3 Matching Contest Favorites - Things Worn In - September 2015 - Millikin University
boards creak and groan Diane Warmoth |
rocking Nystasia Harris-Shelley |
home run Marshaya Sangster |
aging fans Joe Stroud |
rocking |
aging fans |
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aging fans top quarter champion |
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TOP half Chamption worn out baseball glove
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bottom quarter champion worn out baseball glove |
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dad's old baseball cap |
worn out baseball glove |
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dad's old baseball cap Heather Allen |
bill ripped Kasara Welch |
worn out baseball glove Sarah Downing |
broke in leather Kasara Welch |
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TOP half champion worn out baseball glove
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CHAMPION creased edges
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creased edges BOTTOM half champion |
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creased edges Catrina LaDew |
that jewelry box Kristi Adams |
Grandma's engagement ring Jacob Dellert |
withered dry single rose Joe Stroud |
creased edges |
withered dry single rose |
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creased edges top quarter champion |
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BOTTOM half champion creased edges
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bottom quarter champion three inches of dust |
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three inches of dust |
the roaring engine |
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pulling a camper Dara Johnson |
three inches of dust Jennifer Rose |
the roaring engine Kathy Housh |
that old Chevelle Jacob Dellert |
© 2015, Randy Brooks Millikin University. All rights returned to authors upon publication.
Reader Responses
boards creak and groan |
rocking |
home run |
aging fans |
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I can just see an elderly couple rocking in their chairs, having nothing but time to kill. Even though they lose much of their time sitting there rocking, it is what they love to do and they do it together. It is their tradition. The old wicker chairs are weathered and creak by now, but there is not point in getting new one at this age. Plus they are perfectly fine for rocking. Catrina |
I think this was written by a Chicago Cubs fan. All they want is a World Series title so they can stop being labeled the “loveable losers”. They were envisioning their future for this season before it was ended later in the week. They wanted to see a homerun hit in the World Series by their favorite team, that would have ended the game and brought a championship back to Chicago. Cub fans are so desperate for a title that, the world ending isn’t really the world ending but the world in shock that the Cubs finally won. Jacob |
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dad's old baseball cap |
bill ripped |
worn out baseball glove |
broke in leather |
I think this is from a son's point of view. His dad passed away. They used to bond over a certain baseball team. His dad probably wore that hat every day and it was something that defines him. I don't think the son wears the hat, but he keeps it in an obvious place around his house. Kristi |
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A lot of things were passed to my cousins growing up. I was the youngest of eleven. I know of stories of wiffle ball in the backyard at grandma’s house and a window needing replaced. Amanda I like this haiku because it makes me think about a girl who loved this old glove of her grandfathers and was upset when her little brother was given it instead of her. I too had an old glove that was my grandfathers and it had his name written under the wrist strap. When reading this haiku I can smell that old worn leather and hear the snap of the leather as a I catch a ball from my grandfather. Joe
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creased edges |
that jewelry box |
Grandma's engagement ring |
withered dry single rose |
This haiku is full of meaning to me. My dad has my mom’s senior picture in his wallet. The edges are definitely creased and worn. My parents have been together 43 years now and it hasn’t always been a bed of roses for them. I can remember some very difficult times growing up but my dad has always carried that picture with him. It is always the first thing he sees when he opens his wallet. Kathy This haiku is just so sweet. I visualize a picture of an elderly man who has had a picture of his wife from when the first met tucked away in his wallet after years and years of being together. You could also take it as a father carrying a picture of his daughter when she was little and now she is growing up so fast. This haiku is just a happy feel good haiku to me. The creased edges make you think the picture has been in the wallet for a long time. Alisha This haiku makes me think of multiple things and that’s why I love this. It reminds me of a father carrying a picture of his daughter or son, a husband carrying a picture of his wife, and even a grandfather carrying a picture of one of his grandchildren. Obviously it’s cherished because the crease edges symbolize that it’s been in and out of the wallet as the man shows off pictures of the people he loves. Kasara I envision an old man holding his wallet he has had for years and between the fold a photo of the woman he loves is tucked in tightly. Safe for him to look at when he opens the wallet each day. Each day being reminded of their love and the special bond that share after years of being together. The type of love story we all dream about. True love. Victoria |
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I was not given a rose on my first date but it makes me feel like the man knew this was the woman for him. I also think she was smitten by him if she kept the rose for so many years. We don’t know how many years but it makes me think it was more than a couple years. This is just a very warming true love haiku. Love is in the air. Dara |
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pulling a camper |
three inches of dust |
the roaring engine |
that old Chevelle |
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These two have so much in common. They both have to do with old cool cars and they both give you the impression that there is or was work being done on them. If they were both the same kind of car, they could both be a continuous story. It would start out with the car that sits in the garage that needs a lot of work done. It then turns into a roaring car that a father and son worked on together. I picture a father and son looking at the car sit in the garage with a lot of work to do and then a year later they are firing it up to go for a drive after they have finished. Steve |
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© 2015, Randy Brooks Millikin University. All rights returned to authors upon publication.