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Global Haiku • Millikin University • September 2015

Reading and Math
A mother sits
Child moans

A mother sits while
Child moans
Reading and math

A child moans while
Mother sits
Reading and math

a mother sits while
a child moans
reading and math

a child moans doing
reading and math
a mother sits

A mother sits
A child moans
Reading and Math

A mother sits
Child moans
Reading and math

a child moans
while mother sits
reading and math

a mother sits and
child moans
reading and math

 


 

hand and hand
walking in the sand
perfect vacation

hand and hand
walking in the sand
perfect vacation

my hand in your hand
while walking in the sand
-- perfect vacation

hand in hand
with sand under my toes
-- perfect vacation

Vacation in the sand
Walking hand in hand

walking in the sand
hand in hand
perfect vacation

Walking in the sand
Hand and hand
Perfect vacation

hand and hand
perfect vacation
walking in the sand

hand and hand
the perfect vacation
footsteps in the sand

vacation in the sand
walking hand in hand

walking in the sand
hand in hand
vacation

walking in the sand
hand and hand
perfect vacation

perfect vacation
walking in the sand
hand and hand

Holding hands,
In the sand
What a perfect vacation

Hand in hand
Our toes in the sand
The perfect vacation

 

 

 

 

 

 

Brisk October night
Porch lights
Kids go door to door

brisk October night
porch lights on
kids going door to door

October night
porch lights on
kids go door to door

Crisp October night
Kids
From porch light to porch light

On the brisk October night
Porch lights glow
Door to door

crisp October night
kids
from porch light to porch light

crisp October night
kids run
from porch light to porch light

Crisp October night
Kids go
To porch lights

To porch lights
kids go
on an October night

Saturday morning
biscuits and gravy
good days

Saturday morning
memories
biscuits n gravy

Saturday morning
biscuits n gravy
good ole’ days

Early Saturday we eat
Biscuits and gravy
The best days

Biscuits and gravy
We eat together
Every Saturday

Saturday morning
good ol’ days
biscuits and gravy

Saturday mornings
biscuits and gravy
oh, the good ol’ days

biscuits and gravy
Saturday morning
Good days

good days
Saturday morning
biscuits and gravy


Bubbling fountain
Scattered change
Another hopeful wish

Another hopeful wish with the
Bubbling fountain
Scattered change

Scattered change fills the
Bubbling fountain
Another hopeful wish

bubbling fountain
change in hand
another hopeful wish

change in hand
bubbling fountain
another hopeful wish

jets of water arises
change thrown about
hopeful wishes

fountain sprays
on scattered change
hopeful wishes

bubbling fountain
change in hand
another hopeful wish

bubbling fountain
full of change and
hopeful wishes

Bubbling fountain
Scattered change
hopeful wishes

Sparkling fountain
Change scattered
in hopeful wishes

 


 

 

The sun shinning bright
The smell of the grass
The weekend is here

Sun shining bright on
The grass
Weekend is here

On the grass the
Sun is shinning
Weekend is here

the smell of the grass
the sun shining bright
the weekend is here

sun shining bright
smell of grass
weekend is here

on the grass the
sun is shining
weekend is here

sun shining bright on
the grass
weekend is here

Bright sun shining
And the smell of cut grass
The weekend is here

The weekend is here
The smell of cut grass
Laying in the warm sun

sunny weekend
fresh-cut grass

bright sun
fresh-cut grass
hello weeken

sun shining bright
on the grass
weekend is here

on the grass
the sun is shining
weekend is here

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


leaves changing
we go for a ride
he steals a kiss

riding through
the changing leaves
a kiss is stolen

Gone for a ride
The leaves are changing
As he steals a kiss

He steals a kiss
As we watch
The leaves change

leaves changing
he steals a kiss as
we go for a ride

he steals a kiss
we go for a ride as
leaves are changing


grandma's kitchen
gooey chocolate chip cookies
in my mouth

nobody looking
grandma's gooey cookies
in my mouth

grandma's kitchen
a gooey cookie in
my mouth

grandma’s kitchen
a gooey chocolate chip cookie in
my mouth

grandma’s kitchen
a gooey chocolate chip cookie melts
in my mouth

grandma’s kitchen
gooey chocolate chip cookies in
my mouth

grandma’s kitchen
gooey cookies
all mine

 

 

 

hospital room
greatest feeling I know
becoming a Dad

Becoming a dad
The greatest feeling
I know

Waiting in the hospital
The greatest moment occurs
Becoming a dad

Hospital room
First time holding her
I’m a dad

I’m a dad
She smiles
In the hospital room

Hospital room
becoming a Dad
greatest feeling

golden sun setting
blue ocean tides roll
hammock

golden sun setting
blue ocean tides roll
hammock

golden sun setting
watching ocean tides roll
hammock

from my hammock
the golden sun sets
ocean tides roll

golden sunset
ocean tides roll
as hammock sways

golden sunset
blue ocean tides
hammock swings

the church bells toll
all appears still
they walk out as one

As all appeared still and quiet
The church bells begin to toll
They walk the doors as one

Church bell begin to ring
All stand in silence to
Watch them leave as one

All appeared
The church bells toll
They walk out as one

All appeared
the church bells toll
they walk out

 


© 2013, Randy Brooks • Millikin University
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