1 Rengay
PACE Global Haiku--Rengay 1, April 2007
The Ice Storm a long night at school the ice bitter coldness everyone wants the ice starts home safely by Heather Senger |
Dirty July Morning hot sticky night diamonds from the sky boat together, sleeping peacefully her body spoken vows by Traci and Wesley |
Present Tense smiling at her same image in the mirror memories come full circle 80's music record by Jami Martin I really liked this rengay. I totally see it being me and my daughter some day. She is only 4 now, but I am sure by the time she is seven or eight she will be wanting styles I wore and I will just be like “no”. This rengay makes me very happy. It also makes me think about how strong of a bond my daughter and I have. I see lots of colors from the bell bottoms and the 80’s in the haiku. Heather I really liked this rengay because it reminds me of my mother and me. My Mom’s name is Patty and a lot of people call me little Patty because we look so much alike. She tells me all of the time that I look just like she did when she was my age. Even when I talk to my Aunts on the phone they say that it is scary how much my mother and I sound alike. When I look at old pictures of my mom I really wish that she would have saved some of her old clothes because I would probably wear them. When you stop and think about it, it is funny how much we have advanced in society in some ways, but how some things never change. Nicole This poem caught my attention because it took me back to my teenage years and the big hair and the mention of the 80’s gives you a complete picture of a style and presence of what was happening when I was fourteen. The poem also brought me to my current life with my daughter and watching her wear clothes that I hate and thought should never come back into style. I can picture my mother and I arguing over some outfit or another in the mall dressing room and the same with my daughter. I think the poem really could appeal across the generations of mothers and daughters. Holly I like this rengay because it reminds me of my daughters. They like to wear the styles that are popular now, which are the ones I wore. I remember being in a dressing room with my daughters and thinking I wish I would have kept my clothes. It’s fun and full or memories. Sue This is a memory that is so vivid to me. I see myself shopping with my daughter and all the clothes I hated from the 70’s and 80’s are very popular with the teens today. I am thinking God I didn’t think I would every see these ugly clothes again in my life time. But, unfortunately they are popular items now. I’m thinking to my self, only if I hadn’t thrown away that wardrobe, I could be saving lots of money and really know I am my daughter’s hero. Kecia |
The Chase of a Lifetime lint balls toys everywhere little girl giggles in the air a run moments to catch by Mike Price There are so many images to see when reading this rengay. I see the sparkly puff balls cats chase around the room. I see the dandelion puffs blowing in the wind as the little girl runs from grandpa. I see that stop and go game so many little ones play begging to be captured but not wanting to be caught. Toys are not needed here. The interaction between grandfather and child is all that is needed to make memories. This takes me back to my own childhood when the outdoors and our imaginations were all that was needed to have fun. Karen |
Rengay afternoon nap by the pool pour another margarita please don’t spill it husband kicks off his shoes afternoon break by Nicole Stonecipher (5) |
The Travelers bright sunny days tan bodies on the beach stress is easing back weary travelers meet new day dawns pictures on the mantle by Sue Short |
Rengay silvery frost through the trees childish laughter shiny cans buzz buzzzzzz hit the snooze by Jami Martin |
The Office sunny spring day papers piles high cherry blossoms everywhere children run a humid summer day a sudden thunderstorm by Heather Senger |
June 25, 2005 it’s my birthday daily phone calls something new my little man fresh new face two separate lives by Kara and |
A Trio of Souls boy scouts skiing late night talks a widow mourns tears of sorrow making memories friendship blossoms by Karen McFadin, |
Precious Moment I wonder if kids exploring anticipating and wondering children’s daily mess need more shopping always shopping for baby by Kara Nihiser |
Rengay summer heat the warmth of the sand In the distance sailboats sway the sea stretches a vision of heaven and earth by Kecia Wilson-Jackson This rengay reminds me of a perfect vacation day, with the surroundings of a paradise like setting, using all the senses to enjoy the heat, view, sounds of the island life. Mike I love summer! I love to be in the sun. There is nothing like the warm summer sun, so long as it isn’t too hot! I also like the feeling of sand under my feet. Particularily warm, wet sand. Although, this haiku takes me to a tropical beach with beautiful white sand. I love dolphins, so I use my imagination in this and replace the whales with dolphins! And then I can actually see them jumping out of the water. Then we bring a whole new picture in by bringing beautiful brightly colored sailboats into the picture. I see bright reds, yellows, greens and blues floating above the water. Now I am on a boat, but not a sailboat, rather the cruiseliner that I will be on in September!! There is no land in sight, but there is the most beautiful clear blue all around. On the horizon is the sun setting, there are white clouds reflected on the water. This is the sign of heaven. Then you can see land slowly appearing in the distance, and this where the earth part comes in. |
The Weekend rainbows dance on the driveway cool evening breeze blows seven am the morning sun rises chairs in one arm, cooler in another by Karissa Lindley I love, love, love this haiku! It reminds me of doing day to day things with my kids. It makes me think of how things are more fun, now that I can share them with my children, than they ever were before. Even when things become hectic, if I am doing them with my kids, then it’s not too bad. Jami |
April 22 cloudless sky she turns on the hose chorus of birds child giggles smell of fresh cuttings wash up—mom says by Karissa Lindley |
Rengay Winding road Loved you half my life Tumbling walls A day of sunshine One day too late by Kecia Wilson-Jackson |
Illinois Spring day sun glare A pitcher sweats flowers bloom in the Midwest walking in the park by Rusty
and Jodee |
Fourth of July mid Summer painting faces a fireman the nighttime the smell rises the sky lights up Rusty Johnson I chose this as my favorite because I love the 4th of July. This reminds me of when we go to Monticello on July 3rd to watch the fireworks. It is a tradition for me and my family every year to go. I see the carnival games and painted faces on all the little kids. The kids are running around and having the best of time. My family usually has a big crowd show up and we all sit around and enjoy being with each other laughing and sharing stories from the past. My favorite link is probably the last one. Like I said before I love fireworks and to see the beautiful colors in the air and the amazing ground fireworks display is just awesome. Kara |
Offspring Ballet April wind sends birds are chirping hummingbirds sing little girls the sun warms cherub faces screams by Sue Short This ties nature and humans together with never really mentioning them together. First it begins with the seedlings twirling downward from the trees, you can picture the seedlings twirling down with ease and grace. Then it brings in singing birds. Then it goes to the tutu flitter with brings a girls arms open wide twirling, just as the seedling carefree and graceful. Rusty This is a very clever Rengay. On the surface, I love the subject matter of twirling little girls. My three-year-old daughter is very much into Disney Princesses and Disney Fairies. She has a trunk filled with dress up attire associated with both. She is also in pre-ballet, needless to say this Rengay reflects Lexi-Lu. I can see little girls in their tutu’s dancing around the yard. I love the line “a golden tutu flitters”. I can see it. All of Lexi’s dress up clothes are glittery and sparkly. It has a warm feel to it. Once you dig a little deeper you see the feeling of young ones throughout the Rengay. It makes references to spring, birds building a nest, seedlings, little girls, and cherubs. This is how mothers see their daughters: sparkly, angelic … perfect. Traci |
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