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WORN
SPARKLE
A collection of Haiku
by
Chris
Merritt
Edited with Nichole Johnson
Through
the use of seasonal elements in my haiku I have attempted to
contribute to the haiku community by incorporating nature into
the human elements of life. In the haiku in this collection,
I attempt to connect nature with life struggles. In some, the
human resourcefulness allows the subject of the haiku to persevere
through dedication and hard work, while in others the end result
is troublesome, with the individual giving in to hardship. Through
these haiku, I try to develop my feelings of success in life
which is built on prevailing through hardships and building
on them as lessons. Success comes from daily struggle, and it
is not handed to you. If it is handed to you, you actually have
received nothing. On the other hand, when lessons are not capitalized
on, the result will be failure. This is highlighted in my title
haiku:
the
elderly couple
worn by life
sparkle in each other's eyes
In
this haiku I represent success not merely as barriers avoided
in the journey, but as the actual journey itself, which connects
the two in the later years of their life
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Editor's
Introduction
In
selecting these haiku out of many possibile ones, we chose
ones in which the seasonal element combines with the human
element to bring out the beauty of haiku. In his writing,
Chris Merritt attempts to deal with the human struggle, and
successes and failures. His best haiku come when the reader
is able to understand the moment by connecting to it with
their own challenges in life. When the reader connects with
the haiku, he is able to add his own experiences to the haiku,
making them not only enjoy the haiku, but also become part
of it.
at
dinner
the silent couple
desperate for words
He
is able to convey a moment between two people that brings
discomfort. The reader can see this many ways. I see it two
ways: as either a word-down relationship that has long overextended
its time and the two are just too comfortable and therefore
unable to break it off, or I see it as a first date gone extremely
bad when all the excitement of the date has yeilded to the
fact that they are incompatible.
Nichole
Johnson
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