EN340 / IN350 Global Haiku Tradition
Dr. Randy Brooks
Spring 2004 |
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Casey Turnipseed
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Love,
Loyalty & Friendship
haiku by
Casey
Turnipseed
As
a junior attending Millikin University I have been exposed
to numerous aspects of life. As an only child I was not subjected
to sharing my feelings with others all the time so I became
accustomed to writing poetry. When the college life was introduced
to me it only seemed right to continue my writing. However,
I had never been exposed to haiku prior to this semester.
I have learned the style, purpose, and reason for writing haiku as well as the fulfillment it can offer one such as
myself. My document is titled, "Love, Loyalty, and Friendship"
because of my strong belief in each of these. Each one is a value or priority in
my life of which I have an undying passion for. I even have
a tattoo on my lower back dedicated to these values.
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Love
is my number one value in this great adventure we like to
call, '`life." Without love in my life nothing would
be what it has turned out to be today. As a young girl growing
up at Millikin I fell in love with a wonderfully unique
person. He was able to show me life through his eyes, which
was very different from anything I have ever experienced
through my own. I attempted to capture my emotions and feelings
within this poetry in hopes that the reader could feel what
I was feeling. Just as love goes through stages and phases.
. . so does my poetry. Loyalty was my second choice for
my lifetime priorities. I am a strong believer that without
loyalty no relationship is able to survive. My relationship
with my family members and friends depends entirely on loyalty
because without it we would never be there for each other
when needed. Our loyalty is what gives us strength and confidence
in others. In my mind, those who you are loyal to, will
be loyal to you in return.
Lastly,
I would like to talk about friendship because it is the
rock that most people lean on when times get rough. I cannot
honestly say I could exist in this world without my friends.
The haiku I have enclosed within this document was each
written with regards to a certain memory I have within my
heart. A few of them are from the recent visit to Panama
City Beach for spring break, while others are random memories
from parties and things of that sort. I hope you enjoy this
haiku document just as I have enjoyed creating it for you.
Please keep in mind that with each new step in life, there
is another chance for change. My haiku have been edited
and so has my life in that I have decided that it was best
to make changes with relationships, decisions, and future
priorities. I would like to leave you with one final thought
that is something I think about everyday when I wake up
in the morning. "Remember everyday is a new day, there
are no mistakes in it yet." Casey
One
aspect of Casey's haiku that comes to mind very quickly
when one enjoys her selection is the aspect of discovery.
A lot of her haiku deal with discovering something and the
awe and beauty around that discovery. But just as with the
author herself, a closer look at Casey's haiku reveals a
deeper layer of observation and emotion and a deeper level
of understanding of human nature. For instance, my personal
favorite in this collection is
the
shore
I walk
daydreaming
I
like this one because of the sense of peace that is evoked.
I get the image of someone walking down a lonely beach totally
oblivious to everything around them: the sun, wind, surf,
birds, and themselves. This is one of those moments when
we get lost in thought and simply forget what we are doing.
I imagine this person ends up walking longer and further
than they had planned due to this moment of calm. It is
also interesting how she places the violent strength of
the ocean's shore alongside a person walking peaceful. These
two images juxtaposed create an interesting sense of tension
in the images which helps to reinffirce how lost in thought
this person truly is. Perhaps the thing I love most about
Casey's haiku is the emotion her haiku carry. Her section
on "love" poetry. Here she takes us on a thrill
ride along the highs and lows of a
relationship. In particular, her haiku
is
he watching?
My hand
t em es
r bl
gives
us a great sense of nervousness regarding if our beloved
is watching us. With the play on the word "tremble"
we can literally see her hand trembling about and then we
as readers are left to wonder did he watch her. We are filled
with a sense of pressure to perform and also the anxiety
that comes from performing in front of someone. I've had
the pleasure to know Casey for the past two years as a friend
and as a result have been able to learn from her unique
perspective on life. This perspective is a major influence
in her haiku and I have been privileged to read and watch
as this influence provides the strength for her haiku to
shine. Travis Meisenheimer
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church
blessing
I wear a mark
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It's
time!
to ride
My horse so pretty in the pasture
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laying
in a row
we drink
and tan to a golden brown
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©2004 Randy Brooks, Millikin University, Decatur, Illinois || all rights reserved for original authors
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