01 Matching Contest - Health, Peace & Quiet - May 2021 • Millikin University
rolled out Tanya Vaughn |
up, down, up, down Leana Temple |
downward dog Jacey Centola |
Cobra’s Pose Tanesha Williams |
rolled out |
downward dog |
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rolled out top quarter champion |
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TOP half Chamption rolled out
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bottom quarter champion bus peels away |
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bus peels away |
thoughts empty |
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I go to the dojo Austin Medina |
bus peels away Jake Pietryk |
being still Tanya Vaughn |
thoughts empty Jake Pietryk |
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TOP half champion rolled out
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CHAMPION 11:11
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11:11 BOTTOM half champion |
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one oreo Nick Laramee |
she eats a Tanya Vaughn |
music playing through Caitlyn Kesler |
soft music Austin Medina |
she eats a |
soft music |
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soft music top quarter champion |
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BOTTOM half champion 11:11
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bottom quarter champion 11:11 |
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11:11 |
lying straight |
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ear against the pillow Leana Temple |
11:11 Tanesha Williams |
lying straight Maddie Schroeder |
the music blaring Jacey Centola |
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the clanging of weights Austin Medina |
weightlifting Jacey Centola |
bar curls Jake Pietryk |
thinking of his kids Nick Laramee |
weightlifting |
thinking of his kids |
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thinking of his kids top quarter champion |
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TOP half Chamption she walks alone |
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bottom quarter champion she walks alone |
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she walks alone |
waves hitting the beach |
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she walks alone Tanya Vaughn |
early morning run Jake Pietryk |
waves hitting the beach Caitlyn Kesler |
sitting on the beach Caitlyn Kesler |
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TOP half champion she walks alone
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CHAMPION two squirrels fighting
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two squirrels fighting BOTTOM half champion |
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Breathe2Relax . . . Maddie Schroeder |
breathing in Tanya Vaughn |
when it's that quiet Leana Temple |
two squirrels fighting Nick Laramee |
Breathe2Relax . . . |
two squirrels fighting |
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two squirrels fighting top quarter champion |
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BOTTOM half champion two squirrels fighting
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bottom quarter champion quickened heartbeats |
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quickened heartbeats |
I look at him |
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hands covering face Maddie Schroeder |
quickened heartbeats Tanesha Williams |
I look at him Tanesha Williams |
sitting at her desk I catch myself staring Nick Laramee |
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READER RESPONSES
rolled out Tanya Vaughn |
up, down, up, down Leana Temple |
Cobra’s Pose Tanesha Williams |
thoughts empty Jake Pietryk |
I love that these two haiku were put together. The first haiku is very detailed about the environment of the area. However, right when the 2nd haiku begins, it shifts from talking about the atmosphere, to only talking about the person, and how focused the person is on completing their workout routine. It shows that the atmosphere doesn’t really matter for the person doing their workout, just that they are at peace and determined to complete their workout. Nick Laramee, May 2021 |
Although the first haiku is my own, I did not pick it for that reason. I picked these two as a match because despite the fact that the two structures and meanings do not relate, they can be read as a full poem. Oftentimes when people hear the word “match” they think of things that go together, that correlate, but that’s not always the case. Sometimes things can match in the way they coordinate, how they sound, or how they look. When this plays in my head, it’s almost like someone is assuming the position, preparing themselves, with a focused mind and suddenly they begin to wonder what’s for dinner; maybe because their tummy rumbled. See, it flows, just not how you would expect it to; sometimes you just have to think outside the box. Tanesha Williams, May 2021 |
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bus peels away Jake Pietryk |
thoughts empty Jake Pietryk |
the music blaring Jacey Centola |
soft music Austin Medina |
These two haiku fit really well to me because in both cases what immediately runs through my head is a mother who is stressed. In the first poem I picture a mom finally having the house to themselves after the kids have gone to school and now, they can relax. The second haiku I am thinking of a mom who has just gotten home after a long day of either work or running errands and is finally getting a chance to relax only to start thinking about what she will make for dinner later. Austin Medina, May 2021 |
I found these two haiku to be a good match because of the use of music as a mood setter. In the first haiku I imagine some hardcore rock or maybe some rap as a way to get the blood pumping as you are getting ready to throw punches at the punching bag. I liked the use of “blaring” because I am picturing the music being loud getting you pumped up. The other haiku is a contrast to this where instead of this loud rock or rap music getting you ready to fight, there is a mention of soft music, which gives me an image of some classical music as you are getting ready to relax and read a book. The moods of the two haiku contrast but music is used in both to set a mood appropriate for the scenario laid out in the haiku. Austin Medina, May 2021 |
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one oreo Nick Laramee |
she eats a Tanya Vaughn |
music playing through Caitlyn Kesler |
soft music Austin Medina |
