Global
Haiku Tradition--Haiku Attempts 3, PACE 2003
(edit & make variations for 2-3 squares)
a lazy summer
afternoon by our pool or afternoon
at the pond or summer afternoon or a lazy summer
afternoon the fresh
smell of pine trees or the fresh
smell of pine cold, granite
tombstone or cold, granite
tombstone |
crackling
fire glows dandelions
or dandelions
or dandelions
dance gleaming
spokes in the sun or the bike
gleaming in the sun |
Warm sun
on my face Old wooden
gate in the summer morn |
Lighting
bugs flash or lighting
bugs flicker Autumn leaves,
chance meeting |
Bundled up
tight or bundled tight
Bright vibrant
leaves |
neighbors
knock frantically green clouds |
vacuuming
the pine needles or adding water or vacuuming
the pine needles popping tar
bubbles or tar bubbles
popping |
snowflakes
dance or the picture
window Windows framed
with ice or frosted windows |
blistery
chill or blustery
chill or blistery
chill sun sizzles
on the sidewalk or sizzling
summer day or sizzling
summer day or sun warmed
sidewalk |
cold winter
night or cold winter
night hot still
day cool afternoon |
A weak barren
twig or a weak barren
twig Snow boots
at the back door |
In sinking
mud or flowers Sliding on
a frozen pond |
Waves crashing
in the dark Warm summer
nights or warm summer
night Beer in my
hand |
Lazy summer
days or Lazy summer
day or Lazy summer
days or Lazy summer
days or Lazy summer
days the lighthouse
stands or the lighthouse
stands |
Follow the
steps of snow The smell
of grape |
children
scream and run or
snow packed
hill |
hot summer
morning or summer morning father and
son or father and
son |
brittle leaves or brittle leaves leaning back
from the fire or leaning back
from the fire |
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2003, Randy Brooks Millikin University
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