In-class Intuitive Renku 1
(without guided instruction on linking strategies)
Global Haiku • Millikin University • Spring 2010
mountin top rb reaching for the sandwich ja a snail ruined gd lunch break sw crunchy peanut butter, tl a sweeter taste ob a heart note in my lunch kt a note from mom bs pb & J always nb for dinner ac tummy ache, rb Randy Brooks |
SNAILS home KT into the dark KT have I had OB towards Mt. Fuji BS yellow caution lights, TL full car, GO temple shrine AC tracking towards the mountain NB honking RB seeking refuge JA thunderstorm SW Kari Thorton |
snails -Nathan walnut shells trail -Aubrey spider web -Dr. Brooks that hits the spot- -Jade a gray beast -Susie pilgrims, -Grant small boat -Tyler nearing the shore -Olivia a gray peak -Kari miles of ocean -Becky across the sea -Nathan Nathan Bettenhausen |
the ink tears run down cheek blue sky home again with a bottle of wine candlelit meal fast food she orders “same as him” empty seat she blows out the candle Becky Smith
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foggy morning a Beatles song wishful thinking daydreams in the grass I think of her, potential pages, new start blank mind and 1st day of spring blank pages filled poem left Aubrie Cox |
her rose tattoo -ob water washes -kt a hidden rose tattoo -bs in the shower -nb kitchen table -ac rose petals black -rb afternoon quarrel -ja my lawyer fights -sw he took half -gd foregoing feelings -tl forget the china -ob Olivia Birkey |
tattoo parlor s.w. g.d. As I pump o.b. the look k.t. He suffered for years b.s. tattoo reminds me n.b. garden overgrown a.c. scratching my back r.b. backyard memories j.a. out back, in black s.w. Susie Wirthlin |
birthday Garret Susie Randy birthday cake-- Aubrie another year Grant? Your birthday candles Tyler? Presents for you Becky gift wrap on floor Kari? |
no longer wed ja every day sw plastic surgery gd as I buy, tl material things ob money can't filll the hole kt I get dressed bs writing on my shoulder nb writing my memoirs ac so much to say rb so many questions ja Jade Anderson |
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