Haiku Writing Roundtable--Kukai 2, PACE January 2005
round, red, ripe tomatoes |
after a long winter nap Glen Sims (5) I love this haiku. It gives a great visual to what the poem is all about. After a long winter nap refers to the trees being dormant for the winter. Now that winter is over, they are starting to bud and give the realization that they are alive. I see the many colors of the forest as well as hear all the animals that have been scarce over the winter. Such as the birds, rabbits, and squirrels. Josh I like the idea that the forest is napping. In a lot of writings, winter is referred to as being ‘dead’. In this haiku, the forest has taken a nap; been allowed to rest, before waking up in time for spring. This is one of my favorites. Jenifer |
autumn leaves Marcia Gordon (4) |
first sunny spring day Dee Wood (2) |
bitter cold Josh Lane (5) I imagine being at home on a Friday or Saturday night with my family. We are all lined up on the four-seated couch in the living room. We share a big blanket that is draped across our front. Mama sits in the middle to hold the popcorn so the kids do not have anything to fight about. We push play movie and relax. Our life is closed to the outside world. Settings like this make me feel like I am safe and secure. Nothing from the outside world can get to me. The stillness of the house and its surroundings gives me sense of peacefulness. Marcia |
cooking outdoors
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like cream in my morning joe Jenifer Hagen (2) |
autumn leaves Dee Wood |
in the summer swelter |
we fly Willa Heath (3) I really relate to this haiku for several reasons. My children are like most children and love snow, the more the better. Reading the haiku I can very vividly, see Whitney and Dorian getting their warm snow clothes on and having daddy blow up the sled. Dying to make their way down the snow covered hill. Going up and down the hill a million times of course one of the children would wipe out so I can envision hearing SPLAT!!! Then the tears would be wiped away and up they go again. Dee |
Christmas Eve Marcia Gordon This one brings to mind the year my present husband asked me to marry him. We had both been divorced and were somewhat hesitant to take that step. After all the other gifts had been opened and everyone had left, he handed me a small box with the most beautiful ring in it, I cried over this one gift. Willa |
heat of summer Josh Lane |
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