Haiku Writing Roundtable--Haiku Attempts 2, PACE Fall 2004
Christmas
eve . . . twinkling lights surround tree trunks hole in the ice Rusty Vinson (3) |
handsome
at first sight Rita Marlow (11) sunday morning sunrise Rita Marlow (6) I love to creep out of bed on Sundays mornings and get started before everyone else rises. I let my dog out and drink my coffee along with a cigarette. I watch TV. and sometimes cook breakfast (this smell usually gets my daughter up) my husband can sleep through anything. I love having this time for myself to relax before everyone gets up. Karen Currie |
Matriarch
of the family Julie Rambo (3) Rosy cheeks and noses Julie Rambo (4) |
blistering
cold smell
of pine Julie Edmonson I like this haiku because it reminds me of my first Christmas tree after my divorce. I was a single mom of a 2 yr old and a 4 month old, and had been let go from my job with an orthopedic surgeon. I was totally distraught and financially in trouble, but it was Christmas time and I wanted my kids to have a good Christmas. It wasn't their fault that I didn't have enough money for the holidays, and they deserved to have a good Christmas regardless. So I borrowed old ornaments from family members, got an old used Christmas tree and some candy canes. This tree had seen one too many Christmas's and it was pretty much lopsided and falling apart. The candy canes had a serious time trying to hang on because the branches were so worn out. But, even though I thought that would have been my worst Christmas ever, it turned out to be one of the best I have had. The girls and I loved to sit and watch the lights blink on our tiny little worn out tree, and it sparkled and shined just as much as the fancy, expensive trees. But most of all, the spirit of Christmas was more alive having this humble tree in our home, because it gave us hope for the new future that was ahead of us. Julie Rambo |
even though busy Autumn sunset raspberry and
mint Julie Rambo (4) When I read this haiku it relaxes me. I imagine a warm cup of tea that I am slowly sipping in the kitchen in my pajamas. I watch it snowing outside and think of how nice it is to be home with the soothing cup of tea that warms me even more. Jill Doyle |
the
white horizon Karen Fleener (4) little buds Karen Fleener (6) |
paper hat wide-eyed
apprentice quick
steps of |
snow
drifts jumping children white
breath David Barr (2) |
graceful
willow tense
standoff David Barr (6) |
cool quiet
evening Victoria Williams (5) |
bright
morning a
dandelion pokes through David Workman (7) This
reminds me of the ongoing fight between a gardener and the weeds. The
gardener probably thought that they had a victory, but is surprised by
the weed that has shown up. They will kill it only for the weed to show
up again soon! Kendra Lee |
a
cold country road David Workman (4) I get a sense of panic from this scene. I can imagine a woman or young adult traveling to a home out in the country and their car breaks down. It is winter with perhaps snow on the ground. They are still far from their destination and have no one to help in their time of need. Their emotions are starting to stir. They are frightened and alone and don't know what to do. Rusty Vinson a
cup of coffee David Workman (7) This reminds me of when I was a kid and our school was closed due to snow. My mom would be sitting at the table just slowly sipping her coffee. There was no rush to drink the coffee and she would be happy she would not have to go to work that day. Julie Edmonson |
sleeping
away all of my worries— the longest day |
five year old
scribbling dryer hums Jeanne Luckenbill (2) |
leaves |
exhaust
rumbles dawn
sun |
chill
in the air coon
dog panting |
crisp
winter walk Mary Lou Walker (5) Reminds me of when I take my dog for a walk at night. In winter the sky is very dark and you can see the stars very clearly in the sky. Everything is all quiet around and the air and ground is very crisp. Jan Runion |
winter
chill-- Kendra Lee (12) I can picture a man and wife in bed on a cold winters night. The wife awakens during the night and wipes the sleep from her eyes. With a chill in the room, she reaches for him to cuddle and keep her warm. She feels safe as she wraps her arms around him and gently falls back asleep. Rusty Vinson April
showers-- Kendra Lee (5) I thought of my mom when I wrote this. My sister and I used to get into a lot of trouble when we played in the rain because of the mess we made. I remember one time we were outside laughing; we must have been having a really good time because my mom came out and joined us. It is something that I will never forget. Kendra Lee |
crackling
fire softens |
first
day of spring |
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