IN203 Honors Seminar: Global Haiku Tradition
Dr. Randy Brooks • Spring 2006
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Tomorrow Never Knows
Lennon/McCartney 1966
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turn off your mind
relax and float downstream
it is not dying
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lay down all thought
surrender to the void
it is shining
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that you may see
the meaning of within
it is being
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or love is all
and love is everyone
it is knowing
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Ive Just Seen a Face
Lennon/McCartney 1965
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Id have never been aware
but as it is
Ill dream of her
tonight
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shes just the girl for me
and I want all the world to see
weve met
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had it been another day
I might have looked
the other way
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Ive just seen a face
I cant forget the time or place
where we just met
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Across the Universe
Lennon/McCartney 1968
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pools of sorrow waves of joy
are drifting through my open mind
possessing and caressing me
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sounds of laughter shades of earth
are ringing through my open views
inciting and inviting me
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Because
Lennon/McCartney 1969
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because
the world is round
it turns me on
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because
the wind is high
it blows my mind
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because
the sky is blue
it makes me cry
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Happiness is a Warm Gun
Lennon/McCartney 1968
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lying with his eyes
while his hands are busy
working overtime
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a soap impression of his wife
which he ate and donated
to the national trust
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the man in the crowd
with the multi-colored mirrors
on his hobnail boots
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Shes well acquainted with
the touch of a velvet hand
like a lizard on a window pane
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Its Only Love
Lennon/McCartney 1965
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I get high
when I see you
go by my
oh my
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when you sigh
my my inside
just flies butterflies
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is it right
that you and I
should fight every
night
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just the sight
of you makes
nighttime bright very
bright
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Im Only Sleeping
Lennon/McCartney 1966
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keeping an eye
on the world going by
my window
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Ive Got a Feeling
Lennon/McCartney 1970
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Ive got a feeling
a feeling deep inside
oh
yeah
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Long Long Long
Harrison 1968
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its been a long time
how could I ever have lost you
when I loved you?
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She Said She Said
Lennon/McCartney 1966
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she said, I know
what its like
to be dead
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Good Morning, Good Morning
Lennon/McCartney 1967
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Ive got
nothing to say
but its ok
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Everybodys Got Something to Hide Except
Me and my Monkey
Lennon/McCartney 1968
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everybodys got something
to hide except for
me and my monkey
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The varied writing and lyrical styles of the Beatles make for
an interesting group of haiku that are able to reference and
draw from several different traditions of regions, genres, and
generations of the Japanese haiku tradition. The constant reinvention
of the Beatlesfrom their pop rock Please Please Me
phase, to their psychedelic Sergeant Peppers Lonely
Hearts Club Band period, all the way to the heavy jazz and
rock stylings that closed out their Let It Be episodeparallels
the continuous changes made in the concepts and contributions
to haiku.
Dont Pass Me By
Starkey 1968
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you were in a car crash
and you lost
your hair
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on the mantel shelf
I see the hands a moving
but Im by myself
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coming up the drive
listen for your footsteps
but they dont arrive
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Old Brown Shoe
Harrison 1969
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I want a love thats right
right is only half
of whats wrong
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I want a short-haired girl
who sometimes wears it
twice as long
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While John and Paul were the most prolific writers of the four,
the songs of George Harrison and Ringo Starr are not without
their own charm. The two teamed up on several occasions to produce
their own work outside the shadow of the juggernaut that was
Lennon/McCartney.
Though Ringo has several songs credited to him, Dont
Pass Me by is a piece that was written by Starr completely
solo. His lyrics are and simplistic and playful to the point
of being absurd and nonsensical at times. The latter two haiku
transcribed from Starrs work depict the anxiety and impatience
in waiting for his lover to come home from possible shady dealings,
as is the focus of Dont Pass Me By. The first haiku
is then the unveiling that the narrator is wrong in his assumptions
and his lovers tardiness is due to a supposed car accident
however the reference to the unbelievable result of a
car crash being the loss of the victims hair, maybe an indication
that she is lying. Beyond his simply rhyme scheme and odd lyrics,
there may be a surprising depth to Ringos Work
Though the number of songs written by guitar virtuoso George
Harrison is small, what he lacks in quantity he definitely makes
up for in quality. Harrison was very critical of his own work,
so much so that after writing While My Guitar Gently Weeps
and finding he was unable to play lead guitar and sing simultaneously,
and not trusting McCartney or Lennon to play the part to his
standards, unbeknownst to the rest of the Beatles, he made a
deal with friend Eric Clapton to stand in and play lead guitar.
The image presented in the above haiku from Old Brown Shoe,
present paradoxical images which, I feel, indicate the time
he put into his work and the enjoyment he derived from it
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Blackbird
Lennon/McCartney 1968
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blackbird singing
in the dead of night
take these broken wings
and learn to fly
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blackbird singing
in the dead of night
take these sunken eyes
and learn to see
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The difficult aspect of drawing haiku from a song is the lyrics
tendency to be even in an effort to adhere to a specified meter
and rhyme scheme. These factors usually lead to an even number
of lines when being transcribed; and, while a two or a four
line haiku is acceptable, I felt it was too easy and opened
the door for any song lyric to be passed off under the guise
of the Japanese art form. While, some Beatles songs easily made
the transition, other chose not to go so quietly.
