Global Haiku Tradition--Tan-Renga 2014
(write capping verses for at least 3 of these)
sitting on the rooftop sitting on the rooftop Looking back on life sitting on the rooftop sitting on the rooftop sitting on the rooftop |
the pastor's sermon the pastor's sermon Lent offerings Lent offerings lent offerings |
homeless man homeless man I like this cap because it is simple and makes complete sense. It was cold the day that the man was sleeping on the bus, and the warm bus was surely better than the streets. However, I am sure the man would greatly enjoy a warm quiet house with a bed he could lie on. It is unfortunate that we have homelessness in this country, but the American Dream is never out of reach. Aaron homeless man homeless mane homeless man homeless man |
the frail man the frail man the frail man the frail man
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the frail man the frail man the frail man |
wrong time wrong time wrong time This cap is extremely funny to me. I picture unknowing parents walking down the street with their children. A few beads get thrown at mom’s feet, but she thinks nothing of it. Then, they turn a corner and the children are met with a topless woman. The little boy stares not knowing whether to laugh, stare, cry, or run. The parents finally understand and are quite upset by their decision to take part in Mardi Gras! Aaron |
all I feel singing our song cool spring morning shotgun in hand, |
the shower— the shower— I love how fun this haiko cap is! As the author of this haiku, I am definitely the philosopher, but usually I simply think about things in my mind. Whoever capped my work, thought that I talk out loud in the shower! I picture myself using the bar of soap as a microphone and presenting my thoughts to an attentive audience. It is a great interpretation and I will consider trying it out! Aaron the shower— the shower— the shower— |
x-box Her screams are followed x-box x-box |
I run my hands Rain leaks rhythmically I run my hands I run my hands
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I run my hands I run my hands I run my hands I run my hands |
snow day snow day snow day a blanket of snow snow day snow day |
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