EN340
/ IN350 Global Haiku Tradition
Dr. Randy Brooks
Spring 2005 |
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WHAT
AN EXPERIENCE
A collection of Haiku
by
Matt
Tierney
The
title that I have chosen for this chapbook, What An Experience,
comes from everything I have done in this class for the entire
semester. I chose this title because as I was trying to point
out one specific thing that we did in class to inspire a great
title for this and to sound really creative, I found out that
everything we did in class was one of those specific things.
I couldnt just single out one of them, so I decided to
have a title that expresses my feelings about this Global Haiku
Traditions class. I have never really taken a poetry class before,
so I never really understood any of the many different forms
of poetry. By learning about haiku, writing them, snapping,
and having lots of fun in the process, this whole semester was
a great experience. And the whole semester of this class was
like a perfect haiku moment, because any haiku that I read from
this class or about this class instantly make me picture all
of the different things that we have done in class, the jokes
we have cracked, the awesome haiku that we have written and
listened to, and learning of a form of art that I never knew.
So that is why I chose this title. With the haiku and everything
else that I have put in here, there was no real criterion that
I used to see if one made the cut or not. I just read over everything
that I have written and if it sounded somewhat decent to me
I just threw it in here. So here are my haiku, so good and some
probably not so good.
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Reader's
Introduction
As
I have read through his work, he had some haiku, senryu, haibun,
and renga that werent so good. But since I havent
taken this class and I dont fully understand what it
takes to create such things, Ill give him credit. Some
of the haiku that he has written sound really good and produce
a very bright image to me. Like he stated in the above paragraph
he really didnt use any criterion to judge which one
made it in and which one didnt. And I tried to make
him take out the ones that sounded not so good, but sometimes
that just didnt work out. So enjoy the good ones and
please be patient with the bad ones. I know I enjoyed reading
this.
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at
the old orchard
sitting
under my favorite tree
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I
asked my uncle if he was ready for the baby on the
way. He told me that he knows it going to be a girl,
he just knows it. I asked if he picked out a name
yet for the daughter he knows he is going to have.
My uncle actually hasnt even thought much about
it yet, he instead is recruiting my brother and I
to watch out for her when she starts to bring boys
home. My uncle is so worried that he might mess up
at this whole father thing, but I tell him that no
matter what happens he is blessed and he will do a
great job.
coming
of new life
the worried father struggles
to find the perfect name
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steaming
corn on the cob
at the kitchen table
enjoying a fresh conversation
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Early
in the morning
People speak
In haiku tongue
Three line phrases
That tell so much
A story . . .
That brings you in
Only for a moment
After it's over
Everyone's thoughts are taken
To a different place
The emotions
Rush in
The sounds
Of
Haiku snaps
Matt
Tierney & Tony Lipka
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sitting
in silence
still . . .
so much noise
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©2005
Randy Brooks, Millikin University, Decatur, Illinois || all rights reserved
for original authors
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