1 Matching Contest - Seasons - July 2018 • Millikin University
Fall & Winter
willy-worms J.R. Baird |
crisp autumn day Britney Allen |
yellow schoolbus Shureda Casterberry |
first day jitters Corey McKenzie |
crisp autumn day |
first day jitters |
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crisp autumn day top quarter champion |
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TOP half Chamption mellow evening
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bottom quarter champion mellow evening |
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into the forest |
mellow evening |
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with friends Joshua Mysliwiec |
into the forest Vineece Thompson |
mellow evening Dannika Beedle |
the fire burns Britney Allen |
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TOP half champion mellow evening
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PAGE CHAMPION mellow evening |
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warm cookies BOTTOM half champion |
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warm cookies Britney Allen |
fireplace warms Dannika Beedle |
circles carved Dannika Beedle |
moonlit dancers Vineece Thompson |
warm cookies |
circles carved |
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warm cookies top quarter champion |
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BOTTOM half champion warm cookies
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bottom quarter champion the crunch of the snow |
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sliding across the ice |
the crunch of the snow |
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covered in snow Pamela Kennedy |
sliding across the ice Pamela Kennedy |
the crunch of the snow Corey McKenzie |
lonely footprints Pamela Kennedy |
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Summer
hot dogs and beer Corey McKenzie |
hot summer sun Britney Allen |
kids splashing J.R. Baird |
the sun ripples J.R. Baird |
hot dogs and beer |
kids splashing |
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hot dogs and beer top quarter champion |
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TOP half Chamption hot dogs and beer
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bottom quarter champion after all this work |
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after all this work |
wet corn field leaves |
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too hot to work Pamela Kennedy |
after all this work Joshua Mysliwiec |
school bus in july Michael Means |
wet corn field leaves Michael Means |
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TOP half champion hot dogs and beer
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PAGE CHAMPION & GRAND CHAMPION hot dogs and beer
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hot shiny black steel BOTTOM half champion |
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hot shiny black steel Alex Blome |
strawberry garden— Vineece Thompson |
moonlight glare Dannika Beedle |
hot summer days Alex Blome |
hot shiny black steel |
moonlight glare |
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hot shiny black steel top quarter champion |
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BOTTOM half champion hot shiny black steel
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bottom quarter champion swimming pool |
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swimming pool |
a calm green lake |
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swimming pool Vineece Thompson |
floating and wading Michael Means |
a calm green lake Alex Blome |
calm summer night Alex Blome |
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Reader Responses
Fall & Winter
wolly-worms |
crisp autumn day |
yellow schoolbus |
first day jitters |
Fall is my favorite season. I really enjoy this pairing because it takes me back to being a kid and some of my favorite things. The first poem was actually mine. We always rode our bikes to the soccer fields on the edge of town to practice. I always knew when soccer season was approaching because it was always at the same time as when we would start seeing willy-worms on the pavement while walking to school or riding our bikes. My grandparents had several apple trees on their farm. I have a few great memories of my cousins and I standing in the back of his pickup truck with the old-fashioned apple pickers (basically a broom handle with a metal basket attached to the end). We had to stand in the back of the truck bed because we were too young and small to reach the branches from the ground. JR |
My first response to this reminds me of the first day of school. The children were afraid because they didn't know anyone on the bus or what to expect on their first day of school, so they have a face full of tears. My second response is the anxiety that the parents are feeling by sending their child off for the very first time on a school bus and into a classroom full of strangers. The face full of tears are coming from the overprotective parents. Shureda |
This haiku also reminds me the first day of school or possibly the first day on a new job. I imagine feeling anxious, fearful, and happy all at the same time which prevents me from getting any sleep. "my breath in the air", could mean that it was cold that day or that they were hyperventilating because of the excitement. Shureda Every first day of class I always get jitters of how the class is going to go or who all is going to be in the class. I don’t lose much sleep over it but I do lie there wondering about it till I go to sleep. For me the breath in the air is taking that deep breath right before going into class. Alex |
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I enjoyed these two because I can always relte to the first day jitters and feeling you get when returning to school after a break or for the first time. Joshua |
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with friends |
into the forest |
mellow evening |
the fire burns |
I love these two because im a nature fiend. I love going adventuring and exploring what mother nature beholds for us. And the wonders that god has created. Joshua |