Blackbird is an example of the latter. I originally
assumed that a great deal of the evenness that resulted from
the Beatles lyrics came from the even time signatures;
nearly all of the Fabs songs are written in 4/4 time,
while a few are in 2/4 time. I set out in search of a song that
had an odd time signature, finally setting for Blackbird
which is written in multi-meter (the signatures range from 3/4
- which is odd to standard and cut times which
are even).
The constant shifts only made it harder to distinguish between
line breaks in the lyrics alone, and nearly impossible to transform
the words into a three-line haiku. Having such a strange rhythmic
pattern, Im surprise that the song is backed and driven
by the metronomic cadence of a floor tom, yet, Im unable
to break the lyrics down any further than they already have.
So, above lay the tattered, little remains of what nearly became
a pair of Blackbird haiku four lines in each.
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Mother Natures Son
Lennon/McCartney 1968
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all day long
Im sitting singing songs
for every one
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listen to
the pretty sound of music
as she flies
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swaying daisies
sing a lazy song
beneath the sun
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This 1968 piece, written and sung by Paul McCartney made possibly
the smoothest transition of any of the Beatles songs into
the world of haiku in both form and content. Aside from fitting
very well into the tradition of the three-line haiku, these
lyrics also perpetuate the naturalistic themes and elements
often associated with the haiku art form. All the pieces above
are clearly depicting summer; the cheerful and carefree attitude
is one typical of the late summer months, when the rebirth of
spring is still an awe-inspiring sight, but one which we have
grown accustomed to over time.
The playfulness of the poems also make them extremely appealing,
despite the fact that the actual instrumentation and rhythm
isnt quite as bouncy as the lyrics would lead you to assume.
The alliteration of sitting singing songs and the
midline half-rhyme of daisies and lazy
add to the very lighthearted feel of the haiku.
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Book of Haikus, pg 69
Jack Kerouac
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Me, youyou, me
Everybody
He-he
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I am the Walrus 1967
Lennon/McCartney
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I am he as you are he hahaha
as you are me and hehehe
we are all together hohoho
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The blatancy of the similarities between this haiku by Kerouac
and the song I am the Walrus by The Beatles verges
on eerie. The song, having been written just two years prior
to Kerouacs death in 1969, could have conceivably been
written based on this haiku. The situation would not have been
completely unheard of, as the Beatles song Golden Slumbers
was inspired by a poem of the same title by Thomas Dekker, McCartney
quoting the poem almost verbatim in his song. However, in a
1980 interview with Playboy, John Lennon (though the
song is credited to Lennon/McCartney because of a longstanding
contractual agreement between the two and record executives,
the song is mainly the brainchild of Lennon) confessed, The
first line was written on one acid trip one weekend. The second
line was written on the next acid trip the next weekend.
The laughter included on the end of The Beatles haiku appears
later in the song, following the lyric, Expert texpert,
choking smokers, dont you think the joker laughs at you?
The lyrics parallel nicely with the He-he that concludes Kerouacs
haiku, but also add a feeling of euphoric (possibly drug-induced)
enlightenment, as was intended by the use of the laughter that
concludes George Harrisons Indian-inspired 1967 piece,
Within You Without You.
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A Haibun Composed of the Journals of the Beatles Late
Manager, Brian Epstein:
I secured them an audition at DECA on New Years Day, 1962.
They came to London and stayed at The Royal Hotel paying twenty-seven
shillings a night for bed and breakfast. They were poor and
I wasnt rich, but we all celebrated with rum, and scotch,
and coke which was become a Beatles drink even then.
Well, the recording desk came and went:
The people who decide about these things at DECA said no. Well,
you can image I was more worried about what I was going to say
to the boys having built up there hopes. So, I allowed myself
a final twenty-four hours to exhaust the remaining disc companies,
and I booked into The Greenpark Hotel. In the morning, I took
a cab to the EMI office block in Manchester Square, London to
meet the man who would, within less than two years, produce
sixteen number-one discs by my artists.
incipient buds
the blooms of success
await the spring
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I Am the Walrus
Lennon/McCartney 1967
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sitting in an
english garden
waiting for the sun
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if the sun dont come
you get a tan from standing
in the english rain
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English Tea
McCartney 2005
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miles and miles
of
english garden
stretching
past
the willow tree
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The above haiku are drawn from The Beatles 1967 piece
I Am the Walrus, and Paul McCartneys English
Tea, a song released on Chaos and Creation in the Backyard,
his twentieth and most recent solo album on which McCartney
has written every song and plays nearly every instrument. Its
just a simple comparison of the imagery that is still present
throughout the works of the Beatles, whether is it through mere
creative happenstance or actual allusions to their past works.
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© 2006 Randy Brooks, Millikin University, Decatur, Illinois
all rights reserved for original authors
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