EN340 / IN350 Global Haiku Tradition
Dr. Randy Brooks
Spring 2004
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Snapshots
A Haiku Collection

by

Maureen Ritter

I have often thought that my mind functions somewhat like a digital camera, taking pictures of moments that I save in the back of my consciousness, to be recalled later when I am searching for inspiration for an artistic endeavor. This semester, I have found no better proof for my theory than my haiku experience. This collection symbolizes four and a half months of gathering memories that had lain dormant for years. As I read through some of my best work from the semester, I realized that I had finally found a way to express those "snapshots" from my youth. Haiku is the only art form that has allowed me to escape verbosity and capture the true, simple meaning behind these memories. They exist as pictures in my mind, and so it is only fitting to express these remembrances as images. Haiku's simplicity intrinsically negates the need for excessive detail and long-winded description and allows the reader to focuse on the sights, sounds, and smells of the scene before them

I have gathered here a collection of twenty-five snapshots that not only represent my best attempts at haiku, but also some of my finest memories from my twenty-year life. I have tried to stay true to my own definition of haiku as I moved through the semester: simple pictures with a world of possibilities and meaning behind them. Sometimes, all we need to do is slow down and relish each experience, taking snapshots and making memories to sustain us for years to come. —Maureen

Reader's Introduction

Maureen Ritter has compiled a collection of her finest haiku. With these haiku, Maureen has taken a dive into complex creativity with a simplistic format. She captures the essence of the moment, while exploring the reaches of her pen. Through images and sensory words, she captivates the reader, allowing them to be anywhere from the top of a volcano, to a family gathering.

Most importantly, Maureen's collection shows the reader her vast experience with, and knowledge of the English language. She wields her words like a sword, deftly making her selections and placing them where they are at their utmost effectiveness. You can smell the "horeseradish" sliding down the drain and see the "infinity" beyond the cliff, just as the "city girl" sees it. Her crisp sense of language and humor make her voice strong and distinct. Her haiku are a joy to read. They demand much more than just a quick glance. —Katherine B. Steimann


open road
spring breeze drifts
through the backseat


mom's garden—
among the perennials
the baby rabbit's eyes


one beer too many
my uncle
heckles the ump


ice on the hill
brother slips
from our sled


grandma's clothesline
linen sheets flap
in the spring breeze


snow in her hair
he leans in
for a kiss


Hawaii Haiku

friendly white clouds
her mai tai
needs no umbrella

quiet village market
weathered fingers
string the puka shells

from the punchbowl
I drink in
the island

island sunrise—
on the volcano top
my breath

water falls
into a sacred pool
ancient reflection

sunset on lanai
ukulele song
lulls me to sleep

midnight beach walk
my footprints bathed
in moonlight

above the ocean's mouth
the City Girl
glimpses infinity


grandfather's laugh
horseradish sauce
sliding down the drain


the family's loss . . .
painted in ash
on the fireman's brow


volcano top—
our breath stolen
by the island sunrise


socks soaked through
hot chocolate
by the fire


tabby cat purrs
the door to Nana's house
shut forever


hot sun and sand . . .
          I change
          the channel


midnight beach walk
my footprints bathed
in moonlight


sunny day barbeque
old friends
make new memories


old dog's innocent eyes:
on the linoleum
muddy footprints


beside the casket
     grandpa's tattered fishing hat


Valentine's day
she says I love you
to her father's grave

 

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