EN340 / IN350 Global Haiku Tradition
Dr. Randy Brooks
Millikin University PACE November 2004
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Left-handed Third Grader

 


desks in a row
no place for the
left-handed third grader


tense stand off
victory dance
broken wish bone


grandpa's farm
brother and sister
playing hide and seek

 

 

no Oprah or Phil
no breakfast in bed
she works


little eyes
nothing to say
on Santa's lap

 

 

Ginko

I took a three-day business trip with another person from work. This Ginko is from everyone I was involved with in the trip. It starts with my wife and I the night before I left preparing for the trip. After I left home I picked up my traveling companion and we drove 500 miles to Avon, MN. I explained what the homework assignment was and how a haiku is born. During our trip we continued with the haiku my wife and I started the night before. We arrived at our destination and my companion explained to the company we were visiting my homework assignment and asked if everyone would join, they all agreed. After the business meeting we sat in the conference room and talked about haiku and read from some of the books. After this learning time we went for a shop tour. The tour lasted about two hours and over the lunch period we did Ginko, or at least our version of Ginko. Here are some of the haiku from this experience.

quiet evening
our hands together         DB
small talk

parting is hard         GB
business trip

folded shirts
in a black bag         DB
toothbrush holder

sad eyes
lonely bed         GB
one unused pillow

hotel numbers         DB
cell phone chargers

last minute details
long kisses GB
goodbye

arrangements are set
papers packed         DB
away I go

finding cup holders         DB
rental car

coat on a        RM
his bag on the floor         DB
waiting

500 miles
haiku homework         DB
time

spitting snow         DB
in the bright sunshine

car shaking
in the head wind         JS
poor gas mileage

going north In December         JS
goofy

twists and turns
of the backroads         DB
shortcut

cornfield, beanfield
beanfield, cornfield         JS
Illinois

pillow clouds         DB
keeping up with traffic

quad cities
John Deere town         JS
CAT reps’ coming through

greasy hamburger in
Grandma resturant         DB
blue

old waitress with new voice         JS
flirting

brown tree
brown grass         DB
one bird

Holiday Inn home
stand and talk         JS
sore butt

lonely night call         DB
home

business suits
teamwork         JS
global haiku

old voices
new faces         DB
positive year end

strong partners         AM
strong friends

quality iron
in station         FM
on time

busy workers
loud machines         BM
shiny steel

smiling faces         AM
secure

strong voice
to the new face         CZ
always remembered

warm goodbyes
strong handshakes         DB
flying south

fuzz buster         DB
going home

veins of America
ribbons of white         JS
McDonalds everywhere

hammer lane
slow trucks         DB
road rage

stiff joints         JS
small car

rest stop
instant relief         DB
traveling

Dave Barr & friends

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