Global Haiku • June 2016
Dr. Randy Brooks

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Daniel Koffman

Reader Response Essay:

The Creative Humor
of Carlos Colon

Narrow Path

by
Daniel Koffman

Songwriting has always been my artistic expression of choice, and I never thought that I would meet another that I would become quite so enamored with.  I enrolled in a haiku course fully intending to be just fine with learning about an art form that would no doubt be interesting, if not quite to my taste.  However, from the first moment that I put pen to paper and placed my simple thoughts on the page, I was hooked.  From its simplicity, to its reminder to stop and appreciate your surroundings, to its ability to reach unfathomable depths with only the bare minimum of words, haiku has opened up an entire new avenue of artistic expression to me. And while I won’t be putting my guitar down anytime soon, I’ll certainly be writing a few verses about it.


emerald moss
consumes the walls
the old cabin


neon sign glowing
at the pawn shop
the thief cashes a paycheck


red finches
on the evergreen
Christmas ornaments


charming
when I want to be..
..that one time


unfamiliar city
   the homeless man’s
   creative story

 


traincar
            takes the graffiti
                                    elsewhere


I draw the same
as when I was five . . .
   less well-received


dusty, worn cover
pages that taught him
what he taught me


dancing girl
without a care
her mother

 


dog wagging tail
I pat his head
as the steak sizzles


adorning the wall
early work of an artist—
mom’s gonna be pissed


narrow path     one of us is in the way

 

 


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