Haiku Attempts 1 - Haiku Edit Alternatives
Global Haiku--Haiku to Edit 1 Results, Spring 2007
ice storm— ice storm— Keith Chandler |
warm nights warm night |
blanket cuddling with Mom blanket |
family tea family tea family tea family tea war refugee camp |
little girls little girl sunshine girl flower girl flower girls |
sit in grandpa sits in funeral home |
cold nose melted water up the drive wet nose puddles on drive |
a bent cigarette a stale cigarette bent cigarette a stressed mother |
mom awake before all mom is first to rise last one up . . .
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the log cabin Grandma’s log cabin old log cabin the cabin loft the cabin loft the cabin loft late night secrets log cabin a log cabin late night whispers log cabin log cabin in the log cabin cold log cabin |
Hackettstown Hackettstown Hackettstown pool
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layers on top of layers legs in motion layers upon layers
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Sunday dinner still summer evening Sunday dinner Sunday dinner Sunday dinner sunday dinner |
another recess lost another recess another recess another recess lost another recess lost inside |
orchid hanging purple the only orchid bloom that low hanging
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In bed in bed in bed late night Movie in their beds in bed late night movie |
she packs the snow tight she packs the snow she packs the snow
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Storms approach rain drops
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swimming in the pond swimming in the pond backstroke in the pond |
I bundle up like crazy, I bundle up I bundle up
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sideways glance stolen glance my stolen glance sideways glance sideway glance a sideways glance stolen glance first date |
a moonlit path young lovers new couple
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clank clank my heels on the brick path clank clank my heels on brick Click Clunk my heels on brick giggling together my heels on brick
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her breath dances her breath her breath danced cold air new snow sledding hill smoke rings |
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