This was my first favorite match from the Haiku contest. I really liked both of them how they have a certain common similarity. In the first one, I really like how the first two lines tell you that there is one oreo left, and then kind of frustration settles in. Who did this? Like seriously if you're going to leave one cookie left, you mise well have eaten it. Not going to lie, I have done this before, I felt bad eating the last cookies, so I left one in there for someone. With the second one, I also really liked this one. I feel like it is very hard to eat strictly healthy. It can go on for so long, until you have to spoil yourself. I also enjoyed the wording and how the single word, “salad”, is alone on the second line. Jake Pietryk, May 2021 I thought these two haiku worked together in a sort of satirical and funny way. I really liked the first one because that is a constant struggle for me trying to eat better. I always try to eat good, but the desserts always pull at me. I must enjoy a good dessert before going to bed. The second one makes me think of my siblings and when they eat the hole box of oreos after I tell them to save me one. I always come back to one left in the package. Sometimes it makes me mad, but honestly, I am just glad I got one. I find them both to have a funny side to them because they are almost weird things to do, but they just happen. I always wonder why at some points of the night I am just craving food, especially chocolate. These haiku can also leave a feeling of being angry. Because when you eat chocolate cake in the middle of the night, in the morning it kind of makes you mad at yourself. The second one can also make you mad because who would leave one more oreo, just to upset the next person who comes along looking for a good snack. Although these haiku are similar one presents a question and the other talks about an instance. The first haiku also read quicker because the second line only has one word in it. I feel that helps with the sound and impact of the haiku. The second one takes a bit longer to read and feels slower to read to understand truly what it is taking about. These to haiku to me, help me realize what I struggle to do trying to eat healthier. Chocolate cake sounds so good especially at night and you know there is only one more oreo, but do not think you need the calories, so you leave it for later. Imagining these haiku bring out the same emotions which is why I felt they were similar. Jacey Centola, May 2021 |
I liked this match because there is such a contrast between the two. In the first poem, it almost feels intense. Like the person has their music playing/blaring in their ears to keep up the energy through their workout. I would imagine the person is focused on whatever song is playing to distract themselves from the discomfort and exhaustion the last set will bring. The second haiku, however, gives me very relaxed vibes. Unlike how I imagined in the first haiku, the music is soft and contributes along with candles to create a laid-back, relaxing environment. And instead of being focused, as I imagined in the first haiku, the mind is allowed to wander and be taken into the world of the good book. Even though it is not overtly stated in both haikus, I think the music plays a great role in setting the mood. Leana Temple, May 2021 being still Tanya Vaughn downward dog Jacey Centola
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soft music Austin Medina |
sitting at her desk I catch myself staring Nick Laramee |
bus peels away Jake Pietryk |
soft music Austin Medina |
Once again, here I am with my unique set of pairs. I matched these two together because of their aesthetics and the images that they create together in my head. When you read them, you feel comfort and happiness. You feel as if what you’re doing in that moment is the only thing that can garner your attention. And similarly to the previous match, you can also read these two as a complete phrase. If you do, you may picture a young man staring at a young woman completely involved with her; stunned by her beauty in the delicate moment paying attention to every detail. I love when things can have more than one meaning and more than one way to interpret it. Tanesha Williams, May 2021 |
This was probably my favorites match from the contest. Although they were not paired originally, I think they have some of the very same emotions. For these two I think the work together well and almost make one big story. I imagine a young mom who is watching the kids school bus drive away after helping the kids get on. The bus slowly drives away, and she starts to make her way to couch. She decides to have a nice relaxing day all for herself. Lighting soothing scented candles she turns on some music and finds her book. Both haiku seem to work together for my imagination. They both present a way they find peace and the satisfaction of relaxation. They both are used in almost the same structure and read very similar. Both haikus talk about the development of peace in their haiku but in different ways. One is very relaxing and brings in materials to help soothe the mind. The first one talks about ruckus being taken away or a worry being lifted off the shoulders and that is what brings the peace. Both haiku were one of my favorites and it so happened to work out that they were very similar. Jacey Centola, May 2021 |
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the clanging of weights Austin Medina |
weightlifting Jacey Centola |
bar curls Jake Pietryk |
thinking of his kids Nick Laramee |
I really enjoyed this match as well; I like how both of these poem's appeal to your senses of sound and smell. They are somewhat similar with the choice of words used. For the first, I like how you can visualize weights clanging, possibly hitting the ground after a set. Then after a while, I know gyms can get hot, you begin to smell yourself sweating (not the best smell). Then you can feel the soreness of your muscles after an intense workout. For the second, I also enjoyed the second line of the clank and clunk. Again, describing words for the weights bouncing around the weight room. I feel like this is someone's warm-up set and after they are loose, they begin to add on more weight. Jake Pietryk, May 2021 |
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she walks alone Tanya Vaughn |
two squirrels fighting Nick Laramee |
waves hitting the beach Caitlyn Kesler |
sitting on the beach Caitlyn Kesler |
I like these two because I go for walks a lot by myself and I can hear the dogs barking as I walk by their house, and I always smile because at least something noticed me walking. I like the squirrel one because I babysit, and we always see squirrels “fighting” and the kids ask me what they are doing so I just saying they are fighting but they really aren’t fighting but the kids do not need to know that. I like these two matched up because I can relate to both of them. Caitlyn Kesler, May 2021 |
I enjoyed both of these haiku. These haiku give me a feeling of relaxation. It feels as if there is no land in sight other than the land behind the. The first haiku mentions the sun falling, where the second haiku leaves you feeling like it is the middle of the day. Both haikus paint a beautiful scene of blue water and relaxation. Tanya Vaughn, May 2021 I liked this pair because they brought me to two completely different instances, both of which I perceive as enjoyable, just different. With the first one, I can picture myself out on the beach with family and/or friends. The sun was high, but now it slowly cooling, there are plenty of other people out, doing their own thing. The view is what is peaceful because it is never-ending and leads to relaxation. In the second haiku, its more of a relaxed vibe. Maybe with one or two other people, enjoying each other’s company. You can look out on the water and see where the sky and water meets and makes you sink into relaxation. Leana Temple, May 2021 |
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hands covering face Maddie Schroeder |
quickened heartbeats Tanesha Williams |
I look at him Tanesha Williams |
sitting at her desk I catch myself staring Nick Laramee |
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early morning run Jake Pietryk |
These both work so well together and they are so cute. I imagine a boy and a girl thinking about each other in this scenario. I compare it to how I look at my boyfriend, when I look at him, my worries disappear . . . it just so happened that my boyfriend wrote the other one, so it is sweet. It is so hard to describe love and feelings between two human beings sometimes, so the actions just speak louder than words. Maddie Schroeder, May 2021 |
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