Haiku Matching Contest - Wabi Favorites
PACE Global Haiku Traditions Fall 2007
pearl necklace Danae Fultz |
chipped tea cup Tamara Foster |
cheerleader written in RED Destany Lucas |
summer day Josh Parmenter |
pearl necklace |
summer day |
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top quarter champion summer day |
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top half champion in the autumn evening |
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bottom quarter champion in the autumn evening |
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oak kitchen table |
in the autumn evening |
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photos and cards Josh Parmenter |
oak kitchen table Tamara Foster |
summer breeze Josh Parmenter |
in the autumn evening Danae Fultz |
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top half champion in the autumn evening
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champion worn out—
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bottom half champion worn out—
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repeated— Destany Lucas |
winter day Josh Parmenter |
snow covered bridge Danae Fultz |
halloween night Josh Parmenter |
winter day |
snow covered bridge |
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top quarter champion snow covered bridge |
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bottom half champion worn out— |
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bottom quarter champion worn out— |
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worn out— |
reflection in the mirror |
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worn out— Destany Lucas |
snowy evening Danae Fultz |
first loose tooth Tamara Foster |
reflection in the mirror Tamara Foster |
reader responses
pearl necklace Danae Fultz |
chipped tea cup Tamara Foster |
photos and cards Josh Parmenter |
oak kitchen table Tamara Foster |
I liked the match up between the two of these in the contest. I think being a grand daughter and feeling a presence of the family legacy I feel drawn to both of these. The pearl necklace reminds me of a necklace you treasure so much that it stays in the box because you are too afraid to actually wear it. The beautiful necklace needs to be displayed somewhere and be appreciated for the memories that it holds. I wanted the teacup to feel like it is displayed in a home that maybe no longer uses the cup but has it out with other treasured belongings. The teacup only means something to the owner and others may wonder why it is even displayed in the first place. My teacup is on a small shelf in my kitchen on the small saucer for everyone to look at if they want and if not it is mine to enjoy! —Tammy I like this "pearl necklace" haiku because it shows the value of our families possessions. Most people just through their jewelry in a pile and never worry about it. This poem shows how our grandma cherishes a necklace. Having the necklace in the box gives the jewelry a place it rests in. I remember my grandma’s jewelry box. Everything had its place in the box. Necklaces, ear rings, and old money went in certain places. This poem reminds me of going to grandma’s house. —Josh |
This is a interesting pair of poems. The piano and the table are part of our homes. These things can have other uses instead of there original. The piano in our living room has served as a mantel for years. The piano has been out of tune every since I can remember. The oak table I see is one people don’t eat on anymore. Maybe the table is covered with stuff. The memories come from a long time ago when the table was new. Memories come back to you every time you see the table. —Josh I really like this haiku and can identify with it completely. I inherited my great grandparents piano. This piano has the bill of sale in the bench that my grandparents paid $345 and were set up on a $5 weekly repayment plan. This was the first item of furniture that they purchased together as a married couple. My great grandmother played the piano and I remember her teaching me to play the chorus to Softly and Tenderly when I was about 8 years old. Now that the piano is mine it has been the place to display family pictures and treasures. When our basement is completed we will unwrap it from the plastic protecting it from drywall mud, have it tuned, and sign the kids up for lessons. Someone should definitely know how to play it! —Tammy |
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pearl necklace Danae Fultz |
summer day Josh Parmenter |
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Both of these haiku are talking about 2 items that are older but valued. They both hold sentimental value. Another similarity between the two is the word "still" that is used in both Haiku. —Danae |
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