EN340 / IN350 Global Haiku Tradition
Dr. Randy Brooks
Spring 2004
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MollyPufall
Molly Pufall

Haiku Story (song)

breakfast on the deck
by

Molly M. Pufall

I chose to title my collection "breakfast on the deck" because I feel it represents how I aim to live my life. I try to notice the small things and let those be indicative of true beauty, rather than large, bold in-your-face types of beauty. I am a nature girl—I really enjoy feeling drenched in nature, whether that be in rain and grass or dirt and sweat.  I like the carefree mood that is created by the title haiku. When I came to college, I had never had so many people tell me that I was the calmest and most relaxed person they met. I always perceived myself as uptight and anal, so I was pleasantly surprised to know I give off this "cool, calm and collected" vibe.   I love the simplicity of this haiku, and I feel that it gives good indication as to what readers will find in my whole collection.

For my collection, I tried to pick an array of haiku, rather than just stay with one theme.  I feel I am best represented with an assortment of different topics. I would consider the two most prominent topics of my haiku to be nature and human characteristics. I find that love and nature are two of the most vital elements to my well being. I try to write about the two topics from all angles; the good and the bad. Throughout the Global Haiku Traditions course, I have realized that camping every year with my family for two to three weeks every July has been more integral to my life that I could have ever imagined. I am most often inspired by memories or unforgettable images from those precious times in Northern Wisconsin. The Northwoods have a mystical effect on me that I try to capture in my poems. One of my personal favorites which was inspired by camping memories is the following:

glimmering waters
i glide to the island
kayaking alone   

There is a real brightness and sense of peace given off from this haiku. I get a serene feeling when reading this haiku. Although the person is alone, it is a good kind of alone. The kind of alone time that everyone in this world needs, but hardly anyone actually gets. Total rejuvenation is gained when reading this haiku.  

Another topic I like to focus on is human characteristics in relation to human relationships.  For example, focusing on just the eyes or just the hair.  Interestingly enough, these haiku often seem to be associated with love or dreamy notions. I find it striking to focus on one simple object or characteristic and let that be the spark that awakens the reader's senses. Here is one in which I focus on the hair, eluding to a notion of romanticism:

lingering scent of summer
in her tangled hair

And another in which I focus on the chest; however, subtle passion is evident in the poem:

his head on my chest
i drift to sleep

I enjoy these two because they zoom in on one human characteristic, while simultaneously incorporating nature and/or human relationships, my two most prominent themes. There is a story or explanation for every separate haiku in this collection and I would love to explain each one to every reader; however, I feel that would take away from the benefit of free interpretation. So in honor of that, I chose to explain simply three, while at the same time explaining what is important to me in not only haiku, but also my whole existence. I hope the readers of my collection are able to get a glimpse at who I am as well as find some personal identification.  I strive to live openly and honestly and want to convey nothing short of that through my haiku.

          —Molly


Reading Partner's Introduction

Molly Pufall has a way of transmitting the serenity and beauty of both nature and human nature through her haiku. The subtlety of each haiku carries her reader through all the senses. Two that I really enjoy are the following:

neck of the oak
layers of moss
blanket the bark

fingers laced
on the gazebo
we share a moondance

These haiku, like many others, display Molly Pufall's careful word selection, creating a wonderfully soothing and successful haiku.

          —Sylvia Hilton


breakfast on the deck
a small leaf
drifts into my cereal


first warm day
sandaled feet in grass
wedged in the unseen mud


morning stroll
peace between trees
away from the city


yellow daffodils
losing life
still the perfect gift


misty evening
my eyes swollen
one lover too many


Here are the lyrics to my haiku song. I had a friend, Dan Simpson, help me write the music and I set the haiku to it in what I thought was a creative and storytelling way.

Haiku Story

breakfast on the deck
a small leaf
drifts into my cereal

morning stroll
peace between the trees
away from the city

glimmering waters
i glide to the island
kayaking alone

around the cove
light is shed
on you

defined jaw
reflecting the angles
of your beauty

fingers laced
on the gazebo
we share a moondance


should i say it
wind changes direction
here goes


private corner
lakefront view
my pinky finds his . . .

©2004 Randy Brooks, Millikin University, Decatur, Illinois || all rights reserved for original authors