IN203 Honors Seminar: Global Haiku Tradition
Dr. Randy Brooks • Spring 2006
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Loose Change
A collection of Haiku
by
Adam Stefo
This collection is dedicated to Stephanie Dietrich, a trusted friend
who was always willing to lend me a constructive ear.
Adam Stefo is a B.M. Vocal Performance major from St. Louis, MO. He likes to look at life through slightly different colored glasses. His haiku have been influenced by Wally Swist and George Swede. |
Introduction
When I think about my approach to writing haiku, I think about
how it has changed over the course of the semester. I began in
an outside-the-box, abstract mindset that appealed to me, but
not many others. I still like those haiku, but more for their
imagery, and not haikuness. I think a turning point
for me was discovering the connection between haiku, and Zen practices.
It made my work more concise and simple without as many elaborations
aside from just presenting the image without bias subjectivity.
I think that is where the heart of haiku lies, in its ability
to reach as many people as possible, it should present something
in the universe, and thus should be universal. A single author
should be able to touch people from all approaches of life.
The title for this collection comes from what I think is the
strangest haiku that I have written this semester. Instead of
giving you my two cents, I give you my Loose Change.
I think it speaks to my slightly skewed vision of life whether
it be through the more sentimental images, the ironic, or just
the strange. I hope you are able to enjoy the work I have provided
here. Because it is not what I think of my poetry that counts,
it is much more what you, the reader, are able to get from it;
a chuckle, a shed tear, and scathing look, or a warm swell. As
long as you allow not only my haiku, but all haiku to affect you,
and think about the images presented and the images it evokes
in you, then the haiku has been successful, whether or not it
contains cherry blossoms, chrysanthemums, or a pound and half
of pennies.
On the haiku for which this collection is titled, I cannot say
why this haiku has struck me so profoundly.
Jerry dies after eating
112 pennies on a dare
This is not the most dazzling example of haiku, but I think the
reason that I keep coming back to it is because of the line break.
I think it adds an element of suspense to the piece. What did
Jerry eat? Poison? Something he is allergic to? Pennies!? I think
for me it is this mindset that must be kept while reading my work.
I dont always go for the conventional, I dont aim
to make people uncomfortable, but it happens from time to time.
What I suggest to the reader is to leave any semblance of propriety
and manners at the door when you begin my collection and allow
the haiku to hit you with raw emotion and to read it over again
to see how many feelings arouse in you. Anger first. Then laughter?
Then
Adam Stefo
St. Louis, MO
Readers Introduction
One of my favorite things about both the haiku and personality
of Mr. Adam Stefo has always been his biting, cynical sense of
humor, and this collection does not disappoint. With unapologetic
bluntness, Adam points out some of lifes most pathetic members
in a way that, despite the nagging knowledge that youre
going to hell, makes you laugh anyway.
Adam has also shared with his readers another talent in haiku
which I find even more admirable. Within this collection, Adam
touches on some of lifes most vulnerable moments, from young
love to quiet moments of thought and being. Moreover, he has a
knack for finding the readers strongest heartstring and
plucking it with such intensity that this reader found herself
literally speechless on numerous occasions. With the same complete
honesty that makes his humorous haiku so funny, he presents these
more tender moments with such intimacy and frankness that the
emotions of that moment are transferred directly to the readers
own heart.
This collection is a deep look into some of lifes most
intimate moments, and whether Adams haiku invite you to
cry for them or point and laugh, you cant escape being shaken
up by them. So I beg the reader of this collection to quit dilly-dallying,
and get into the good stuff. I promise, it will be well worth
the time.
Stephanie Dietrich
Professional Gypsy
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I reach for her hand
she does not retreat
now what?
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buried in blankets
I watch the snow settle
on the sill
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bystanding with my family
a six foot penis
marches by
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once striking,
no longer after he
struck
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birds returning from the south
attack the old man
who fed them
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Jerry dies after eating
112 pennies on a dare
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the oak and I
sit
settling dew
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bathing with the television
flickering lights
abandoned kitten
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© 2006 Randy Brooks, Millikin University, Decatur, Illinois
all rights reserved for original authors
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