1 Matching Contest Results - Health & Well0being - June 2018 • Millikin University
it never tires Karmina Gant |
busy city Karmina Gant |
computer screen blank Kiava Plato |
California dreaming Daniel Rivera |
it never tires |
California dreaming |
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it never tires top quarter champion |
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TOP half Chamption tons of pressure
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bottom quarter champion tons of pressure |
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tons of pressure |
in the pond |
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dark night Daniel Rivera |
tons of pressure Jessica Joyner |
in the pond Karmina Gant |
track practice Karmina Gant |
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TOP half champion tons of pressure
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CHAMPION tons of pressure
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Miles and miles BOTTOM half champion |
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Lebron running Daniel Rivera |
ballin’ in the street lights Jessica Joyner |
last to finish Lena Rotramel |
long gym night Matthew Marrero |
ballin’ in the street lights |
last to finish |
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last to finish top quarter champion |
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BOTTOM half champion Miles and miles
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bottom quarter champion Miles and miles |
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mom works hours |
Miles and miles |
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mom works hours Lena Rotramel |
fast food Matthew Marrero |
running Kiava Plato |
Miles and miles Jessica Joyner |
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Reader Responses
it never tires Karmina Gant |
busy city Karmina Gant |
computer screen blank Kiava Plato |
California dreaming Daniel Rivera |
I love the idea that two different people wrote these Haiku's and yet they are so similar. Of course all of us can relate to being busy because we are college students/professor and life gets overwhelming. I'm drawn to the first Haiku because we often say, "my mind is running a mile a minute" insinuating that it is running faster and faster. Kiava These two poems both talk about the fast moving nature of the mind. I had a very hard time choosing between the two because the word play in both haikus were great, but I chose the first haiku because it made me think about how fast the mind will run faster and faster without having to build up its endurance. Jessica |
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dark night Daniel Rivera |
tons of pressure Jessica Joyner |
in the pond Karmina Gant |
track practice Karmina Gant |
Lebron running Daniel Rivera |
ballin’ in the street lights Jessica Joyner |
last to finish Lena Rotramel |
long gym night Matthew Marrero |
I like both of these haiku because they both give me a very active social image of people playing basketball together. However, the second one to me provokes a stronger image due to the setting "in the street lights" and it seems more relatable because rather than being about professional athletes it is about neighborhood children. Lena |
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mom works hours Lena Rotramel |
fast food Matthew Marrero |
running Kiava Plato |
Miles and miles Jessica Joyner |
tons of pressure Jessica Joyner |
in the pond Karmina Gant |
it never tires Karmina Gant |
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I thought it was interesting that these two were two winners from the matching contest because they were written by two different people but both with so much similar emotion. The meanings of both deal with a situation of this weightless and breathtaking feeling that comes with water. I can relate to this because when I’m in the water I feel relaxed and weightless. Between these two I enjoy the first. I like the play on words with “tons of pressure” and “weightless”. I also like how there is emotion behind the haiku, but it still leaves you feeling relaxed. Karmina |
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