Haiku Kukai 2 Favorites
Global Haiku • Millikin University • June 2018
hot summer day |
midnight howls |
wet green leaves Kiava Plato |
justice Jessica Joyner I liked the comment that this made about both brokenness and togetherness. Although there are pieces to be picked up, they are together in picking them up and making things right. Lena |
clear blue ocean |
sweet mint Daniel Rivera |
cat purring |
hot summer night Karmina Gant |
magic show Karmina Gant |
winter storm Daniel Rivera I really thought the last line of this haiku put a very interesting spin on the first two lines. It starts off and seems to be about a stormy winter day in the mountains, like he is looking out into nature—but then it seems that he finds something unexpected, which is love. Lena |
always polite Kiava Plato |
raven |
two boys missing Karmina Gant |
looking at the sky Karmina Gant I also really enjoyed this poem because it made me think on the spiritual side. As I read this poem, I imagined a girl speaking to God, and she hears His still small voice in a powerful way that makes her feel small compared to His greatness. Jessica |
her father’s silence Karmina Gant |
dark Matthew Marrero |
drips of melanin Jessica Joyner |
crossing a street Lena Rotramel |
big red barn Lena Rotramel |
my brother's face |
old woman in bed |
running to mom Lena Rotramel With this haiku I imagine a little girl running to her mother with tears streaming down her face because of a chicken that won’t stop chasing her. What I liked most about this haiku was that when I first started reading it I thought it was going to be a lot more somber but once I read the third line it actually was not as somber as I thought. In my mind I find it a lot cuter because I used to be scared of chickens when I was younger. Karmina |
family reunion Lena Rotramel |
a game of tag |
parked car |
play practice |
with no proof of scars Jessica Joyner |
tired eyes Karmina Gant |
I feel what I cannot see Jessica Joyner |
counting breaths |
trying to catch my breath Jessica Joyner |
fresh flowers Lena Rotramel I felt this haiku was beautiful. I imagine a fresh arrangement of flowers sat in front of a grave placed by a stranger out of kindness. On the other hand, this could have a twist because maybe the stranger knows the person whose grave it is but I don’t know the stranger. I like this haiku because there could be a lot more story and background with it. Karmina |
running fast |
one star to freedom Jessica Joyner |
tree roots of coiled hair |
traditional Matthew Marrero I liked this poem because it caught me off guard. I was not expecting a description of traditional chicken, but I thought that made the poem stand out because it was a risky move, but also clever. Jessica |
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surrounded by friends Lena Rotramel |
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