Haiku Kukai 2 - Seasonal Haiku & Some Senryu Favorites
Global Haiku • Millikin University • September 2015
the children run through Heather Allen (2) |
Grandma's old mason jar Alisha Lafferty (5) This haiku makes me think about catching fireflies. We used to catch them and put them in jars all the time. I still find it amazing how these insects can illuminate themselves. It also makes me think about how all of us try to glow to find a lover. Joe We are clearly talking about fireflies in this haiku. I like this one because it takes me back to my childhood. I see my grandma and how she always has everything we would ever need to do pretty much anything. Of course she has mason jars available to hold fireflies when we grandchildren need one. Nature’s flashlight is a very neat way to describe fireflies. It gives me a visual of an open field filled with tons of fireflies on a warm summer night; peaceful. Heather Again, this one really reminds me of childhood memories. I remember seeing a cartoon or a TV show that had people putting lightning bugs in jars with holes tapped in the top and it almost being like nature’s lantern or flashlight in this case. That was so much fun. Me and my cousins used to go around catching lightning bugs, especially at my grandma’s house and keeping them in jars with holes in the top. Kasara |
cloudless day |
drunken night |
locks changed Amanda Chappell (2) |
the rough gravel Heather Allen (2) |
blistery August sun quiet, glass top lake summer breeze |
a child's laugh s I n Heather Allen (2) I love the playfulness from this haiku. This bring back memories from my childhood about going out to our swing set. My sister and I had a heavy duty swing set that allowed for us to swing really high. It was the best one in our neighborhood. I also think about that one swing in grade school that everyone raced to during recess. I remember the freedom we felt swing as high as we could on the swings. No cares in the world. Diana |
waves rocking Kristi Adams This just makes me think of a fun day on a boat with friends and forgetting that the sun is melting your skin. It takes me back to when I was a kid. My family had a boat and we went waterskiing many a days in the summer. I love the water and a tan well so I would forget how short a time it takes to burn. I ended up putting aloe on my shoulders after most trips. This was great memories from my childhood. Dara |
taking the steps |
mom and daughter Kathy Housh (3) |
lying in bed Amanda Chappell (2) |
one more call Amanda Chappell (7) |
the deadline is nearing for |
ice on the windshield Sarah Downing (6) |
bumblebees |
you and I Kristi Adams (5) This makes me think about the upcoming winter me and my fiance will have our own place and makes me feel happy. Me and him in our own place relaxing drinking hot cocoa and listening to music. Also this makes me think of spongebob because it was a episode where he kept repeating hot cocoa. Marshaya |
Christmas Eve |
cold winter night as Kathy Housh There’s nothing better than sitting by a loved one, cuddled up on a cold winter night. A warm beverage of your choice is always an added bonus. Hot cocoa is a hot commodity in our household and marshmallows are a must. This just makes me think about a cold winter night looking outside of my sliding glass door ate the moon shining over an empty country field that has already been harvested as you enjoy being inside in the warmth. Alisha |
snow angels and Heather Allen (6) I can envision my daughter and I playing in the snow. She learned how to make snow angels last year and built her first snowman. Now she always makes snow angels in the carpet when she lays down on it. I know that this winter she will want to make lots of snow angels together. Catrina |
red, green, blue |
barren trees Diane Warmoth (5) That time of year is here! It is getting cold and my body wants to do nothing but rest and keep warm. This feeling of being shut inside for the winter comes to mind. Also, a yearning for spring to quickly return fills my mind. Joe |
brothers play with their trains |
white trees |
snowman families |
playoff baseball |
bonfires |
80's one day Jacob Dellert (11) |
cool breeze |
leaves in the yard Jacob Dellert (4) We have a rather large park like yard with what seems to be millions of trees. The yard is covered in leaves this time of year. My son has a blue plastic rake that he rakes up what little leaves he can or gets on the mower with my husband to help mulch them up. Jennifer This haiku made me giggle because right before I left home for class I looked out my kitchen window and seen my boyfriend in the yard with his one year old son. Both standing there making their best attempt to corral the unruly leaves. I smiled with happiness at the two, feeling blessed to have gotten to witness this moment. A young son looking up to his father, learning how to do things, and enjoying time together doing the simplest of things. Victoria |
foggy night |
mid October Steve Stewart (2) There is nothing worse than people celebrating holidays too far in advance. Some people put out Christmas decorations well before Thanksgiving or even Halloween. I hate driving around and seeing this or going into a store and seeing that they have set up for Christmas sales in August or September. Jacob |
pumpkins carved |
Sunday afternoon Steve Stewart (4) |
day after Thanksgiving Steve Stewart (9) I like this haiku because I can easily relate to it. My wife loves to shop on black Friday and sometimes she has me go with her. It is a total nightmare, and it has taken away what the meaning of Thanksgiving is supposed to be. I would like to see black Friday go away. Craig I liked this haiku very much! I have been in this situation many times. Trying to avoid the hustle and bustle of shopping on black Friday, not to mention the injuries you can get when trying to get that one great priced item. After reading the first line, I didn’t know what to expect, this left me wanting to read more. I like that they said clearly they were trying to avoid the day. Sarah |
September evening Craig Harshman (6) |
brisk Friday night Steve Stewart (6) My son is the quarterback for his football team so this haiku immediately takes me to the memories of watching him play football every Friday night. I hear the crowd cheering for the players and the constant ringing of cow bells for touchdowns and first downs. There is nothing better than watching your son play the sport that he has the most passion for. Kathy |
the sun fades Craig Harshman |
fallen leaves Dara Johnson (8) I chose this one because true love vows is pretty emotional. Two people committing themselves to each other is emotional as it gets for me. Obviously the atmosphere is fall because of the first line “fallen leaves.” There is somewhat a social status because they are having a wedding. If there wasn’t a social status, I imagine the wedding would be at the courthouse or somewhere not as pretty as the scene they have set. Kasara |
sunny afternoon |
opening morning |
peanut butter and chocolate |
house full of family |
first day of fall |
Grandma’s house Grandmas house always had a distinct smell. It might not have been something cooking but it was a smell that I will never forget. If you wanted grandma to bake you something she had to clean out the oven first. That was the place that grandma kept pots and pans or special candy, it was rarely used for baking. In this haiku they were describing what grandmas house smelled like that day, it takes me to the holidays when you are with family. Jennifer |
clocks fall back Steve Stewart (6) |
porch light on |
hay bales fill up |
me & grandpa |
brown leaves crunching Sarah Downing (8) |
raking the leaves |
the midnight moon glowing in |
late October trip Sarah Downing I like this poem because it brings me back to a time when I was little and my mother took me to the pumpkin patch with my sisters. We picked out the biggest pumpkins we could find but when we went to put in are car we didn’t have enough room so we were all squished in between pumpkins all the way home! This poem makes me feel happy. Katjia |
my friend Zyrtec Diane Warmoth (5) |
the quieting down |
moonlit night |
the crunch Katjia Eisele (4) |
family |
no more cicadas Joe Stroud This stuck out to me because it really highlights progression in the first and second lines. The cicadas no longer chirping means summer is over, but the birds leaving means winter is about to start. This automatically sets that cold scene for me when you see all the birds flying overhead leaving for the winter. Kasara |
leaves piled up from Alisha Lafferty (9) |
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