EN340 / IN350 Global Haiku Tradition
Dr. Randy Brooks
Spring 2004 |
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Mike Mays
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Watching
the Rain
by
Mike Mays
I
chose the title "watching the rain" for numerous
reasons. First of all it is mentioned in one of my haiku.
The main reason is that as soon as I read it, I instantly
become in a relaxed state. With that I hope that the people
who read my collection come in with an open and relaxed mind.
I feel that these haiku show more of a sensitive side of me
that most people do not usually see or know about. I hope
that reading through my collection, they will be able to get
a better understanding of the type of person that I really
am. That is the ultimate purpose for me selecting the ones
that I did. I hope that readers will see beyond the stereotype
of me. Granted this haiku collection does not totally express
me as a person. I just hope that people enjoy reading my haiku
and will gain a better understanding of Michael Mays.
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The
haiku of Michael Mays function on a plane that some people
should consider themselves lucky to experience. His writing
is fueled by a deep emotion, the benefits of companionship,
and above all, the many faces of love. He abstains from
senryu, a move that reiterates his obvious dedication to
topics of choice: true relationships are not meant to be
trivial.
under
the stars
I looked into her eyes
and saw her soul
In
this haiku, the traditional nature element in the first
line already introduces the scene with depth and exhilaration.
The next two lines follow and finish exactly as they shouldwith
intense emotion. The overt illustration of emotions does
not, of course, mean that Mays' haiku do not adhere to the
fundamentals of a good haiku, nor does it mean that he limits
himself solely to the topic of love. He's not being overly
sentimental. He's not trying to preach. He's just writing
how he feels, which, in a college environment, is relatively
refreshing.
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spring
love
holding hands
we kiss to the birds song
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summer
concert
our song
we danced under the stars
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Grandpa's
pictures
seeing myself
in his eyes
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spring
shower
I watch
the rain fall
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asleep
in my arms
numbness
worth the pain
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©2004 Randy Brooks, Millikin University, Decatur, Illinois || all rights reserved for original authors
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