Photo Haiku Matching Contest Favorites • Spring 2006
museum marble, |
sitting in a museum |
Wal-Mart price tag |
swept up shavings |
museum marble, |
Wal-Mart price tag |
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top quarter champion = Wal-Mart price tag |
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top half champion = simply |
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bottom quarter champion = simply |
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she waited |
simply |
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she waited |
thoughts of childhood |
simply Faith Martin |
clearing the cobwebs |
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top half champion = simply
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grand champion = unreachable light
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bottom half champion = unreachable light
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sunlight through Rick Bearce |
seeing it's beauty Traci Rapp |
a lone chair Sarah Corso |
unreachable light Andrew Barnick |
sunlight through |
unreachable light |
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top quarter champion = unreachable light |
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bottom half champion = unreachable light |
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bottom quarter champion = an empty chair |
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emptiness |
an empty chair |
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world of extremes |
emptiness |
an empty chair Allison Lingren |
alone . . . I sit |
commentaries
A lone chair |
unreachable light |
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I paired these two together because of the tortured feeling both of these entail. The first accentuates the awaiting torture of a human, and the second portrays the current pain of the chairs perspective. Both have a looming sense of claustrophobia that makes the reader very uncomfortable and anxious. After I read these haiku I just wanted to bounce around because of how constrained they both made me feel. I really liked how effective both of these haiku were. Jamie |
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© 2006, Randy Brooks Millikin University
All rights returned to authors upon publication.