Kukai 2 - Seasonal Haiku
PACE Global Haiku--Kukai 2 Seasonal Haiku, January 2006
(Select 8-10 favorite haiku, and write a ¶ of imagined response to 2 favorites.)
eyes squint |
crisp autumn night Lisa Wilder (4) |
dreamy thoughts Connie Volpe |
fresh footprints Leslee Finney (4) I am a long distance runner and this Haiku sparks memories of waking early during Christmas break, the earth covered in snow and heading out for a long run. My footsteps crunch over the freshly fallen snow, but the sound is absorbed by the cold, crisp air. The cold air stabs at my lungs, but awakens all of my senses as I move throughout the town, seemingly alone in the world. Tracey |
snow boots Katrina Farris (4) |
frost on the pumpkin John Byler (3) |
our way home our way home |
falling leaves John Byler (7) falling leaves |
winter campfire |
unfinished snowman Matt Lee (4) |
a fresh cut pumpkin John Byler (5) I love this Haiku from Kukai 2. I was born on Halloween, so I guess it was meant to be my favorite season. This Haiku makes me think of going to the pumpkin patch, picking out that perfect pumpkin, drinking hot spiced apple cider and going through the haunted house that they always have at the pumpkin patch. I can smell the inside of the pumpkin as we carve it. I can taste the seasoned and baked pumpkin seeds that we retrieved from our own pumpkin that we just carved. I see the excitement on my childrens faces as I take their picture holding their carved pumpkins. After we have carved the pumpkins, we put a tea light candle in them and take them out to the porch. We light the candles, turn off the porch light and then go into the yard in front of the porch to enjoy our Halloween pumpkins. Leslee a fresh cut pumpkin Cutting the pumpkin for Halloween is a big event in our house. This haiku takes me back to those days. We all gather at the table discussing faces. When we all decide on one special one we would start to clean and cut the pumpkin. Before we would know it a jack-o-lantern would appear, coming to life as we lit the candle. Stephanie |
fresh wet snow Jill Friesner (4) |
the autumn leaves Lisa Wilder (2) |
polar bear swim John Byler |
a warm spring day Crystal Lutz (3) a warm spring day |
kites in the air John Byler (4) |
spring showers Jill Friesner (7) spring showers spring showers |
looking up to |
crackling bonfire Stephanie Meis (4) crackling bon fire in the moonlight |
hot and humid I have two images from this poem. The first one is fishing back home as a boy. It didn't matter the conditions. Oftentimes the bugs would bite way more than the fish would. In Illinois, the humidity can be awful. Combine both of these things, sitting on the river bank and fishing with my dad and grandpa is still pleasant. I also can envision bears fishing on the river bank an not caring about the heat or bugs either. They are fishing out of necessity and hunger is more important than avoiding heat and bugs. This haiku didn't hit me originally as I had to fly through them too quickly during kukai. I think it needs to be born. :) Matt hot and humid |
we sneak to the creek Crystal Lutz (6) |
November night |
a long day at the pool |
forbidden hill Crystal Lutz (7) This reminds me of when I was a child and we went sledding. I lived by the sewer plant, and there was a hill on our side that we were to stay off of. At the bottom of the hill on the other side was a sewage stream leading to the plant. We would go sledding there and laugh the entire time until we got caught. Katrina |
Christmas Eve Crystal Lutz (6) Christmas is my favorite holiday of the year. I can remember as a little girl praying that it would snow on Christmas Eve, so Santa would bring my presents. I can remember listening to the radio and them giving the siting of Santa. It seemed like there was always snow on Christmas Eve. Now as I have my own children, they have carried on the same tradition that I did as a child. I still wish for snow on Christmas Eve and Christmas. To me it just puts the final touch on the holiday season. My parent's would tell me that even if it didn't snow that Santa was magic and he could still make his deliveries without snow. It is so peaceful and calm when it snows and that just goes hand in hand with the meaning of Christmas. Kelley Christmas Eve |
the early morning dew Stephanie Meis the early morning dew |
snowflakes falling gently snowflakes falling gently pure white new snow |
frost covered window Stephanie Meis (4) |
cold and windy Kelley Larrick (4) |
frozen lake Matt Lee (4) I imagine a small frozen lake. It has been cold for quite a while and the ice is thick and solid. There is a layer of snow on top of the ice. A tent has been set up on the lake to provide a shelter from the cold and wind. The fishermen (a father and his young son) have drilled a hole in the lake to do some ice fishing. The hole is a little larger than a soup can. There are a couple buckets turned upside down for the fishermen to sit on and a small pile of fish lay nearby. The young son has gotten a bite on his line and has begun to reel it in. Joy turns to sadness when they realize that the fish the boy has caught is too large to fit through the hole they have cut out. The father frantically chips away at the ice with his pocketknife until the hole has been widened just enough to squeeze the fish through. When they finally reel their catch in the father and son joyously dance around on the ice before packing everything in and heading for home. John |
thick, wet snowflakes Tracy Nash (2) This reminds me of a time when it was snowing and I was standing by myself outside. The snowflakes were huge and they stuck to everything they landed on, including me. It was falling straight down, almost like a torrential downpour but the beautiful thing about it was it was dead silent outside. I couldnt hear any birds, cars, or anything! It is was a beautiful thing to experience and this haiku reminded me of it. Jill thick, wet snowflakes thick, wet snowflakes |
unbearable wind-chill |
midnight sky Lisa Wilder (2) |
cold winter morning Kelley Larrick (3) |
glitter sparkling |
layers and layers of clothing Leslee Finney (7) layers and layers of clothing layers and layers of clothing |
an explosion of color Kelley Larrick (5) This haiku puts at a lake or park on the fourth of July. She paints a very vivid picture with this haiku. I hear the booming as the fireworks explode. I see the colorful display of fireworks. The fourth of July is always very hot and I think of getting there early to get a good seat. Then you fight off mosquitoes while waiting for the display to start. All of it for the Grand Finale. Crystal This is such a happy time. I love the Fourth of July everyone is happy and enjoying themselves. This haiku takes me to a full day at the pool, an awesome dinner on the grill, and capping the evening off with a gorgeous fireworks display. Connie |
August sun |
marshmallows over |
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