Haiku Kukai 2 - Childhood & Coldness Favorites
Global Haiku • Millikin University • Spring 2009
two glasses of wine Bill Ryan (8) I imagine a woman sitting down to a fancy dinner in her dining room set with one plate, yet two glasses of wine. She is wearing a classy, black dress and an elegant necklace that glints in the candlelight. The smell of wine and food diffuses into the air. Though the room is silent, the woman’s memories are alive with the sounds of laughter, of yelling, of kissing, and of whispered “I love you”’s. After she finishes her meal, the woman savors her glass of wine while cherishing her lost beloved. Natalie I love the solemn image that this haiku presents. A woman remembers her dead husband on their special day. It sounds as if the death is fairly fresh and this is the first anniversary afterwards. She is still paying homage to their life together by recognizing this day, instead of choosing to ignore it. I like the contrast of the words celebrate and widow, one would not usually associate those two, something happy and something sad. My Dad recently passed away unexpectedly, and I can picture my Mom doing the same thing on their anniversary. It’s a sentimental tear jerker. Jennifer This haiku brings sadness to my heart, but I can completely visualize it. I see an old woman sitting in front of the fireplace. She has an empty seat next to her and on the table there are two wine glasses. I can see her drinking her wine and dumping his, and I can also see herself not drinking any wine because she doesn’t want her husband to feel left out. I always tell my husband that I hope nothing ever happens to him because I don’t know how I would ever get over it. I love him so much, and I think this is exactly the type of thing I would do. I feel it is perfectly written, and I just love it. Emily |
block by block |
he mirrors my movements Sierra Shaw (4) I like this haiku for a couple of reasons. Aside from being comical, it is a great expression of a first date. It shows the thoughts of one person in the situation, although they are probably not far off from the other person’s. She is paying close attention to his movements and seeing how he reacts to her. Is he into her? Is he not? Is he giving me a sign? Am I into him? These are all things I see her asking herself, while thrust deep into conversation, and it is something that we all do in this type of situation. Furthermore, the fact that she is referring her observations back to what she remembers from cosmo is an excellent representation of the modern woman in our society. Bill |
among charred remains |
anxiously awaiting... |
first funeral Jennifer Godwin (3) It makes a funeral a fashion event. But first funerals always are. Never know how to act. Hector This haiku brings a sad moment and brings it with a funny vision of a child in a suit that is way to big. Many people don’t understand death and funerals when they are younger and when we are younger. I didn’t really know the man that died at my first funeral. I remember feeling weird because everyone was sad, and looking at this man that was unmoving, but looked like a person. I think that a first funeral is a scary and memorable experience. I like how this haiku has a little comedic vision inside this other scary experience. Lizzy |
broken down chevy |
in the sand box |
sunset Brandy Bockewitz (3) |
blinding morning snow Sierra Shaw (4) My boyfriend always does this! A scraper is like what, maybe two bucks, but yet we fight over just one. It becomes quite irritating in the mornings when I have somewhere to be and I cannot find my scraper anywhere, but do notice he already left…great haiku; I relate to it personally. Brandy |
morning quiet… |
etched in frost |
single rose |
shot my eye out LIzzy Kelly (4) |
crescent moon |
fire trucks LIzzy Kelly |
regenerated Frosty |
snow becomes Jennifer Godwin (5) |
inauguration Christa Hunt (3) |
untouched snow LIzzy Kelly (4) |
breathless |
blasting cold air LIzzy Kelly (2) |
lovers embrace |
piling up |
an awkward breakfast |
summer reading |
broken down chevy |
blue moon |
mountainous snowdrift Jennifer Godwin |
sweet dreams |
retreat from the snow |
a hobo in the underpass |
summer rain Emily Weible I enjoyed this haiku because I can just imagine a young boy and girl running and jumping towards the puddles together. Or even the little boy pulling the girl along to jump in the puddles. It also reminds me of a beginning of a relationship where stuff like that is cute and not an annoyance to one another. Lyndsay |
a single star |
numbing fingers |
forgotten drawer Sierra Shaw (6) |
stroke of midnight Billy Seeger (2) |
alone on Valentine’s Day |
playing hide-and-seek |
Daddy’s turn |
revealed body |
lost love |
Facebook message |
I sprinkle salt |
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