long shifts for a paycheck that is so far away. Dannika

band-aids and kisses
don't make it
all better

Shureda Casterberry

This haiku is so relatable. So often we as parents apply Band-Aids or kissing area where a child may have hurt themselves, however realistically eliminate the pain. In life there are some pains that are so deep that there is no Band-Aid or kisses that will ever be able to make it all better. Pamela

Whenever I read this kukai I instantly connected to it. My interpretation of this kukai was the reality of life/situations/things. When we are young and we scrape our knees our mothers would kiss the pain & cover it with bandaids but as we got older we learned their are things that kisses and bandaids cannot heal and in some cases cannot even compare in fixing! Mental pain for example cannot be healed by kisses and band-aids, heartbreak cannot be healed by band-aids and kisses. Dannika

full of tears
and questions
French toast in the car

Pamela Kennedy

nightshift father
in a smokey kitchen
his son shines

J.R. Baird

afraid to be herself
when no one else
is watching

Dannika Beedle

I really enjoyed this haiku. I think it captures what a lot of people in today’s society feel from the pressures brought on by social media and the perfect moments we see in our news feeds. We’re so caught up in “keeping up with the Jones’” that we are often trying to keep up the charade behind closed doors too, just to practice the role. There are a ton of benefits with the internet, social media and the instant ability to connect and share information with others. However, one major downfall (in my opinion) is the pressure of always being plugged-in to the system. Sometimes you just need to turn off the “screens” and live in the real world. All the hype and arguments online fadeout into background noise. JR Baird

This Haiku really hit home. I find myself not afraid of being myself but hiding who I am for work purposes. I’m a very goofy person who loves to laugh. Many people can’t relate or either can’t respect my humor. When I’m at work, I have a professional persona.  I feel like you can’t always let  anybody in your inner space. I also feel that a work environment should not show all of you at work. If a person likes to party the whole office should not know about it. Another thing that came to mind when I read this was I imagined a girl going through depression afraid of being herself. Being yourself is sometimes not excepted. So many people hide behind a different image. This can get serious and lead to self-hate. Angela

a small boy
runs out the door
shoes on backwards

J.R. Baird

the longest mile
ever
she stops midway

Dannika Beedle

oh great . . .
mom and dad
are both here

Corey McKenzie

Immediately when reading this I sense the sarcasm from the writer. I am vision a family gathering or event where two parents that have been divorced and don't get along have shown up to support their children. Although, for some this would be a joyous occasion due to past experiences it does not seem like something the author is looking forward to. Pamela

red heels,
a second look in the mirror
reminiscent photos

two feet
one whole shoe
back to bed

winter night
no jacket
not a care

Dannika Beedle

This haiku reminds me of the power of a positive attitude. If you are in a good mood and excited about your purpose, outside elements like cold weather or a cloudy day don’t affect you as much, or maybe at all. However, if you are in a bad mood you can be hyper-sensitive to your surroundings and easily offended by the slightest nuances. This poem helped to remind me to always be optimistic and positive. Attitudes are contagious, and I want to be a source of good energy, not a “Debbie Downer”. JR Baird

broken umbrella
saturated shoes
puddles I leave behind

dusty leather
old cracks and creases
just another day for the boots

Alex Blome

His boots tell alot about the kind of employee he his. Worn from his hard work, and dependable. The cracks and creases along with the dust, come from hours spent working in the mill. The smell of wet, sweaty leather mixed with grain dust has a distinct odor. Regardless of how they look, they have a job to do and that’s to protect their owner from hazards around the plant. The souls are worn, because he can’t quite afford a new pair. But why would you need a new pair anyway, these are just fine. Michael

his shoes
the blueprint
of his swag

Angela Dean

old fish tank
in my cluttered room
vacant

Vineece Thompson

sad faces
in the revolving door
different children everyday

Angela Dean

ducks in a row
we follow everyone else
just to please the government

Alex Blome

unfinished duties
burnt biscuits out of the oven
Top of the morning to you!

Shureda Casterberry

This is the story of my life. There is always something that needs to be done and some days I feel that there is not enough time in the day to fulfill them. I imagine a mother trying to do multiple things at one time and as if she had any more time to lose, now the biscuits are burnt. Top of the morning to you! This is just the beginning of her day. Shureda

dangling skillets
near the creaky screen door
refreshing breeze

Shureda Casterberry

wam bottles
leftovers memories
in the Impala

first pocket-knife
whittling a stick
in the woods

Corey McKenzie

This one takes me back to when I got my first knife. I would take that knife everywhere I went not just to the woods. My whittling usually consists of just sharpening sticks to a point.  That first knife started a collection of knives I still have today. Alex

the pressure
it’s all up to you
strike three . . .

Corey McKenzie

“rush” hour
seems like hurry up
and wait

Corey McKenzie

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