Haiku Attempts 1 Favorites
Global Haiku • Millikin University • June 2018
fallen angel Matthew Marrero (4) When writing this haiku, I purposely made it have an endless question. Where did you come from? What does the fallen angel symbolize, a person? An object, an opportunity? We all had the feeling of finding something that has impacted our lives. Matt |
yellow school bus in sight |
kitchen counter Karmina Gant (2) |
rainy Thursday |
being Italian Daniel Rivera (3) I really enjoyed this haiku because I felt it told a whole story about what was on that person’s mind. I feel as if this person is kind of speaking out about who he is in his family. I like how he isn’t just speaking out about who he in the whole spectrum of being Italian but he narrows it down to inside his family. I also feel like this haiku is easy to relate to because many people wonder who they are at times and where their place is. I thought it was great that he made “being Italian” as one of the main phrases because it gave an image but also tells a story in its own. Karmina |
an only child |
baggy eyes Jessica Joyner (3) |
church choir Jessica Joyner (5) |
knock knock knock! |
tiny black skirt Kiava Plato (2) |
small girl cries |
mother hen Kiava Plato (3) |
front door open Lena Rotramel (5) I really enjoyed this poem because I could relate to it the most. The way that the author described the coming and going of friends made me think that friends come in and out of our lives, or friends are coming in and out of our homes because they have made it their second home. Both ideas are relatable, and are true. Jessica |
cold beer and laughter Lena Rotramel (3) |
a gentle river |
the smell of barbeque |
string of lights Jessica Joyner (3) |
pin striped pants |
gliding through water |
colorful kayaks Matthew Marrero |
midnight rain |
watching caterpillars Karmina Gant (4) Caterpillars aren't aware of their full potential, that they can be beautiful butterflies. I think this can apply to children as well especially minorities. Children think because they are small or different that they can't accomplish much but they have their whole life ahead of them and they can be whatever they want. Kiev |
crisp air Karmina Gant (3) |
snow falling hard |
gathering a pile of leaves Kiava Plato (2) |
disabled brother Kiava Plato (3) |
one last summer barbecue Karmina Gant (3) |
sunrise over the ocean |
a deep sadness Lena Rotramel (5) I enjoyed this one because of the story behind it and the message it is sending. It gives a great description of what they are trying to do and how they are going to stat fresh the next day. I feel like the best situation for this would be a married couple or a couple that has been dating for years and just went through a rough patch. Daniel Reading this haiku made me think of a relationship where the woman feels secured. The symbolisms to being wrapped around a mans arms are a type of protection or a feeling of warmth. At the end where it says “a new beginning” it could be depicted as hardship being renewed. Matt |
overwhelmed by trash Lena Rotramel (4) This was my favorite because when I started it I had no idea it was going to end with it being about a new puppy that made the trash and urine on the floor. I thought it was surprising that it started with more of a negative approach but ended up being positive in my mind because it was about a new puppy. I could picture a person who just got this new puppy and the puppy got into the trash and pulled it all out on the floor in the middle of the night or while the owner was gone and on top of that there is also urine on the floor but to the owner it may be worth it. Overwhelming but worth it for a new puppy. Karmina |
bomb pops Jessica Joyner (2) |
cold shots to the back |
thinking of her Matthew Marrero (4) |
stepping stones on the creek |
purple porch sunset Lena Rotramel |
once again joined Daniel Rivera (3) |
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