These two haiku were very similar to the first pair I selected. They both created instant memories as soon as I read them, and really made me relate to each one. I think everyone has spent the entire night sitting around the fire with a loved one or close friends and solved all of the world’s problems while sitting there. Then you follow up the night with complete silence, but still know you are just having a different type of conversation. I think they both revolve around spending time with close friends and family, and knowing you don’t have to talk to each other to be able to enjoy the company and time spent with them. Corey this reminds me of when my buddy and I would go camping together. We always brought a truck bed full of wood. Then we would sit there every night and have a big campfire. We’d sit there talking about everything and anything that would lead us to our next conversation. We would stay up till three or four in the morning. Alex |
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warm cookies |
fireplace warms |
circles carved |
moonlit dancers |
For me, picking between these two haiku was very difficult. Each one had such vivid imagery associated with them between the smells of cookies and cinnamon compared to the feeling of warming up your frostbitten hands after playing in the snow. Each author did a fantastic job of creating an atmosphere for the reader to relate to and pull from previous memories and experiences. I personally liked the second haiku, but it was not selected by the class during the matching exercise. Corey I like the themes in both of these poems. They both talk about warmth during the fall and winter seasons. I like how the first one makes me feel all warm and cozy. I also like the sense of sweet smells (of cinnamon), and it reminds me of the times my mom and I made gingerbread men cookies around Christmas. I really like the second poem because of the clear image and message. The frostbitten hands that created snowmen are over the fireplace to melt away the cold. The second poem makes sense, and it’s expressed so well using condensed words. Vineece Cinnamon cookies aren’t my favorite, but they remind me of Christmas morning. My wife up early before the kids wake, baking goodies for the day. The smell of the food cooking, the presents still wrapped under the tree, and me drinking my morning coffee. A few minutes of peace and quiet before the chaos begins. Playing in the wintery snow has always been a family bonding moment for me. I can hardly remember doing it as a child, but I can recall time spent with my kids. The 45 minutes of preparation bundling up to go outside. Gloves, coat, boots, scarves, stocking hat, etc.. by the time we were ready, the kids looked liked the kid off of a Christmas Story. Then, after 10 minutes of rolling around in the frigid temps, my wife would tell us it’s time to come in and warm up. We didn’t have a fireplace, but we had one of those big gas stoves in our living room. Not the safest heating device, but definitely the warmest to cozy up too. Michael I really liked this haiku in the matching contest because I was actually in touch with my senses. I could almost smell the cinnamon the haiku described. The selected wording made the haiku come to life. Realism is one of the traits I feel are important for haikus to have. Dannika |
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I really enjoyed this haiku in the haiku competition because the wording also made this haiku come to life. Dannika |
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covered in snow |
sliding across the ice |
the crunch of the snow |
lonely footprints |
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Summer
hot dogs and beer |
hot summer sun |
kids splashing |
the sun ripples |
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too hot to work |
after all this work |
school bus in july |
wet corn field leaves |
Both of these poems talk about the struggles of work, and wanting to get a decent break. I like how the first one mentions the air taking a break, meaning there is no breeze or wind to cool the person off as they’re working. The contrast between the person not being able to take a break and the air taking a break (making it hard for the worker because it’s hot) suggests a bit of irony that fits well. The second poem talks about the opposite—a person being able to take a break after a long day’s work. It’s more calming, serene, and cool; and it’s relatable. It reminds me of the times when I get home from work, and all I want to do is take a nap in my bed while the window is open, letting in the cool breeze. Vineece I believe that this Haiku pairing was really interested to me because although they were written by two separate people they have a lot in common. Both authors let you know that work is no longer an option or a priority. They also indicate that it is hot or very sunny outside which is insinuated by needing a shady place under a tree. I also get the feeling that both or tired or in need of rest what is an indicated that they were attempting to take a nap while the other one said it was too hot to work or to do anything else. Pamela This pair of haiku goes together really well. It starts with a hot day at work where there is no air and you just sweat all day. Then after you’re done working, there is a shady tree and you can relax and take a nap. It is very peaceful being able to find a tree to nap under after a hot day at work. It is relaxing after a hot day and you can just cool off. Brtiney |
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hot shiny black steel |
strawberry garden— |
moonlight glare |
hot summer days |
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hot dogs and beer |
hot shiny black steel |
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I like this pairing because they both have to deal with food. Where is one of them places you in the stands at a Cardinals game surrounded by enthusiastic fans no, the other places you in the Comforts of your own backyard surrounded by family. Are they both have the commonality of food one is very specific with mentioning the hot dogs while the other leaves room for interpretation because it doesn't tell you what is being cooked it just informs you that it will be Hickory flavored. Overall both of them could be enjoyed on a nice summer day. Pamela |
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swimming pool |
floating and wading |
a calm green lake |
calm summer night |
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© 2018, Randy Brooks Millikin University. All rights returned to authors upon publication.