1 Haiku Matching Contest - Wabi Favorites
PACE Global Haiku Traditions April 2007
burnt crust Amber Potts |
a note he wrote Nicole Stonecipher |
grandma’s quilt sewn by hand Jenny Millikin |
winter wind Karen McFadin |
a note he wrote |
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top quarter champion a note he wrote |
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top half champion smiling at him |
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bottom quarter champion smiling at him |
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sunny afternoon |
smiling at him |
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sunny afternoon Karissa Lindley |
old blue bike Sue Short |
smiling at him Kara Hihiser |
broken heart lies still Kecia Wilson-Jackson |
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top half champion smiling at him |
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champion flattened
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bottom half champion flattened |
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from my grandmother's vanity Nicole Stonecipher |
an exciting night out Heather Senger |
newspaper Rusty Johnson |
flattened Karen McFadin |
an exciting night out |
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top quarter champion flattened |
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bottom half champion flattened |
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bottom quarter champion bright purple |
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soft and supple |
bright purple |
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soft and supple Mike Price |
out of style Jenn Perry |
bright purple Mike Price |
red autumn Traci |
newspaper |
out of style |
out of style |
red autumn |
These were two of my favorite haiku. I matched them for several reasons. First of all I thought the first glasses and a child’s birth announcement are both firsts. Also even though the glasses are out of date and the paper is yellowing it doesn’t matter, because they will both be treasured forever, no matter what they look like. I will have to say I will keep my daughter’s birth announcement forever and I still have my first pair of glasses from seventh grade. Heather |
I matched these two haiku together because they reminded me of my childhood, at two different stages. I remember loving my first pair of glasses, they were pink with Strawberry Shortcake and I wore them proudly! Now I look back and realize how hideous they were. I also remember wearing the clothes of my first love. I still have his favorite sweatshirt that I never gave back to him. Every time that I see it stuck in the back of my closet, I think of happy times during high school. Jami |
Smiling at him |
Broken heart lies still |
red autumn |
a note he wrote |
I like this because it is all about pictures. Pictures can tell a thousand of words, just like the saying says. Sometimes you want to hold on to those pictures forever, some you want to let go of because of bad memories or circumstances. I think it is a good match because of the feeling about pictures you get when reading both of these haiku. Sue |
Traci Batchelder and Nicole Stonecipher |
burnt crust |
a note he wrote |
a note he wrote |
smiling at him |
I can so relate to the burnt crust, soggy middle, haiku. Just last week I made a Shepard’s pie. The potatoes over cooked. They didn’t burn…but they were well browned…The bottom wasn’t soggy, but rather dry. It needed more cream of mushroom soup. It wasn’t the first dish, but it was a dish that didn’t come out quite like it was supposed to…. In November my son called and left a voicemail on my phone. I still have it saved. He wasn’t feeling well that day, and had spent the night at my parents because I had class the night before. I remember distinctly, because Kaleb goes to a parochial school, he still had class on Veteran’s day. He was calling asking me to come to school to see the Honorary ceremony the kids had prepared for the Veterans. He sounded miserable, but he was sweet as can be, and at the end said “I love you mommy, have a beautiful day” I cherish this message, because every day when I drop him off at school I say “have a beautiful day” and we exchange our “I love you”s. This haiku, of the note he wrote, in a specific month, I can so relate to. It instantly brings my son’s voicemail to mind. I am not sure that I would have initially matched these two haiku. Simply because I relate Nicole’s haiku to my son, if I related it to a husband, or boyfriend, I would have been more likely to match them. They do fit well together in that context. Karissa This reminds me of early relationship between husband and wife. I can just remember my first dish as a new bride, thinking to myself this is awful, he is going to think, what have I gotten myself into. We are either going to starve because her cooking is so bad, I will become a known full pledge member of the fast food chain or we are going to go broke buying groceries we never get to enjoy. Then remember how this man loved you so much that he would say anything to build you up even when you aren’t at your best. The second one remind me of going through a draw or box to get rid of unnecessary items and running across a love note or something really dear to heart one of your children made for you on a special occasion. The memories and the joy you felt coming rushing back as though it was just yesterday. A smile comes on your face and your eyes become moist from this tender memory. Kecia |
I thought that these two haiku went together well because they kind of flow into one another. It reminds me of an older woman going through a box of items that her late husband probably possessed. First she finds some old letters and notes that he had written in year before. As she keeps digging through the letters she finds a timeline of pictures of him. The pictures remind her of memories that she has of him and they almost make her feel, for a moment, that he is still there. As she looks at the pictures of him, it is like he is sitting right nest to her going through them with her. Nicole I chose this one as my favorite because I just love the way it brings out the love two people have for each other. How awesome a note a woman will always remember and cherish. There was real meaning and truth behind this note. Who knows why it was written but the feeling you get from it means something special. No matter what happens in life there will always be little things that we will all cherish and remember. Also there will always be big things in life that we will cherish as well. No matter what or how big or small we as humans have this connection with cherishing what is near and dear to us. Who knows there could of only been maybe just a few words or a lengthy note written that meant something to her. Kara This reminds me of all the different cards that I have received from my kids since they were young. Most of the fathers day, birthday cards they made in grade school I have in a drawer in my bedroom. I will look at them every couple of years or so and it reminds me of when they were young and made these cards or just signed their almost readable names. Rusty I have a note on my refrigerator that my son left on the kitchen table for me to find when I returned home from work one day. He wrote it after a particularly challenging week when he had been very disrespectful and hateful with his words. The note simply said, “I love you, Mom.” I know this is how he truly feels regardless of the outbursts he might have from time to time. Karen |
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I can feel soft material, well worn and comfortable. The first two lines could really fit anything you could picture that is a favorite old comfy item from a pair of boots, to an old sweatshirt or even a well worn leather chair. The third line gives you the picture of maybe and old cowboy with his holster that seems as worn as him and fits him like a glove. Like it was a part of him rather than an item he wears. Holly |
This haiku is neat in how we are made fully aware of the feeling felt by the writer and probably her Grandmother. Mike
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Randy Brooks Millikin University
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