Mattoon PACE Global Haiku--Kukai 2 Favorites, Fall 2005
turkey Starr Dawkins I didn't get a chance to say this was one of my favorites, but it definitely was. It is very true and typical of a family Thanksgiving. When I was a little girl, my family would all gather at my grandmother's house. Aunts, uncles, cousins; they all would be there for the Thanksgiving feast. We would have a big dinner at 1:00. The adults would be in the dining room and the kids in the living room at the "children's table." After dinner, the men would all go down the basement and play poker into the evening. The children were only allowed downstairs if you were bringing them a beer or more pretzels. The women would congregate in the kitchen, talking and drinking endless cups of coffee and washing mounds of dishes. The children, well, we would go outside and play if it was nice outside, and if it wasn't, we would play in the dining room and the living room. Around 5 or 6pm, the women would set out the leftovers and we would have turkey sandwiches and whatever else was left over from dinner. My family is all scattered now, and this haiku brought back some very good memories for me. Jenny |
after turkey Marlene Gardner This haiku really hit home. This is something that takes place with my family every Thanksgiving. Actually, it is most holidays for that matter. After dinner, the women sit around the kitchen and talk about anything and everything that comes to mind. The men will join in every once in awhile but are usually either glued to the football game on T.V. or asleep in the recliner after getting their bellies full. It is something that I look forward to on the holidays. It is always nice to hear what has been going on in everyone else's lives. Brooke |
turkey in the oven |
hot rolls Starr Dawkins (2) |
chitterlings to be cleaned |
Thanksgiving dinner Maria Clark (4) This represents the holidays from a child's point of view. Holidays are meant for the children. As adults we can re-experience them from a child's eyes. They have such excitement and anticipation. You can tell they can't wait for Thanksgiving to be over with so they can start celebrating Christmas. I can just imagine a mother being busy trying to make it through the Thanksgiving cooking and her child comes bopping by singing a Christmas tune. Then the mother would remember all of the shopping and things to do for Christmas. I think this has a universal element, something we have all seen. I also think it is something we all have done as a child, and maybe if we are lucky, we catch ourselves doing it every once in awhile. Great haiku; gets me in the Christmas spirit. Jamie This haiku reminds me of how magical this time of year seemed was when I was a child. Thanksgiving always felt like the official kickoff for the whole holiday season. Although we were never allowed to decorate for Christmas or to sing carols until Thanksgiving was over. I can remember my sister and I singing Christmas songs on the way home from Thanksgiving dinner at the grandmother's house. We would climb into the back of the station wagon and wail away with every Christmas song we could think of. Starr |
sun rays dance upon her face |
simmering black-eyed peas |
all my favorite foods Maria Clark (5) |
sunny winter day |
tiny foot prints in the snow Megan Alwardt (7) From the tiny footprints, you imagine that there is a small child playing in the snow. While playing a snowman is built and is not perfect in anyway. The snowman is loved because of his special qualities that have been put in place by this small child. Wearing one pink glove gives you the feeling that she shared her warmth with the snowman or maybe the weather has taken its toll on the snowman. Missy |
first snow Missy Goad (7) |
spring thaw |
I lift my head up, close my eyes Jenny Munro (3) I love the spring and summer months, and unfortunately I am not thrilled with the cold weather that accompanies winter. Every winter it occurs to me that there are many more months of cold temperatures than warm. I get Spring fever about December and then, impatiently wait for the first "Spring" day the remainder of the winter. When that day finally comes, I can barely contain myself. I start imagining the warmth of the sun on my face, the smell of cookouts and flowers, children playing outside till dark, long walks, and most of all just the relaxation that summer brings. Megan |
spring sunshine |
howling winter winds Starr Dawkins (2) |
winter night |
raaaaaake
..plink |
gentle snow falling |
huddled against the biting wind Donna Hyland (3) I realize that this is about Donna's dad but this is almost exactly how my Grandma's funeral went. This particular year though it was rain and not snow. There was so much rain that we had to use someone else's plot for the service and then when they could they moved her. It was still very cold since it was in December. Mickey For me, Donna's haiku paints a very vivid picture of one of the saddest days in my life, the day that we buried my best friend. It was on a blustery winter day when we, the clique, as we were known, stood around her gravesite and mourned our loss of a devoted, cherished friend. For most of us, I do not think a day goes by that we are not reminded of her, although now, they are happy memories instead of sad sorrows. Susan Love |
our snowplow escort Donna Hyland (4)
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beside the curb Marlene Gardner (2) |
orange, red, yellow Mickey Hvrol (4) Visually stunning! This haiku is filled with rich colors and strong feelings. Orange, the color of energy, ambition, and strength, red, the color of passion, intensity, and love, and yellow the color of creativity, imagination and optimism. All these colors piled on top of each other whether literally burning or not, create such power that their image is burnt into your mind and heart. I love this haiku! It fuels my spirit and makes me want to seize the day. Maria |
seasalt in my eyes |
icy steps await |
a single fur tree branch Marlene Gardner |
winter morning Maria Clark (2) |
baking, baking Jenny Munro (2) This haiku takes me back to summer-time tanning during my high school years. The baking reference really hit home, since we would sometimes set a timer so that we were tanning evenly on both sides. When the time went off, we would baste ourselves with more tanning oil and flip! We truly were baking in the sun. Donna |
hot sun |
strapless white gown Brooke Weemer (2) |
the street is hushed Jenny Munro (3) |
leaves still falling |
shorts folded neatly Jenny Munro (2) |
cold and numb Brooke Weemer (4) |
flowers blooming |
third baseman Mickey Hvrol |
sunshine hiding |
angels appear Charla Bond (5) To grandma her angels are her grandchildren. It's the first heavy snow and the children are visiting Grandma. A tradition to many is to make snow angels. Grandma's special little angels create these snow angels. As she peers out the window as they leave, the angels they left upon the yard leave behind memories. Missy |
blankets in the grass Megan Alwardt (5) |
cold and waiting |
first dusting of snow Starr Dawkins (3) |
cautious paws Marlene Gardner (5) |
naughty or nice? |
windy winter day |
children peek outside the door Marlene Gardner (4) This haiku embodies the spirit of Christmas. To think of all the children who without anonymous Santas would go without a single Christmas gift makes me sad. I picture several children in layers of worn out clothing looking out the window of their rundown trailer. I can hear the excitement in their voices when they realize they werent forgotten and there are wrapped gifts for them just sitting outside their trailer door. Maria |
one more gift . . . Missy Goad (2) |
hide-and-go-seek Donna Hyland (5) |
full moon looming low Marlene Gardner (4) |
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