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Global Haiku • Millikin University • June 2015
Author's favorite edited version indicated in bold type.
In the park A small girl swings Alone in the park alone in the park Aesha Bunch
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bright blue sky little girl daydreams Birds chirp as girl dreams birds chirping Birds chirp under the bight blue sky Hannah Woolard |
candles lit turkey on the table turkey on the table Family gathers around candles lit Aesha Bunch turkey on the table |
fire crackles fire crackles Hannah Woolard the moon glows—fire crackles campfire smoke The crackling of fire
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bright moon bright moon— Lisa Capasso The wind whistles the wind whistles The whistle of the wind bright moon bright moon |
pretty in pink sparkles shine Dressed up in pink sparkling pink pink sparkles Hannah Woolard |
the door bell rings the doorbell rings Aesha Bunch dogs bark Dogs begin to bark a knock on the door |
a bell rings Wipings away chalk from her finer tips At dusk she hears the bell wiping away chalk Lisa Capasso dinner bell wiping chalk church bell a bell rings |
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